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Brother, come on, fire tongs Liu Ming

Is it a first-person novel? It's a test of your skills.

To be honest with you, I am just an ordinary programmer with poor writing skills and no writing style. But when people reach the age of 35, the mid-life crisis comes, and others don't want people of my age to work overtime and code, because it's easy to get into trouble. So I decided to start learning to write. But writing cannot be based on old age. Just like now, primary schools have begun to teach network programming, and many children have begun to use PYTHON to make their own games, but I can only understand a little bit. Now I am posting daily updates on the platform, not seeking to make money or become famous. I just hope that all the great book lovers out there can take the time to come here and complain. Tell me what I didn't write well, or what I need to change to make the sentences smoother and more reasonable. I do promotion for no other reason than to use it as tuition to seek advice from the great masters. Now I will probably fail to pass my essays when submitted to primary school classes. My lord, times have changed! And I can't keep up with the changes of the times. I can only take time out every day to study hard. You may not believe it, but today I went to Baidu to ask questions like "Why should articles be divided into paragraphs?" Finally, I would like to thank you all for your support and those who took the initiative to vote for me. Really, thank you, thank you, thank you. Say important things three times!

In this change, we only sorted out the main idea of ​​the paragraph and reorganized it into sections to facilitate the reading experience of book lovers. As for the sorting out of the plot and the adjustments to language organization that I mentioned before, I will deal with and make unified changes when it reaches 100,000 words. I will also explain the problems discovered during this cleanup here, which can be regarded as a small preview of subsequent changes. First, the chapters are loose, there is no plot development, and many chapters are even broken. Second, the main idea of ​​the article is not highlighted, which makes the whole novel seem incompatible with the main idea of ​​my novel. And I like to fool around there alone, without considering the feelings of my book friends at all. Third, too many character monologues cause reading fatigue. Fourth, in the following chapters, too many characters appear, making it appear that these characters are purely fictional and useless. Fifth, the most important point is that the word "cool" is not reflected, which makes book friends burst into tears and abandon the book. The first full-length revision after 100,000 words will be adjusted closely based on the above five points. At last. Thank you all book friends for your support and encouragement!

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