Cultivating Immortality with a Mission

Honestly, that opening scene was ridiculous. They could have just explained the situation to the protagonist directly. Why bother with all that incense stuff? It was making a mountain out of a molehill and showed no class. If they had just explained the situation, anyone with a conscience would have accepted the deal.

I feel the protagonist will develop a split personality later on. On one hand, she's deeply emotional, and on the other hand, she's been tormented. That Flowing Wave Immortal even said her soul was injured, and that world is very strange. Did the author set it up in some way?

The biggest drawback of this story is its verbosity. There are too many of the female lead's reflections, and even the food is described at length. There's a lack of detail about her cultivation journey. The female lead acts like she's actually a teenager, constantly expressing her feelings, wallowing in melancholy, and quite lazy. At 100 chapters, there's still no sign of the main plot developing.

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Let's start with chapter 280, I think. I skipped through some parts. The writing style is indeed good, but it's really wordy. Many parts feel like a farming/cultivation novel (except for farming, it has everything). Aside from the sect's secret realm and the protagonist's leisurely daily life, it describes every aspect of daily life.

This is actually categorized as a fantasy romance, but it doesn't seem to be a problem. I've read about twenty chapters. If the author doesn't mind the trouble, I suggest revising the first few chapters. They're really discouraging and overly complicated. Also, the protagonist's personality is really too laid-back and doesn't feel like that of a 30-year-old. Ah, although everyone is still a baby now!

The writing style is delicate, light, and interesting. Even when the art style changes, it doesn't feel boring. It gets straight to the point. Although the character names are a bit ordinary, they are easy to remember. There's a saying that goes, "If you don't know how to speak, you'll offend people; if you don't know how to burn incense, you'll offend the gods."

Anyone else like me who likes the Emperor? Why do I like a guy who's not good-looking and has only appeared in two or three chapters? 🐷

I need to rest; I haven't read many chapters lately, yeah, a lot. 😊😊