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The writing is so good, don't be a eunuch! ! ! If you were a eunuch, I would definitely send you the blade. Full order now! ! !
A few suggestions, family advice, the author makes it himself, good text setting, must add some messy things, write in a normal routine, and it can still be written, but after writing tens of thousands of words, the messy setting started, it would be strange if you don't supervise it. I feel that the protagonist is like a lunatic, pretending to be low-level, and there is no excitement or sense of substitution in the later part. It is definitely a hit, and the beginning is actually quite exquisite. Yes, the slap-in-the-face scene is fine, but I won't watch it for a few chapters. It's directly set in a parallel world. There are no realistic audio-visual works. The protagonist just pretends to be cool and slaps him in the face. He has to say that it's not his work. He sings four songs and asks others to ask the original author to authorize it. It seems stupid. When I looked at it, I thought, if there is an idiot later and claims that it is his own original work, the protagonist has not registered anyway, so I will die of embarrassment. There are also scenes of daughters. To be honest, many people don't like nanny dads. Not everyone likes to spend money to see how others take care of their daughters. Daddy stories are very niche and basically the same, because children of a few years old only have those tricks, eating, crying, pretending to be cute, and pretending to be pitiful. These things have no appeal, except for this There is nothing to write about. It would be better for a teenage child, because she has more thoughts and can expand more plots, and the quirky setting is more attractive. The more popular TV series Pi, My Physical Education Teacher, One Master and Two Servants, the daughter's scenes in them are more exciting, you can refer to them. It depends on the author. In many urban novels, after the protagonist gives birth to a child, many readers abandon the book. Forget it, that's all.