I Practiced and Turned on Plug-Ins

After seeing Chapter 269, let me summarize This book is worth reading in a book shortage, and the plot design is very innovative. However, there is still a big gap between it and the famous masterpiece. There is one point that I won't be happy to complain about! 1. The protagonist upgrades too slowly. He has killed several bosses, and the protagonist is still a level 7 rookie (although he can be beaten at the same level and can go up one level, this is Shuangwen's basic skill, so he will not give it to level 6). With all kinds of bosses above level 5 infiltrating the game, the protagonist has not upgraded yet. He can only rely on props to kill the boss, and he has to crush the same level repeatedly. It has no sense of satisfaction and feels very watery. 2. The development of the worldview is too slow. If the author can downgrade the protagonist and the full text is only the highest level, the worldview is too narrow and the value of this book will be severely limited. 3. The plug-ins are too rigid to open. There are a lot of skills and props, and many plug-ins are spoiler-style plug-ins. How can I say this way of plot advancement is very hard and deliberate. Various functional props can be opened early, and they can be saved for regular inventory. 4. There are too many types of skills and props, and the author cannot control them, which leads to chaos in the combat power system. 5. The plot caused by the protagonist's too slow upgrade is unreasonable: the protagonist at level 7 starts to contact the bosses of the third level. The protagonist keeps killing monsters of the same level and destroys various families, but no bosses of the third level take action. Otherwise, it is unreasonable for you, a level 7 trumpet, to be constantly praised by passers-by. What about the other level 5-6 characters? You are only ranked 6th in the human rankings, but you are already praised to the sky. Why are the elites in the top five and the local rankings so embarrassed? Doesn't the author feel embarrassed? 6. I have to mention the emotional line. At present, a childhood sweetheart and a female apprentice from the same school seem to be developing, but the progress is very slow. The protagonist has always been in a sage state. Is it the author who has low emotional intelligence or the protagonist who has low emotional intelligence? . . There are very few female supporting characters. . . 7. The dialogue between the characters seems very immature and not grounded enough. It always feels like it lacks a sense of reality and gives people a low sense of substitution. 8. There could be more routines and driving, and the language could be more lively Come on, author!

Chapter 133: The method of breaking through to the seventh level is poisonous! It was said at first that the seventh-level gym owner only has one seventh-level martial arts! This creates a contradiction. Without seventh-level martial arts, there is no way to break through to seventh-level martial arts. Breaking through seventh-level requires creating a seventh-level martial arts. Then a seventh-level warrior should have two seventh-level martial arts! Of course, the most poisonous point is that the condition for breaking through to the seventh level is for the eighth level martial artist to create his own seventh level martial arts! ? Isn't the seventh-level martial arts worse than the ninth-level martial arts... The novel is actually quite good. I suggest the author change it! Just change it to this is one of the ways to break through to the seventh level! Otherwise, it would be too poisonous and unreasonable to ask an eighth-level warrior to create his own seventh-level martial arts in order to break through to seventh-level martial arts!

The subject matter is okay, but I personally feel that it is really poisonous that the protagonist has to laugh twice in every chapter. No matter what the plot is, he has to laugh twice. It's a bit watery. The main character in each chapter can only giggle and laugh. It's written like a piece of cake. The author has so many words to express the characters' expressions and personalities. Do you only use "giggling"? Oh my gosh! Can you imagine the expression on Avengers Thanos's face when he suddenly burst into laughter when he appeared on the stage with great power? The characters are all broken. . . (In Journey to the West: Havoc in Heaven, Sun Wukong also laughed twice when pretending to accompany the Jade Emperor. Those who have seen it should imagine it.) I just saw that in the early stage, if the protagonist is still described as smiling, congratulations, you will be a hit.

Chapter 32: This routine looks disgusting. He is always framed. The supporting character has no IQ and must be suspicious of the protagonist. Then the protagonist investigates himself, finds the money shopkeeper and kills the ghost. There are two results, no chance, only a little money, and chance. If there is money, if the second one is framed, it is worth it. The first one is a huge loss. Instead, it is better to write that the protagonist discovers that after his friend has an accident, he goes to investigate and finds out that money is responsible. After killing him, he takes the silver and leaves.

You said that I came to ** just to read this chapter. Now that you don't have this chapter to talk about, isn't it no different from an ordinary book?

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Why are there so many martial arts practitioners? Are there any monsters or anything here? What will you do after practicing martial arts? Are beasts still ordinary? People can cultivate to such a high level, but beasts are still ordinary beasts?

Work hard to write. No matter the quality, the quantity must improve.

Write less about martial arts, otherwise the protagonist will not be able to learn well, and half of it may be an attribute board later on.

This is another system novel. I got a little off track after reading the first few chapters. I also saw that there are a lot of system novels, but few of them are non-stop. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The system can be a fun part of the novel, but it should not take up too much space. The context of the plot will become the key to gaining readers. Proficiency-type novels must be clear. Even if there is no system prompt, the protagonist's own martial arts is still improving. This is just a display board. Proficiency is a motivation and goal. If proficiency is used as the basis for level improvement and the rendering of the plot environment is ignored, it will be useless. Just like the fight with the martial arts instructor at the beginning, the protagonist discovered that the moves he has not learned during the fight have also increased his proficiency. The subsequent description becomes the system prompts for comprehension. If it were written about the protagonist gradually discovering the wonders of ninth-level martial arts during the fight, and by analogy, and finally the antelope hangs its horns and uses this trick, the golden finger would be at the stage where the protagonist is gifted. Later plot expansion will be much easier to write. Without necessary restrictions, it will jump very quickly.

I couldn't stand it when I saw the sixth sentence. Since ancient times, sweet and salty are incompatible 🪖🪖🪖🪖

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It's so boring, I can't even read this chapter! ! ! !

How can ordinary people keep their eyes open after falling into the water? A group of people who had panicked early were running for their lives with their eyes closed, scratching and scratching! Did you also see the protagonist coming in a glow? Are you kidding me? When you write a story, you need to have some logic to make it comfortable for people to watch.

Are all villains NT? After killing several loose immortals, a few fourth- and fifth-level immortals are still looking for trouble? Rogue cultivators might think it's an exaggeration. Don't disciples from famous sects have channels for information? Are their elders also NT?

I feel that the more the author writes, the more he becomes a novice. It was okay at first, but I wonder if it is because the author is young that he can only write in a novice way when writing about people? An adult, a high-ranking official, a master of aristocratic family, talks and acts like a stupid young man who doesn't understand the world, it's so funny to watch! The author really can't write that you can lower the age of the character! Secondly, every time there is a fight, when the attack comes, there is still time to taunt and shout, what? The characters all grew up playing The King of Fighters, and they can all activate a killing time that stops time. When you fight, who are you showing your contemptuous expression to? If someone cuts me off with a knife, I'll pause and wait for you to sneer and shout, and then continue with a bit of nagging? Let's talk about the setting. For a ninth-level character, let's call it a tenth-level character. When fighting against a level 20.30 Opponent, he keeps losing skills of more than fifty or sixty levels. Do you have that many mana bars to lose? What's the matter, the blue volume is still locked after the settings are turned on and off? Let's not talk about whether it is reasonable for you to be able to hit the fifth-grade magic four strikes , let's talk about the logic. If you have enough mana to hit four strikes, it will be exhausted. According to the author, as long as I don't use the fourth move, I can use the first three moves over and over again? Damn it, it's a solid blue lock. You're just playing the game and the opponent reports you every minute. Do you believe it? A ten-year-old child can only wield a weapon weighing about one kilogram. What if you ask him to wield a weapon weighing 100 kilograms?

While writing about how powerful level 3 is, I cheated on you for hundreds of chapters to reach level 6. It didn't feel fun at first, and I gave up after it was like this.

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See two hundred pictures! It's really meaningless. Suppressing the pig's trotter cultivation level, one falls to the third level, and the eighth level breaks through to the seventh level. It's really a lot of rubbish. You have to create your own martial arts, and you have to cultivate the invincibility. And then you don't have pig's trotters. You fight and kill all day. No passion, just routine

The thunder in the palm needs gold as a guide? In the past, Taoists probably had to sell themselves out of poverty.

The power system feels a bit like it is about to collapse. Yunxiao is above the first level of the gods. There are so many mythical characters that are as famous as her or even surpass her, not to mention the Sanqing. From this point of view, there are at least three realms above the first level of the gods.

Looking at the pig's feet, it is impossible to break through to the seventh level. There are so many seventh levels in the world. Why is pig's feet so difficult? If you are a seventh-level martial artist, you have to create your own seventh-level martial arts. May I ask how you can break through the secondary skills? The contradiction is dead. You should be talking about breaking through to the sixth-level master and creating a seventh-level martial arts.

A ninth-level warrior can defeat a seventh-level warrior using his eighth-level martial arts A ninth-level warrior can run faster than a seventh-level warrior by using his eighth-level internal strength to activate his ninth-level footwork. Is it reasonable? Reasonable, reasonable shit

Give the author some advice. Do you have to jump through level challenges to show your genius? Don't you think this set is outdated? Directly suppress the level and add points to upgrade. Isn't this genius? Alas😔, "If you are the same, there will be one mistake"

The improvement of this realm is too slow. It's already been chapter 158 and it's still eighth level. And the protagonist is dealing with middle-level third-level people now. His current realm must be at least sixth or seventh-level. What's more, it is now vaguely revealed that this is a world with a prehistoric background. There must be many realms after the first grade. If you want to write two or three thousand chapters, author, there is no need to delay the improvement of the realm. This will lose a lot of fun. It is better to add a few more realms after the first grade 😥😅

There is a plug-in that does not start practicing internal skills until more than 20 chapters. In a world of advanced martial arts, it is useless for you to practice some fancy swordsmanship in the early stage. It is enough. IQ, plot, and writing are not good enough. You, a person who has not yet reached the ninth level, have already faced off against a seventh-level person, and you still win every time. It is amazing.

The author doesn't even understand the essence of writing novels. Let's talk about the routine of Platinum Master Tomato's writing novels, which has been his successful routine for writing novels for so many years: 1. In Tomato's novels, the level of the strong people the protagonist currently encounters will not exceed the three realms of his strength. If they exceed it, they will be replaced by powerful people and great beings. Moreover, they will not introduce the protagonist in detail before he has upgraded to the corresponding level, which makes book fans feel that the people the protagonist encounters are a bit strong, but not fatal, and can be defeated after dozens of chapters. 2. A supreme opportunity that defies heaven and transforms into a dragon. In each of Tomato's novels, such as Swallow, Wilderness, Snow Eagle, etc., The protagonist is not a very, very evil evil genius at the beginning. At most, he is a peerless genius. He relies on his will and confidence to be stronger than other geniuses to be able to overpower others. But in Tomato's novels, the protagonist will be given an incredible opportunity to transform into a dragon in the middle (you can understand it as Tomato's routine for writing books). Once the protagonist gets this opportunity, he will soar to the sky. But Tomato will also be mixed with more explosive points and his unbridled imagination. Now think about it, before Luo Feng recognized the Lord of the Star Tower, he was only a genius who was not among the top 1,000 in the history of the human race. Although he was very good and the Realm Lord could resist the King's Limit, the Chaos City Lord was not particularly shocked. I think Chaos City Lord, Giant Ax and other peak human powerhouses are much more dazzling than Luo Feng at the realm lord level. (For example, Lord Eclipse Fire is also a first-level genius of Luo Feng. He is the overlord of the universe once he meets him in tens of millions of epochs.) Therefore, after Immortality, I feel that I have become routine. There is no way around it. The same goes for Tomato's other novels. 3. Most of the protagonists are representatives of Wei Guangzheng. Although they kill decisively, they do not kill indiscriminately. They cater to the taste of the vast majority of people and are full of positive energy. 4. Tomato's novel has a clear outline, which divides a novel into dozens of chapters. Each chapter has a clear theme and clear context, so it won't be rushed. (I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and the only one that is so carefully divided into chapters is Tomato)

The first 20 chapters look good, but the further you go, the weirder it gets. The world view suddenly becomes bigger, the cheats are too much, and the items you get are too coincidental. The plot arrangement is very awkward. I personally suggest that the author re-adjusts the level of force and the main line of the world view. It has been excessively increased and has been left in a cliché. But at least the protagonist's name is interesting and not random like Fan, Ye, Xie, etc.! Come on, author

Why do you always want to go back? It's not good to be extraordinary and not good at flying. I hate this kind of book the most. The protagonist always wants to go back. Some authors always write about the protagonist wanting to go back, so don't write about time travel and rebirth. How annoying it is.

Coming over from the squid, author, are you ready to be sacrificed?🤭