I'm Really Talented

The author is a bit unlucky. The story flows smoothly and the characters are vivid. I can picture them all in my mind. I don't look like a newbie. Although the comments say there are typos, I haven't seen them so far. They should have been revised. The protagonist's character is also very good. He tends to be kind and has a bottom line. I don't know why some people criticize this. I want to read a lot of dark literature. Yes, I like this kind of protagonist. I feel like vomiting after reading murder conspiracy theories all day long.

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I have something to say. In fact, this novel is not bad. Although there are shortcomings. Sometimes the protagonist's behavior is a bit confusing, but it is still acceptable. Most of them are in the early stages. Later, you can clearly feel that the author's writing style is improving! But I want to express my opinion, which is about the heroine. In fact, according to the situation of this book, a single heroine is too abrupt. It would be more appropriate to open a harem, but the problem is how to open a harem. People nowadays hate having a harem mainly because some authors open a harem for the sake of having a harem. If every heroine can be written well, it will actually be pretty good. It just depends on how the author writes it! 😎😎Of course it is just a suggestion, the author should just write according to his own ideas! ✊✊

She actually has a harem? ? ? Sometimes the middle two characters are a bit awkward. I don't really like the emotional part. I feel like the characters are inexplicably attracted to each other, which I don't like. . . The rest is a normal male version of an upgraded novel,,,

After reading more than seventy chapters, I feel that it is okay, but there are a lot of typos in some places. Zhou Xingwu has become Zhao Xingwu. I hope the author will pay more attention to this issue.

The writing is getting better and better, the writing style is better than before, and it still has a fantasy feel, eh. . It's just that I'm a little short of money at the moment. I'll wait until next month to order all the orders and support the author 🙂

I don't know what the author thought of the plot of the heroine disguising herself as a man and finding the hero to enter the toilet. It was too tasteful. There was also a large group of unknown people who were booing. The most speechless thing was that the protagonist really went there. Where did the hero's IQ go? If a slightly normal person encounters this kind of situation and doesn't yell at the person who is booing, then he is well-mannered. To be honest, this scene is a bit disgusting.

I have just read dozens of chapters. I have no other meaning. Let me write my thoughts after reading it. I will talk about my thoughts first. What does it mean to change the length of the chapter before the introduction is complete? And why does it take a few months for the protagonist to find out that he has traveled through time and the system is implanted before he wakes up? I am not complaining, I am just a little confused. It didn't lead to the following. Is this a wedge, or a foreshadowing? Maybe it's because I don't know enough. And that Shi Yanya, who didn't even know the protagonist at the beginning, did he just fall in love with the protagonist casually because he just saved the beauty? Is the protagonist's aura so npc? And I think the author's description of her is not weak. You can give me a reason to fall in love with the protagonist. Finally, I want to say that this book is still readable. These are just some places that I think are a bit unsmooth. There is nothing particularly toxic and I don't want to read it.

I finished reading it in 3 days and it was pretty good.

I just went to the comment area and the author responded to everyone's complaints, which I thought was very good! However, it is recommended that the author remove the restriction on speaking in the comment area, otherwise some people will find that they cannot even comment or discuss with everyone, so they will just stop reading (some authors keep posting poison, and many people have been poisoned and abandoned, but the author still posts, and also sets the fan value to be able to speak! As a result, there are so many people who will quit immediately when they see the comment setting)

I have read more than 200 chapters. The first part is okay, but the second part feels boring when it comes to starting a harem. The protagonist doesn't know what to do when he sees a woman. He has concerns about women this and that. He looks like a scumbag at first glance. I really can't stand it.

I deliberately gave you a dollar for posting. I read the beginning, and I just wanted to say, what is the plot you started writing about...? Does this beginning have anything to do with the main text? It's inexplicable to see! If this beginning is the main text, it would be easy to say, but the key is not the main text, and then suddenly switching to the main text is very discouraging. If it's not the main text, can't it be written in the wedge? Okay, if you feel that the thing at the beginning is very important and has something to do with something like a cheat, and you can't write it in the wedge, then wouldn't it be less awkward to write it after the cheat comes out? If it's a plot, can't you wait until the end of the plot to write it? If it's a foreshadowing, who have you ever seen who foreshadowed it like this? It's so abrupt, I really can't stand it. Of course, the above is purely a personal opinion. As for what other people feel and think, I don't know. Of course, I just read the beginning. As a Shennong, I tasted the tips of grass and got pricked, but I can still bear it. Next I started to taste the grass. Is it grass jelly or poison? Wait for my reply.

The last 50 chapters to the finale really stretch my crotch

The royal sister has a lolita face? Is this what you're talking about?

A freshman wrote fifty-five chapters, you are awesome

Hello author, I usually read novels for free. But this book of yours seems to suit my taste. I'm a bit reluctant to see you say you want a eunuch or a quick finish, so I came to Qidian to support you. Because I don't know which one you are starting with. Your book is actually quite good. Don't pay too much attention to the words of some trolls who are frustrated in reality and take revenge on society online.

The protagonist, the true brother, is too passive when it comes to women, so why can't a man just refuse? Just like Xiao Shou, he passively accepts... Just mention that the girl wants to live in the protagonist's house, and let him stay directly, without fearing that the other party will kill him or have problems? Or is it useful to pay attention because the other party's strength emphasizes it? The strength is not strong, and the cohabitation has a lot of ways to solve the protagonist.

I watched it yesterday and finished it today, three monthly passes! I don't need to say what you are implying! I want to be more precise😏😏

That's right! Yanagawa can pretend to be very ferocious, wearing an eyepatch and looking evil.

It's a pity to have the qualifications to become a god 😭

Being cummed for the first time, so exciting! ! ! Although I don't know how long it took to add it.

The author plans to write a new book. If you want to read it, join the group and check out the author's archive.

It's really getting better and better, I'll offer you a monthly pass, come on!

It's so well written. It's the same as what I've read before, but it combines many genres, and it gives me a new feeling. Don't be unable to continue writing. I'm fully committed to it. You have to work hard and write it down, and don't be a eunuch. Stop working on a new book and finish this one properly

Find time to read it again. I have been very busy recently and finally have time. Don't miss this book if you pass by it.

Nice looking, really. Please keep up the good work.

Come on, the work is very good. I've given you ten monthly passes.