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There is no need to criticize. As far as this book is concerned, the author should not be criticized. The plot and writing settings are well described, but you need to be careful when watching it, because the plot is a bit scattered. This is not a problem in "Trafford Buyers Club", but it is still very interesting. The character of the protagonist has changed a bit. It is recommended that the author should not continue to write the high-powered Fang Qiongqiong once he changes, and change back to the low-powered Fang on different occasions. This is considered to be maintaining the original intention. After all, if a person gains power, there is no reason not to pretend to be X at all. Updating is a major pain point for this book. After all, books that require mental reading can easily be stuffed into a corner if there is not enough stock. Come on, author, update, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Emmmm, author, I think you posted it in the wrong category

Is this the case with Song Yunuan? You could punch the previous woman into a wall, but you can't even bear to hurt this one? Just because you've met a cross-dressing boss, you let her go like that? When you're still unsure, if you don't want to mess with her, don't write her in such a bitchy way. It's all because of my mentality!

The author should not write the kind of intellectual content. Trying to muddle through the book will only lower the level of the book. When the police intercepted the first supernatural incident, he gave a sentence. You can read the comments below that sentence. After that, I didn't dig into the experience of ten thousand times. On the way to the temple, I wrote about harming small animals along the way. I didn't write about whether I gained experience or not. The description of the experience after beating the maggots of the female ghost was quite confusing. It's okay to write this kind of content once or twice, but it won't work if you write it too much.

Left: The writing style is very problematic, and it is not a work suitable for careful reading and reflection. Right Although there are no clichés, the author writes quite carefully. Left The settings are unclear and the abilities are messy. Right tend to be sand sculptures and invincible essays. This subject has very low requirements for rigor. Left The opening chapter has nothing to do with the title of the book. It was not until I was about to abandon the book that I saw the correct content of the title. Right I can't move on the right side of this one, and I'm also wondering what's going on in the opening section. Left The background and cheat settings are unbearable if you think about it carefully. Right The author is getting better and better as he writes. Left I seriously doubt that Jill wrote it blindly without an outline. Right It is not as good as the above but more than Xiaobai. It can be used to pass the time for the time being. There are still many things that I can write about but I am too lazy to continue to subdivide them. In my opinion, I have abandoned the book this time, but I feel good about this book. It is just that my obsessive-compulsive disorder makes me subconsciously think about the details and I can't read it. . . Above.

Although the plot is a bit confusing, I can't tell what the main plot is for the moment? But the story is still well written.

It feels pretty good, worth a look

@ Pigeon: Sorry! Pocket money is a little tight lately, I only have enough 😭

Not bad, not bad. The author's writing is very good. I hope I can follow it more every day. The character of the protagonist is also quite good, but it should be closer to reality. If you are too stubborn, you can't pretend to be cool.

By the way, how many chapters does the author plan to write?

It's a pretty good book, but it's not suitable for reading at a glance, and it's not suitable for skipping to read. It requires some understanding, but the setting and plot are quite exciting. As for those who say plagiarism, look at it, after so long of talking and reporting, the book is still there. Isn't the fact obvious? There is no such thing as plagiarism.

Many books always delete negative reviews, but not this author. So there are quite a lot of bad reviews in the comment section now. But the back is really good, and the front does have some shortcomings. The author is also very down-to-earth and willing to accept everyone's opinions and make changes. If you have any opinions, please be tactful and give negative reviews in a reasonable manner. After all, the author also needs to eat.

I'm back

I discovered this book by accident. I was looking for new books at the time, and I happened to find this book. I thought it was good, a bit like "There Is a Monster", and I prefer this type of novel. I prefer to read new books, invest in new books, look for potential stocks, and buy book coins by the way (actually this is the real purpose, lol). If it was the setting that attracted me to read this novel, then the character of the protagonist and the development of the plot were the important factors that retained me. This novel always makes people laugh at critical moments without losing its rigor. Personally, I don't like to watch things that are too funny. The author has a good grasp of the situation and doesn't make it exaggerated just for the sake of being funny. Mainstream royal content plus interesting fashion elements complement each other. It is a particularly good book. Except for the author's lack of development in the early setting, everything else is fine. He has been slowly smoothing out the plot, and his writing is getting better and better. I can even clearly feel the author's progress. It is really a great novel. Here I want to say to the author: Come on! ᕙ( * •̀ ᗜ •́ * )ᕗ Also, I also want a character, a pink-haired lolita named Li Yu, and I recommend a book by the way - "The War of Emotions" by Lin Xi Qianxie. Written by a friend for my own enjoyment, please don't comment if you don't like it. This is my first time writing a long review. Please correct any typos and see if I can modify them. Look - such a cute pink loli, please leave your likes! (The lime milk foam color is great on the eyes! I chose the color carefully.

The more you look at it, the more inexplicable it becomes. Many of the settings are completely messed up. The character setting of the protagonist is really unlikable, and he is completely stupid. Cowardly and stupid A bottle of enhanced version of Coke can keep the yang energy alive, making it impossible for low-priced races (50 experience) to harm the protagonist. Change to the enhanced version of Coke +4 to introduce the greatly improved Yang Qi. How come the setting of Yang Qi disappears after drinking it? (After returning home, the lower-level races will not be burned if they directly touch the protagonist? The setting of Yang Qi will not appear in the later plots, so what is the purpose of this setting that appears at the beginning?) Even more outrageous according to the subsequent plot, the general's mummy is also of average strength (it was killed by the five-talented Taoist in charge of the city with one move). After the protagonist drank +4 Coke and used his magical power to instantly kill (200 experience ghosts) and the Shura Skeleton Lock, he couldn't even scratch a single fur for half an hour? The general's mummy still disdained the protagonist's combat ability? (Or is it not the same monster?) Normal logic should strengthen the newly acquired "Shura Skeleton Lock" weapon first to enhance its strength, and use the excess energy to strengthen new items if you have energy. The protagonist keeps strengthening new items one after another, without in-depth strengthening of each item. How about playing it? Especially "Shura Skeleton Lock" can be extended to 800 meters. How good is the long-range attack? It consumes little, attacks fiercely, and has a large range. The protagonist is a coward and doesn't specifically strengthen this. What new items should be strengthened? I really don't understand? The mobs all over the street ask the protagonist to brush them, but he doesn't brush them? Afraid of being discovered by relevant departments? But he is afraid of death and wants to strengthen them, so he looks for energy everywhere. Brother, it's 800 meters away. Find a place to hide. Let the chain go out and kill the monsters. If you are still cowarded behind the scenes, why don't you stop playing? You can commit suicide. The protagonist is cowardly and greedy, how can he be loved by readers without any brains? You can be cowardly but cannot defeat the enemy, but it is very boring to miss various development opportunities if you are investigated by the relevant departments for being purely cowardly

Overall, it's okay, but the foreshadowing is a bit long, and the plot in some places is confusing. However, the theme is a good city + Cthulhu + 2D + Immortal Martial Arts + Foundation, which is quite rare in Qidian novels. I just like the themes I mentioned but haven't found them before. Let me briefly talk about the shortcomings and advantages of this article. 1. The protagonist has a good personality. In the strange world, the two types of protagonists, the slutty and the mentally ill, are quite popular, such as the strong man who walked out of the mental hospital and the man who stands at the top of the food chain. However, this type of protagonist is easy to collapse because after the reader has formed the image of the protagonist, once the character described by the author is not the same as in the impression, the reader will feel as if he is looking at two people, and the character of the protagonist cannot change much, which requires the author's ability to substitute imagination. 2. The subject matter is a bit niche. This kind of novel is naturally very popular if it is well written. However, there are not many such novels in total. Because the world view needs to be well established, it does not need to be grand, but it must be understood by readers. Many similar novels are confused because they don't know what they are about, so they can't follow them. This novel was quite enjoyable to read earlier, and the protagonist's ability It's also awesome, but it's still a little confusing in some places, and there are too many foreshadowings. If you don't have the ability to control it, it will be difficult. I recommend High Dimensional Seeker 3. Plot: In fact, I think the current plot is a bit confusing, and there is no main line, so the next step should be to introduce some enemy forces and righteous forces, and then you can jump repeatedly. 4. Characters: In terms of characters, the image of the protagonist is pretty good. There is no Madonna, and it is not too anti-human. In short, there are not many character flaws. Then He Bo has a good character and can be considered a qualified subordinate and friend. Meow Oil Road is also very good, responsible for unfolding the world and preventing the destruction of reality. But it's still too little. I think there should be more protagonists doing things with other people, and other characters should also be described. 5. Goldfinger: I think I am not the only one who thinks that the goldfinger in this novel is very strong, but the protagonist uses it a bit casually, is not specialized, and has some enhancements. Although it is still invincible, it feels a bit lax. The protagonist of this kind of novel thinks more rationally. 6. World view: The current world view is very grand, and there is almost everything. Up to now, the world view feels that the author should be able to grasp it, but it should be revealed bit by bit. Now it is all out at once. Maybe the author has his own arrangement 7: Finally, I wish the author to write better and better and become a fairy 😄

I am a new writer and I am relatively Buddhist. I will not delete the negative comments in the comments, but I will also adopt the good ones. But those who open their mouths and rant will be permanently banned from commenting, adding or deleting posts. From now on, I won't read the comments anymore. I'll just close my eyes and write. If you feel it's good, just stay and read it slowly. If you don't think it's appropriate, we can get together and relax. If I really want to argue with someone and criticize them, if I give them a ban and then scold them, will I still have the upper hand? The main reason is that it is not necessary. I am writing a novel to tell you a story. Whether it is suitable or not, and whether to stay or not is just a matter of chance. Don't rush to be embarrassed. That's all I want to say today, Xingmu slapped the table, everyone. There are four seasons in spring, summer, autumn and winter. The road is still long. Let's listen to the spring thunder.

Can you stop wearing Doraemon's doll costume and change to a pair of armor? It's too dramatic🪖

See it and learn from it. You can leave some good inspirations and ideas in the comment area, whether it's character plots or weird legends!

The protagonist learned the Liuhe Martial Arts Manual, and was easily tied up by someone the next day. Oh my God, the protagonist drank so much enhanced cola and learned awesome martial arts. Just like that, he fell down without even reacting. Not to mention that the protagonist Blind Jiba used the system to strengthen the foreign objects themselves to strengthen the yang energy and spirituality. The body was also improved by the martial arts secrets, but it was still a bug pinched by Ren Lou, and the protagonist and Long Shengyue wrote The protagonist had a toothache, and the protagonist trembled and sweated because she found out that Long Qiangyue was a demon. Not only did Long Qiangyue not find out, but later because the protagonist did not answer her questions well, she took revenge and gave the protagonist a jade pendant full of black energy, and sent someone to catch the protagonist as a bait. To be honest, the protagonist's predecessor died because he confessed to Long Qiangyue and was rejected. Is she a kind-hearted woman who can get along with everyone, so she is extremely popular? I just hope that the protagonist, who has an awesome system but is still crying without tears, trembling all over, and has no love in life, can calm down.

If you have pictures and post them as proof, I want to see the Japanese engine.

I'll wait for the author's second book🤣The writing is indeed very descriptive, but the plot is a bit confusing. The protagonist is too out of the ordinary and is suitable for light novels.

Mainstream royal content plus interesting fashion elements complement each other. It is a particularly good book. Works with too heavy animation elements are difficult to become mainstream at the beginning. There is serious homogeneity and many works are specious. The characters in the original work are stereotyped. Readers' preferences are polar opposites. The need for authenticity and the tiredness of originality are at the same time. If a work will definitely drive away some readers (fools and trolls are not counted), then its path will be more difficult. In short, I hope this book can have a royal title worthy of its excellent content.

This book is okay, more suitable for reading at a glance. If you read carefully you will find a lot of illogical plots and the obviously stupid behavior of the protagonist. But if you scan and read, these problems will be greatly improved.

What's the use of writing this ten thousand times experience? Thousands of experience points can only be exchanged for Coke. Inflation is too high.

The writing is good, it doesn't look like the work of a newcomer at all, and it is even as capable as a platinum master, which shows that it has a deep foundation. I like to bury pits, and I am currently burying them How can I put it, this is the only book besides Xiaofeng's "The Strongest Escape" that I, a prostitute, want to keep ordering. To borrow the words of the author himself: This book has the necessary resources to become a god. It can kill platinums at the top and hammer the great gods at the bottom. It is a really good book 😏 Yes, I am the b who gives him reasons for asking for leave every day. Feel free to join the group and hack me at any time. Ps The author said that the first order exceeded 1,000, and Xiaopozhan broadcast a live broadcast of women playing horror games in disguise, hehehehe. So, even if it's for women's clothing, everyone, let's fight!

Why are there so many mentally retarded and bad reviews? Some people are jealous?

How come men are all such big pigs? Well, that's fine. You women ask us men for gifts, houses, cars, deposits, bags, beautiful clothes and cosmetics every day. You make all kinds of troubles when nothing happens and then it's all our men's fault. Is it reasonable that we have to apologize in various ways? You women are arguing about equality between men and women every day, but I feel that we men should be shouting about this now. Society is so partial to women now. Men who like beautiful women are just like pigs, so why do you women like handsome men? Fat men are like pigs, fat women are plump, thin men are like monkeys, thin women are slim, tall men are like bamboo poles, tall women are slender, short men are like winter melons, and short women are cute. Why is there such a big difference? Should men kneel down and lick girls? Should men be tragic? Is this reasonable? Is this really equality between men and women?

The book is signed within the contract, so you can collect and invest with confidence.

I accidentally discovered this book. It is well written. Although the number of words is a little less now, it is not a problem. I like this book very much. I have tried it. It is a good book. Please give me a lot of support from the author and please improve it.