Devouring Heaven and Demonic Rebellion

I hope all book friends can give me some advice.

Come, come, come, big little cutie✌

I have finished revising the first chapter and will start revising my own work in the next few days.

Come on, let's stay together for the new coupleᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑

The book is pretty good, why has no one read it? . Then I will be the first to comment and add it 😂

There are some common newcomer problems. The first is to divide it into paragraphs. It is recommended that each paragraph should be within three or five lines, otherwise it will be uncomfortable for readers. Then there's the plot and writing. If you want to write a good online article seriously, then study other people's articles, sort out the characters' dialogues, etc., And then come up with a good plot. That's all I can say, anyway, come on

A very good book, please share it

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Introduction: Poisoned to death, it is better to write. Obtain an unknown wooden coffin and start the legendary road.