Kill Ming

Let me share my opinion and summarize that chapter. In fact, it is better not to write it. The biggest problem is that it uses a lot of relatively uncommon idioms and words. There are too many words to describe the scenery and the image of the protagonist. It looks very tiring. If the boy is the protagonist, the author must directly write the name of the boy, otherwise it will make people start to read. In the end, I feel that it cannot be substituted. It is best to mention the names of the people known to the protagonist directly. If you use boys and girls instead of one chapter, it is extremely poisonous. The focus should be on the plot. One or two modifiers for exaggeration are enough, and it is best to have gaps. Readers will not be able to stand such words if they are too many.