Dragon Ball: The Strongest Cultivation

I once doubted whether the author had ever watched Dragon Ball. The beginning was set when Goku was about to get married. The data I gave Krillin was 20 years old at the time. In the plot, Krillin was 13 years old when he first participated in the martial arts tournament. After that, it was held every three years. When he was 19, he had already participated in the third martial arts tournament (the one Piccolo participated in). At that time, Krillin's air dance, turtle skills You already know how to send qigong, but you made Klin unable to release qigong waves at the beginning but could use the dance skill skillfully. Similarly, the Garin Tower had already been climbed before participating in the third martial arts conference, and the person under the tower did not prevent others from approaching the Garin Tower, but acted like a tour guide, introducing the Garin Tower to others and guiding the martial arts masters who came to challenge the Garin Tower. Now that you have made up your mind to write it, why can't you even relive the plot of Dragon Ball Memories? All the information you need to confirm is based on random guesses?

Krillin is not a pure Earthling. He has no nose.

In fact, I really like Klin, and I also like the original CP. As for Klin, one size .18 Is enough. It's not a harem story. Why do you find so many women? It doesn't even appear a few times.

The improvement in the early stage is too fast. It is understandable that the author wants to get through the early stage quickly, but many settings are not rigorous enough. For example, the potential is only mentioned in one stroke, and it is only explained that it will improve with the improvement of strength. The only thing that can be considered outstanding is that it has a hint of the flavor of the original work. However, whether Wukong's potential is high-level and the protagonist is super-speed at the beginning, or the handling of various things, it all has the flavor of a novel. The combination of the two gives people a strange feeling. The advantage of the plot is that it can quickly get out of the comfort zone, which is the plot of the original work. But the author made something that I think is a big taboo among Dragon Ball fans, and that is Goku! Goku's expressiveness and presence are too low. That's Goku, the first Super Saiyan in Dragon Ball! Even facing the God of Destruction, everyone said that if it was Goku, it would definitely work! Wukong and Piccolo have made extremely low progress in five years. I think it has something to do with their horizons. Limits are meant to be broken. But when Goku and Piccolo became the most powerful people on earth, there was no way out. They didn't know how strong they could become. This is the most useful benchmark. Of course, I only saw the princess chapter and was persuaded to quit. The arrangements after returning to the earth are not clear, but I think that in terms of the early processing of Goku, I venture to say that I don't understand Dragon Ball. Emotionally, it's also very strange. I've decided that I haven't even had any contact with No. 18 Since I traveled back in time? Just met the princess once and fell in love? I would like to ask again, the author should not be very old... The author's cheating is too obvious. There is no chance that a Dragon Ball fanfic will have a second female protagonist. One is that the style of painting is wrong, and the other is that the control is not good. My suggestion is that the author cut off the relationship. From the current point of view, the author forced the protagonist to like the two heroines. In the original work, Klin was indeed attracted by sex, but a few years were skipped in the original work. Klin and 18 reappeared already married. This period of time is the time when their real feelings appeared. People can be attracted by sex, but they can't just say "I want it" when they see a beautiful girl. That's just a child. If the author doesn't grasp it well, the emotional line will be cut off. But judging from this comment, I guess the author is also using love to generate electricity. Come on!

Is dual heroine... Very different from a harem?

When I saw there was a harem, I slipped away.

Harem, for those like me who hate harems, you don't have to read it. A harem in a monogamous world? And there's also a number 18, so I'm convinced

I finally found a Dragon Ball fanfic that I haven't read yet, but it was systematic and slipped away!

When I saw the title, I thought it was a bullshit, but I didn't expect it to be rubbish and lack of imagination.

Is this protagonist a fool? Did you fall in love without even meeting each other on the 18th? This is just a desire, and the protagonist can't walk when he sees a beautiful woman, right?