This Master Is Omnipotent

Can the heroine just be Si Nian? This protagonist makes me anxious to death, and the protagonist is too cowardly towards the Son of Luck. It seems that the Son of Luck is in a high position. He can't kill the Son of Luck directly, but he can provoke him. After all, he is from the past of the earth. Green Tea can act in a drama without knowing it. He pretends to be seriously injured and is accidentally killed by the four disciples. My brother knows (because of spying on the source of the shackles, you are probably a saint in his eyes anyway), and his strength has dropped greatly. The reason for treating him so much in childhood was actually to test the wear of the shackles, and then there will be a big crisis, several semi-saints come over, and there are instructions from the saints behind him.

On the Starry Sky Ancient Road, there was a young man sitting cross-legged on the ground alone. Just looking at his light gray linen clothes and ordinary appearance, he looked like an ordinary person. But next to him stood a long sword that emitted a terrifying black light, faintly revealing its pressure. The terrifying black light hid most of his body in the darkness. "You hiding guy, come out." The man in linen slowly opened his eyes and said calmly. After a moment of silence, a group of strange monsters suddenly appeared on the empty ancient starry sky road ahead. They look like humans, but their bodies are covered with blood-colored scales. They are hundreds of feet tall, and their tails on their backs are even more than a kilometer long, covered with barbs. "I can smell your blood crocodile tribe all the way away. It's really disgusting. Why, you want to come and fight again, right?" The man in linen clothes said, jumped up from the ground, picked up the Changjian and rushed forward. The people of the Blood Crocodile Tribe didn't say much. They just snorted and rushed to kill them, because they all knew that unnecessary words were of no use, and they still fought in the end. Half a quarter of an hour later, there was an aura of destruction near the Starry Sky Ancient Road. Even the last Blood Crocodile clan died tragically under the long sword of the man in linen. Not even the scum was left, and several nearby Death Stars were blown up by the way. "Damn it, Zhi Ge, it's not bad, you've made some progress, I thought it would take you a quarter of an hour to solve it." Suddenly, an incoherent voice came from the man in linen clothes in the distance. At this time, the man in sackcloth, Sun Zhige, turned around and smiled, saying "Second brother, you are late again" to the man who was approaching quickly. The person who came was none other than Sun Zicang, Sun Zhige's second brother from the Demon Ape Clan. "Ahaha, I'm just a few days late. Look what I brought you." Sun Zicang looked embarrassed, then took out a space ring and threw it to Sun Zhige. When Sun Zhige received it, he looked inside with his consciousness, and his eyes suddenly lit up! It is filled with all kinds of candies he likes to eat! There are ***, ***, and **** (advertising space for rent). "Xixi! (Thank you, second brother)" Sun Zhige took out the gun, stuffed it into his mouth, and said vaguely. "Haha, eat slowly, there is still more." An hour later... On the Starry Sky Ancient Road, beside a transformed table, Sun Zhige let out a long belch, with a look of happiness on his face. Second brother Sun Zicang was sitting next to him, holding a paper fan and watching quietly. Suddenly something occurred to him and he asked, "By the way, Zhige, is there any news about Sister Hua?" "Not yet, and I don't know how Sister Hua is doing now." Sun Zhige said with a worried face. Since Sister Hua fought with the ten ancestors of the Blood Demon Clan in the Red Spirit Nebula a hundred years ago, destroying most of the Red Spirit Nebula, and finally annihilated the ten Blood Demon ancestors. But Sister Hua was also seriously injured. When she came back, she said she had something very important to deal with, and asked Sun Zicang and Sun Zhige to take turns guarding the ancient starry sky path for her for ten years. After that, she left alone before her injuries recovered. It has been a hundred years since he came back. Thinking of Sister Hua, Sun Zhige thought of his childhood again. At that time, in the Ancient Demon Ape Clan, because I was thin and weak, I was often bullied by my brothers and sisters in the clan, especially this second brother, who was the worst bully. One day, after he was bullied, he secretly ran to a valley to cry, but he accidentally ran into the valley of the eldest sister who his brothers and sisters said was very fierce and ugly, but he didn't know it at the time. As he was crying, he suddenly heard slight footsteps in front of him. He looked up and saw a human-looking woman suspended in mid-air. Dressed in a white dress, with bright eyes, tall nose, thin lips, and fair and rosy skin, she looks like someone who can be broken by a blow, like an immortal descending to earth, and her glance and smile are all touching. She was looking down at herself with her head bent, her eyes seemed a little surprised. Sun Zhige was startled by this human-looking woman, because the people in the clan generally lived in their true form, except for the second brother who often bullied him. He always took the form of a human and wore human clothes. This was the second human appearance he had seen. "What's your name?" "Zhicough? What's your name... From now on, you'll call me Zhi Ge" "You will hang out with me from now on. You can't be bullied anymore and you don't dare to fight back." "You are the only ones who dare to bully my little brother, right?" "From now on, you will be the second child. Zhi Ge, you are still too weak, so you can be the third child." "How come you are still so thin after so long" "Here, this is the treasure that your sister Hua and I found in the Demon Abyss. It should make you stronger. I can't protect you all the time." "Zicang, Zhige, I have something very important to do. Can you help Sister Hua protect this ancient starry sky road?" ... When it comes to Sister Hua, Sun Zhige thought of the past scenes again, and saw that he still didn't know Sister Hua's safety, and he didn't have the ability to find Sister Hua, and his eyes suddenly became filled with tears. When Sun Zicang saw this, he immediately changed the topic, "By the way Zhige, I met a very interesting person on the way here this time. His name is Liu Qingxuan. He actually broke all the shackles. Only now can the saint mirror be able to withstand the devil of the underworld." *, You tell me whether he is powerful or not, I wanted to accept him as my disciple at that time, but the guy was very moved but didn't agree. I couldn't understand what he said about the system that didn't allow it." Sun Zhige came back to his senses, sighed, and replied: "With the current strength of the human race, anyone who can break all the shackles is indeed a talent. It is not impossible to resist the attack of the underworld. After all, the human race in the past... Forget it, let's not talk about it." "Second brother, I'm leaving. I will take over from you in ten years." "Well, okay, I'll leave this to the second brother, just be at ease." Seeing the second brother's careless behavior, Sun Zhige felt a little uneasy. Thinking about the second brother's strength, those foreign races probably wouldn't dare to come to the Starry Sky Ancient Road in the Demon Realm, so he felt relieved. To be continued...

I think it's okay. The outline, everyone has their own personality and it's pretty good

Happy New Year, author, please keep updating. Never be a eunuch.

I've been very anxious lately, really anxious, to the point of being depressed. It's almost four in the morning and I still can't sleep. Occasionally my hands shake when I write. I don't know why, maybe it's anxiety disorder. Nowadays, people are saying that no one reads fantasy, and fantasy is dead. Writing a book in fantasy is hellishly difficult and so on. But I really like fantasy. Of course I also like urban supernatural beings and Xia Xia. I also know that my writing is not good, and I am just a desperate writer. It's normal to be overwhelmed by this book. When I write books, I always want to write happily and entertain everyone. If you can. Now I want someone to comment on the feedback form, but I am also afraid of someone scolding me. I don't have any routine when writing books. I just write what I think. Thinking nonsense late at night, so be it. Good night.

Enmm, Elder Wang's portrayal is quite good. This kind of timid and fearful person sacrifices his life to protect his disciples because of his profession. Human nature itself is contradictory. However, Ye Haotian's portrayal does not seem to be so perfect at the moment. It only highlights his stupidity. He was blinded by the sudden power and acted unscrupulously with the help of his grandfather to protect him with his life. It is not like the protagonist of a book who survives to the end. I hope Ye Haotian can grow up. The author may be in a hurry. He is more impatient and the pace is faster. He should not be in a hurry and take his time and write more details. This kind of book is only good if everyone has a special point in their personality.

If this novel keeps writing like this, it should be no problem to get one star. In fact, I don't understand it. I don't know if it's the quality of the book or something else. I always feel that some of the five- and four-star novels are not good.

The master-level leopard head fell here, and he was inspired.

Is this the trashy master stream? Whether he is a human or a dog, he can control the protagonist. He killed a traitor and is still disgusting.

After watching half of it, I felt it was completely different. If the apprentice Ye Haotian wants to make him a clown, make him ugly, and if he wants to turn him into a good apprentice, make him kind. This makes him hate the protagonist involuntarily and blame the protagonist for everything. He wipes his butt with the old man all day long. He also says that he dares to love and hate and wants to repay his kindness to his senior sister. He also has brotherly love (although he is misunderstood) and says that the character is complicated, and the complexity becomes a pot of porridge. And the protagonist has no motivation. For example, according to Dou Po Cang Qiong, from the three-year agreement to find his father Yao Chen's disappearance until the finale, the protagonist has a clear goal. In your book, Ye Haotian has become a clown. He can just improve his strength and be done with it. Anyway, he has so many apprentices. Then what should I watch? Is the protagonist getting stronger? It doesn't make people feel like they are following the book. The author's writing is still good, but there are indeed a lot of shortcomings in the book. It would be better to write a vivid and interesting story outline before writing.

I can't hold on any longer! When I saw Auntie's first Taoist companion, I felt that too much emotion was wasted! I thought I could bear it, but it is really hard to bear. 1. The power collapses. At the beginning, he was like a half-saint like a dog. No matter how much he wrote, he never had a chance to perform below half-saint! However, the protagonists are always below half-saints and far more powerful than half-saints. Most of them face half-saints and above. Soon there were as many saints as dogs, three saints with one sword, and it became clear early on that the saints in the new map would become cannon fodder. The power of gods and demons suddenly appears again, and the life soul is led to the Hades level. Note that this is the protagonist who is still in the realm of half-saints, my God! The system collapses. . He is still a sect leader, and he is still prosperous, but a purely collapsed system. 2. The military and political collapse. Good and evil are in conflict, and the emperor has only one sword. There is no normal military and political system in the whole book, it is completely dispensable, and it is still about the four great dynasties. It is obvious that the description of the book is basically imitating the coercion of the Holy Land, and organizational discipline is not as good as a piece of cake. There is even no righteous organization in more than a hundred chapters, and there is no dynasty system. We only see sects governing the city, and we can't even see the dynasty's transportation and management model. The various sects did not have the same, and even the so-called sect mountain guarding formation of the protagonist did not develop in the same way. The semi-merged sects turned out to be similar to the layout of the Imperial City, but there was a sect center on the periphery. I just write whatever comes to my mind! Sudden raids destroyed the sect's mansion time and time again. In my mind, I still have a modern house and don't understand that sect buildings consume spiritual stones and other resources. I never understand how to go to a place with less loss, and still write it as a joke. Isn't it embarrassing? I won't say much more like this, the details of the outline are too random 3. It turns out that I skipped the military and political power system to watch the plot of recruiting disciples, and the fun gradually disappeared. Because accepting apprentices has become a no-brainer, and the concept of multiple masters has been forced into the Xianxia society, completely thinking that writing is enough. However, the master-disciple relationship in Xianxia is second only to or higher than the blood relationship. Even in modern times, the relationship between direct disciples is second only to blood, especially when it comes to the inheritance of high-precision technology and culture, which is the foundation of life, no joke, doctoral supervisors, master supervisors, old craftsmanship and skills inheritance, the direct disciples are very hard. High-level skills are comparable to the relationship between a modern master's tutor and above. Writing like this is just a temporary pleasure. Let's take a closer look. Can this be called a master-disciple? Send a book? It doesn't matter if it's fun to write, but later on, I will recruit a large number of disciples and finish the job on my knees, which makes me less and less distracted. Originally, transforming the school was a cool idea, but the external teachers fell apart immediately. As long as the disciple passed on from disciple to disciple, he could still be a master and apprentice. After the external recruitment, it turned out that the main character was just a nominal person. This was completely a failure of the master-disciple relationship. This was purely a student who really published a book. This master and apprentice is getting cheaper and cheaper, really not as good as the elite. Or change it to an education system, which is more reasonable. 4. When I saw the school collapsed, I jumped to see the male and female lines, but my aunt started the game, which was completely inconsistent with the previous one. . . . Has the outline changed again? The relationship between close relatives and master-disciple is inherently confusing, and there are countless realistic feelings. . . Si Nian must have collapsed. . Alas, it changed to this. . . No more souvenirs. . . I hope the author will start a new book and make the outline more detailed so as not to overstep the mark.

If the author has no idea, he should stop writing it. It's too uncomfortable. He can finish the story in one chapter but he has to write two chapters. Put a statue of Pobi, and he can't write clearly in two chapters. Why are there so many scenes about passers-by A, B, C and D? Can't you lower the quality just to mix up the word count? I'm really speechless, are we still waiting to see the clone? I wrote nonsense for two days

This master is omnipotent, but he can't do things like human affairs

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt so uncomfortable that I actually responded to the protagonist's complaints at the beginning. I thought there would be more normal operations later. He also said that what would happen if he was Liu Qingxuan. The typical example is that I can fuck me. Sinian's betrayal in the later period must be the original Liu Qingxuan's slutty operation in the later period. Now that the favorability is so good, it's okay not to continue to increase the favorability. I'm still thinking that I will betray in the future. As long as I don't do anything inappropriate now, I will definitely be a die-hard loyalist. If I don't take advantage of it, I will push it out. Oh, it's pretentious.

The character of the protagonist. . . Discourage them from the start.

Can this so-called "protagonist" be eliminated? It's really a bit disgusting. Even the protagonist in a novel is not one who can repay kindness with enmity, right? The elder fought the monsters because the "protagonist" stole eggs to save the "protagonist", but now he looks so arrogant and arrogant. Because the protagonist of this book is Liu, the author doesn't have to write this way in order to let readers distinguish the two "protagonists" and achieve the effect of siding with Liu, right? With such behavior and character, why does Jian Lao think he has a good character? It's true that I can't fix it. 😅

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, then don't write it. Is Niuniniao a man? It's just to cheat on the word count. Any normal man is as afraid of emotional matters as his master? Can't bear it or something? There is nothing unspeakable, don't force it

How should I put it? The highlight of the emotional drama at the beginning of this book is the various interactions between Bai Suyi and Si Nian before getting to know Bai Suyi. I believe that most people, under their preconceived notions, saw that in order to develop the plot and enrich the content, the author actually introduced Bai Suyi into the harem in an unreasonable way. This feels a bit "anti-setting". Coupled with the beginning of the plot of the Yin Yang Demon Sect in the later period, for some reason, the reading sense of the whole article became a bit white, just like the banquet that I was originally tasting suddenly lost most of its flavor, leaving only the lackluster cold dishes, which made people feel like they were stuck in the throat and couldn't spit out.

I don't want to read it after seeing multiple female protagonists. If you wanted multiple female protagonists, please tell me earlier. The character label is still a female supporting role, and the picture is originally about happiness. To be honest, I have written this time and I have always supported you. The original version is a bit disappointing.

I feel like it would be better not to write the character of Si Nian. If we don't want a heroine, we shouldn't write about a girl who has a crush on pig trotters Si Nian will have a crush on the protagonist, but every time the protagonist is like the plot in the novel he read before time travel, he is either prude or timid. You know what you are doing, and then you are chatting with that Ye Haotian, which makes me as horny as the novel I read before the time travel. It poisons me to death. Even if you delete the character of Simian, I can still read it, but you want to get a girl who has a crush on you, and then write it! I can't touch... This is Ye Haotian's woman... He will beat me... Why do you feel so confused? ..... It's useless if you change him back later❗ It's been like this in the past. Even if you change it later and kill Ye Haotian, what's the use? Everyone in the front is gone, who will watch the plot later?

Since several readers said they wanted a supporting role. Then I will open a building. But if you say yes, you may not necessarily adopt it, but I am a layman after all... (Crazy hint) Please leave: Name, identity and background, life soul, cause of death, relationship with the protagonist, etc. I may not necessarily adopt them all. For example, if I adopt a name, but the background or something does not match, I will change it. Those who can accept it can leave the supporting roles they want. Well, if not, just pretend I didn't say it.

I have to say that the female characters are really a mess. They are written with a lot of tenderness and delicacy. If they are not written well, they are just like fish bones, which makes them uncomfortable.

7 Million old people passing by on the street~

I feel that it is better for the author to go to 🍅. It does feel good when you should feel good. Why should you die at the starting point?

Hey, it seems that I spent about 20 yuan, and I decided to quit it after seeing Underworld. I am a bookworm with more than ten years of experience. Only you can't think of it. There is nothing I haven't read (here refers to the genre). I can basically cover all genres. It is indeed poisonous, but I can tolerate it 😁. It's just that the plot connection is really not well designed. I saw some people thinking that a gunman was hired because of this. Let's not talk about the emotional descriptions for now. The author definitely has shortcomings, but he also has many ideas. In fact, some ideas cannot coexist. It is normal for some newcomers to cram everything they want to write into one book. As a result, the writing power cannot meet the aesthetics. You have to make choices. A book must stick to its own soul. I must have read thousands of books through many apps. The author can do more research on the audience group. Every book has its approximate audience, but there are only a lot of people but a small number of people. A popular book must have as many audiences as possible and as many types as possible without contradicting each other. Categories include groups for son-in-law articles, groups for novice articles, groups for imaginative articles, etc. You have to know that in reality, many readers of novels or romance novels are actually middle-aged people in their forties or fifties 😁 There are also some silly books in the office, etc.

The author's previous writing is very interesting, but the relationship aspect is really not attractive. In fact, most people only watch the plot. It doesn't really matter if you have CP or not. You don't need to have the female protagonist at all. The male protagonist didn't express much love for Bai Suyi at the beginning. The relationship is gradual. The two became partners before they developed a deep relationship. It felt very casual. After seeing this, I don't know if the plot of the subsequent female protagonists will be the same.

If nothing else, Quan Ding, who is unknown to all, would be more refined?

It's always been a doppelgänger. Farewell. Fuck.

It looked really good in the early stage, but I didn't feel it when I saw the charges.

Dear author, could you please tell me how this book has anything to do with the anime "Self-Rescue Guide through Books"? I really just want to ask, the plot is really too similar.