Xiaotu Continent

After reading it, let's make a book review Let's take our time and talk about the title and introduction first. The title of the book is pretty good! But something about the introduction seems wrong, "Because she was 'dead'" is a bit weird... Then there is the characterization. Lu Sheng is probably a relatively common character, and Luo Li is the kind of elegant and intellectual little beauty, which is very good. Hehe... The characterization can't be seen because of the few words. In short, the author should use more words! As for the content and plot, I was wondering if the plot would develop too fast? This... Feels like the male protagonist confessed his love to the female protagonist at the beginning, which seemed a bit abrupt. This should be changed. Finally, the world view and other settings are very creative! I can't find any faults, and I hope the author can take his own unique path~ In short, the book is still good, but there are some places that can be changed. Come on💪 strive to become better!

😢No more, you have let down our 11 investors and 5 fans who gave us rewards. Goodbye 🙂

The author should update quickly! Otherwise my investment will be gone 😭

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Why isn't it on the shelves yet? , Not enough 😁

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Thanks for the recommendation vote of The Dream of Tears of Rain. This is the first chapter of the second volume of the new update for you. It is also the official introduction to the world of swords and magic. There will be some introductions to the characters and the world view in the early stage. I hope you can read it patiently, and I also hope to get encouragement from more people.

Today, the new chapter system recommended me a new book investment (crazy hint). Although I don't know who invested first, I still want to thank him.

Come on, I'm investing in you 😁😁😁

Didn't you say there are anti-fans? What about people?