Checking In at Perfect World

I feel the protagonist spoils the little one too much; it's uncomfortable to watch, like he's treating him like a dog. He doesn't resemble the future Desolate Emperor at all, being pampered and protected like a son by the protagonist. I hope the author sees this and makes some minor improvements; I think it would be much better.

I really love Dong Ge's "Perfect World," but I couldn't find any fanfiction, so I had the idea to write my own. And to my surprise, I found some today! The author writes very well, keep it up! 💪 And author, did you publish this book on Qidian? I haven't seen you posting on Qidian.

I discovered a fanfiction book about Perfect World 😁

The protagonist is just a simp; he gives all the good stuff to the little one instead of using it himself. Stupid! With such a powerful system, why doesn't he just prove himself?

After glancing at the introduction, I'd like to argue: His Transformation of Freedom is a unique Immortal Emperor technique created by Shi Hao. It seems that no one else can use it except him. The Word of Movement Secret is just a Supreme Technique. Even an Immortal can evolve time without becoming a Supreme. Sigh, is this how it is now?

Could you please write less about the female lead? The main character is only ten years old, okay? And have you forgotten the desolate figure of Number Ten walking alone? The female lead is completely useless; she's just a burden.

This is a completely abandoned novel; there isn't even a single female lead.

This is the end; the author has given up.

Everyone knows that Shi Hao traveled back in time and left behind many remains. So, which came first, the wasteland or the stone village?

I still prefer the invincible protagonist setting in Perfect World. Because there are just too many plot holes. You could say that many of the major plot holes in Perfect World were filled in by fanfiction authors using their own imaginations. Most importantly, without the strength of someone at the top of the pyramid, you simply can't access those things.