The Little Sword Fairy Under One Person

I have read twenty chapters and would like to share my opinions. I also hope that the author can go further and not use eunuchs. Not to mention whether the author's writing style is good or not, at least it is readable. The content is also light-hearted and matches the original style very well. There are also a lot of original plots, which are worthy of praise. If there are no original plots and main lines, then I will still read Mao Fanren. Isn't it good to just read comics? It's just that the writing technique is a bit raw, and he must be a new writer. For example, in the first chapter or the second picture, the first person suddenly pops up and the drama comes out. There are very few fanfics written by one person. I read one before and it felt like a running account. This one has too many prequels. The story of the protagonist's childhood can be written as a side story. The main story can be told in Spring and Autumn style. The most important thing for a comic book fanfic is the passion and fighting, right? A beggar can complete a short story. In the end, there are a lot of typos. The free chapters are okay, but if you get into the habit and later sign up for paid chapters and there are a lot of typos, then you will most likely have to pounce, so the author should review it more before posting. Above!

I was wondering if there are any other novels about being under one person. I'm still not satisfied and want to read others.

Finally found a fanfic of Under One Person that I can read. After reading Under One Person before, I wanted to look for anyone who wrote fan stories. It turned out that most of them were Long Aotian or eunuchs, and the number was very small. Let's not talk about the writing style of Little Sword Fairy. We are not qualified to evaluate the writing style. But I feel that the author has written two very important points. The first is cultivation. The most important thing is to check out a lot of information, write it with nose and eyes, and have no sense of separation from the original work. Only by reading it and having a taste can you feel refreshed. The second is the characters. I think the most distinctive feature of Under One Person is each character's personality and style of doing things. The cynical old man, the tear-jerking emotions of the older generation, the friendship of the younger generation, and the smooth emotional drama. Because this is a fan novel, and it is created by one person, not the studio that created the original comic, so we cannot take care of too much, and we may not be able to write everything in detail. But the characters of the male protagonist and the master are now very vivid. The master's lust and the protagonist's physical and mental growth are also integrated into the background world under one person without jumping out, which is very beautiful. And so far we haven't seen any bad points, it's just that there are few chapters, cough cough. I hope the author can stick to it, and the style must not change, and not act too hastily. Perhaps some impatient book friends think that progress is slow, but you must think about the future of books. Being anxious will only lose its flavor and completely fall into the lower class. There is no doubt that one person is a minority, so I hope the author can stick to his own rhythm and not be faster or slower because of others. In the end, he will only suffer the loss. Come on♥🤓Also, pin it to the top and add a comment

First of all, the thunder method It can be seen that the thunder method must require the accumulation of five qi, the yang energy of the heart and lungs, and the yin energy of the liver and kidneys. The first half of the thunder method is the five yang thunders. After the yang thunder is completed, the second half can be practiced, which is the part where the yang energy drives the yin energy and the five energy energy accumulates into one. After the completion of Yang Lei, it doesn't matter if you lose your virginity. This is why all three generations of Zhang Chulan's family have practiced Lei Dharma. Other people of the same age are basically the fourth generation. The Zhang family is naturally slower because it requires the completion of Yang Lei before men and women can have sex. Moves are just a means of moving Qi. Both Yin and Yang thunder can be used. Just because Yin and Yang Lei have their own characteristics, in order to "use one's own strengths to attack the enemy's weaknesses", in order to carry forward the characteristics, a move was created. This characteristic is caused by the characteristics driven by "Yin Qi" and "Yang Qi". Can Yang Lei use Yin Lei's moves? Able. Zhang Chulan's Little White Insect is similar to Zhang Lingyu's You Hailei. Can Yin Lei use Yang Lei's moves? Able. Zhang Lingyu's palm thunder imitates Yang Lei's palm thunder. After Lei Fa finished speaking, Zhang Lingyu and Xia He came next. This picture shows that Zhang Lingyu met Xia He when he was at least in adolescence, before learning the thunder method. Also, the first point is that Xia He only needs to use her "rest muscles" to charm people, and Xia He is born with it, and she can't control it herself. The second point is that at least Shen Chong knew about the relationship between Xia He and Zhang Lingyu. Based on the context, the person who watched the battle with Xia He before was probably Shen Chong. Later, Shen Chong also joined Zhang Lingyu and Xia He to fight against the alien who wanted to destroy Quan Xing. It seems that at least Shen Chong and Xia He are on the same front to some extent. And Xia He and Zhang Lingyu like each other. Zhang Lingyu cares about her own identity and Xia He's identity, and Xia He also cares about her own identity.

There are very few colleagues under one person. I hope there will be no more eunuchs.

Dear readers, should I speed up the progress of the plot to Luotian Reef, or write it step by step?

The author also has to work hard. Faced with the pressure of family and life, he can only find time to code. This time on a business trip in Suzhou, I will probably work overtime until late every day. There is no way, if you don't work, you will have no money. This is the reality. I also hope that I can sit at home and focus on typing for everyone, and also improve my life... I hope this day will come. The author apologizes to everyone, I'm sorry.

Incense

Well, just keep writing at your own pace. I hope you won't be a eunuch. Come on.

Sake incense and have a safe journey

Now when I read a fan who is not a time traveler or doesn't know the plot, I don't want to read it. I don't know why.

Okay, it's been 9 days. Alas~ By the way, why haven't I updated any of my recent fanfics? What's more, they all have less than 100,000 words🙁

Is this tj? It's the same as the one about Daluo Cave, it was updated 10 days ago, it can't be by the same person 😰

Do you dare to update more, it's not enough→_→See

I was passing by and just clicked on the author's name. It showed 100 days as the starting point for joining, which is about the time when I started this book... Is this the legendary trumpet 😂

If he is a eunuch, I would like to send you a single chapter to give an explanation.

I don't know why, I just think the protagonist should look like this

Thanks to Qidian for recommending another eunuch to me.

How to write about so many eunuchs under one person?

It's okay for the time being. I'll give it two thousand and look forward to the next article.