Fairy Tail Painting Magic

I think it would be better if the protagonist's magic is changed to summoning. You really dare to think of drawing a living person.

Why should we pay attention to the name? Because of the immersive reading experience. For readers, fan works are memories and imaginations of original works, and re-contacts with known plots. Just imagine, when the name Zhou Xin appears, how embarrassing the overall context will be. You will force readers away from the fan fiction and into reality, and the reading experience will be extremely poor. Moreover, Japan is still a country in the Chinese cultural circle, and it itself has very Chinese elements. However, a naming method like Zhou Xin's that has no characteristics and is not common even for young people will bring the entire work down a whole level. In Fairy Tail, it's better to be someone like Ikaruga, who is easily accepted in the name of things no matter where they are.

It's hard to say anything else, but I really suggest you change your name. After all, you still have few chapters. This name doesn't fit in with Fairy Tail's worldview at all and sounds weird. My personal suggestion is that you really should change it.

I don't know why I always feel that the protagonist is like a passerby with no personality, but he is chased by Mira, which is a bit inexplicable...

The name sounds weird and I'm not interested in reading it.

It looked very boring, and the author forced the protagonist to have a Chinese name that was out of place. I guess this is the author's real name and he wants to have fun with it. The painting magic that was promised has turned into a summoning flow. How about you use a few characters from the magical world, and it has to be Naruto. If you are here for the Fairy Tail ID, show me this.

This book. The more I watch, the more boring I get. This setting is really embarrassing. This painting magic has become a summoning magic. It is necessary to summon the characters in Naruto. Why bother. Since this is the case, why not just start asking the protagonist to create a summoning system? This setting is so speechless. And the most important mages in Fairy Tail are all melee mages. What should I do if the protagonist takes the summoning stream in the later stages? In the end, don't you still have to cultivate your route properly? The character of Naruto appears in Fairy Tail, which is easy to make people laugh.

When I read about harem articles, I stopped reading the last one when I saw a girl around. It was a bit disgusting to see the censorship, and most of the women were a bit ambiguous with the protagonist. It turns out that those who had cps were all gone, and almost all of them liked the protagonist, haha

The early stage was barely okay, but what did you write about in the middle stage? In the beginning, it was said that one must understand it before it can materialize, but in the later stage, it became both a ninja and a saint. Since you understand it through plug-ins, wouldn't you practice chakra or microcosm yourself? Is it enough to be a summoner for the rest of your life? In the mid-term, Chinese martial arts and Chinese medicine were also mentioned, saying that they could control cells. I know you are patriotic, but if you love your country, you must also follow the Basic Law. There is no solution in a world with magic. Can something from a world without magic elements work? Moreover, Chinese martial arts combined with traditional Chinese medicine to control cells is even more ridiculous. He ran away before being poisoned and said goodbye.

The protagonist's golden finger, what kind of summoning flow is it? At the beginning, number 18 had his memory erased. This can be done later. Isn't equipment flow better than prop flow? Holy Cloth, Zanpakuto, Teigu, Kamen Rider Transformer, and even Doraemon's secret props. These things may be difficult to make by hand, either because of the materials, skills, success rate or other conditions. But the protagonist's golden finger setting can be drawn as long as there is detailed data, even the characters. There is no reason why these can't be done, right? I just saw where the protagonist lost the duel with Gray. The protagonist has to learn some magic, sort out some messy things, and develop his golden fingers, isn't it?

It looked okay at the beginning, but as I went on it became more and more strange. What is Zhou Xin's role? So far, I have discovered that the only thing the protagonist has changed is that Lisanna was not sucked away by Eldras. When fighting the ghost, Kaname still suffered huge losses for the guild. Laxus is still causing trouble. Among the guild members, the ones who should have turned into stone have now turned into stone. If you don't change the plot at all, I might as well watch the anime.

I'm convinced, since I'm going to write a novel, is it difficult to spend two minutes thinking of a good name?

You can learn from the painting magic of the leader of Black Clover

Is this Naruto or a Fairy Tail fan? All the people who appear in Wei Mao are Naruto.

After watching the beginning, the protagonist's mentality is really bad. Fairy Tail's magic is quite idealistic. If there are deficiencies in faith, awareness, etc., There is no future.

It's really disgusting to erase the memory if you can't summon it.

When I saw the protagonist taking out a drone, I immediately felt relieved. Didn't the setting require a full understanding of the composition before it can be realized? Forget about a drone that can fly. At least it's a little simpler. Are surveillance cameras just created so casually? Why don't you just take out a 98k stick and go out and do it? This technology content is much lower than those electronic components? ?

Eileen is the Wise Dragon Queen, not the red dragon. Don't think that she is a red dragon just because she has red hair.

I read the first three chapters, and I can't say whether they were good or not, but I was completely taken away by the name of the protagonist.

The writing is flat and straightforward, with no highlights, and the emotional drama is inexplicable, with no process at all. If Mira fell in love with someone so easily, the original novel would not be without cps. What are the advantages of the key protagonist? The abilities are messy and featureless. In the final analysis, it is just summoning other two-dimensional characters. I am just wretched behind. It is simply another kind of summoning of star spirits. The plot is boring and boring, the dialogue is weak, and the characters are different from the original work. I started with several Fairy Tail books, and the best one is Fairy Tail's text magic. Although the number of words is small, the difference between the two is huge when compared, and the others are uneven. This one is not poisonous but lethargic, and I admire it as I read it.

100,000 Fans in the harem, 10,000 fans in the harem, the author chooses one himself.

My personal suggestion is to change your name! How many people have abandoned books because of their names😅😅

Author Yun Fairy Tail, Jellal is kind in nature, but was hypnotized by Urutia. In the Six Demons, he lost his memory and wanted to destroy Nirvana. Now you have become kind because of Nirvana. Nirvana was what he opened to destroy. When he made this decision, he had not yet opened it. Also, can you understand the function of nirvana? It is not something that can reverse black and white without any brain. It is conditional. Can you make a person who has lost his memory fill his head with evil?

I sincerely suggest that the author change his name. If the painting style is more European and American, he should choose a name with the surname at the end, otherwise it will be too dramatic to read.

To be honest, no matter how good the novel is, the name feels out of place and annoying.

It's so boring. It doesn't have the blood of the original work, nor any refreshing battle scenes, nor a cheerful plot. The more I watch it, the more boring it gets.

It's rare for a Fairy Tail fan to have so many words, so I was persuaded to quit when I saw the name.

Just looking at the name of the protagonist makes me want to read it, it's a bit embarrassing

Is there any heroine who is a fan of the original Fairy Tail?

It's not that it doesn't look good, it just feels empty.