Cultivating Immortality with a Mission

To be honest, the opening paragraph is really true. Just explain the situation to the protagonist directly. Why bother making a fuss about incense and other things? It's not even a product yet. Just explain the situation directly. Anyone with a bit of conscience will be willing to accept this deal.

I feel that the protagonist will become more sophisticated later on. On the one hand, she is emotional, but on the other hand, she is tempered. The Ryubo Sennin said that her soul was injured, and the world is very strange. Did the author set something up?

The biggest shortcoming of this article is that it is a bit long-winded. There are too many emotions of the heroine. It takes a long time to describe the food, but there are no details about cultivating immortals. The heroine behaves like a real 10-year-old, lamenting everything, sad for the autumn and the moon, and very lazy. At the 100th chapter, I still don't see any intention of entering the main plot.

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Let's talk about chapter 280 first. It seems that I skipped some parts. The writing style is indeed good, but it is really verbose. Many parts are like a farming style cultivating immortality essay (except not farming, everything else is included). Except for the daily life in the secret realm of the sect, it is too leisurely. I have written all kinds of daily life. After reading it, I felt that the protagonist really goes out shopping every day to find friends, and the cultivation of immortals only accounts for a small part. After each chapter, there is still a tangled emotion. I want to add a shortcut key. It's a bit frustrating The next few dozen chapters are better, but I can't tell that the role of the heroine is all luck unless there is a golden finger. There is not much vigilance mentioned in the text. She only has a salty mentality when being targeted, and does nothing. Moreover, before the protagonist's strength reaches the golden elixir, it is not felt that the protagonist has much combat power. Anyway, he has not encountered many enemies, and when writing about the vicious female partner, the rhythm is different from other chapters. Also, I don't know if it will be written in the future that the protagonist can fight. If he can't protect himself even though he is wearing a magical elixir skin, then the invincible talent added by the text is really nothing to see.

This is actually classified as a fantasy romance, but there seems to be no problem. After reading more than 20 chapters, if the author doesn't mind the trouble, I suggest that I modify the first few pictures. It is really easy to dissuade, it is too cumbersome, and the character of the protagonist is really salty, not like a 30-year-old person, ah, even though everyone is a baby now!

It has a very delicate, brisk, and interesting writing style. It won't be boring even if you change the painting style. It goes directly to the theme. Although the character names are a bit ordinary, they are easy to remember. There is a saying that goes like this: You will not offend others with your words, and you will not offend God by burning incense. The heroine accidentally "offended" God, so she had such an adventure, got rid of the trivial matters at home, and started a new journey.

Is there anyone like me who likes the emperor? Why do I like an ugly little brother who has appeared in two or three chapters 🐷

Yangyang, I haven't read a lot of chapters, um, a lot. 😊😊