One Piece Dimensional Communication Group

Hmm... First of all, the development is a bit too out-of-the-box, just like cross talk with sesame cakes. The baggage at the front has just been thrown out, and before the audience can taste it carefully, the baggage at the back is thrown out again, giving people a feeling of being in a cloud. Another point is the strength of the protagonist. I saw the pirate who was fighting a pirate on Pigeon Island who had a bounty of more than 10 million Baileys, was knocked away by the protagonist with one punch. We still don't know the protagonist's strength or the specific situation. There is not much description. The protagonist has become so strong inexplicably. Although the protagonist is currently exercising with Saitama's training method, you did not write it out. Is it useful? So it would be very baffling for the protagonist to suddenly become so strong. The summary of the plot is too abstract, and the ending and beginning are not connected, which will make the audience feel confused and confused. The protagonist's strength is not clearly described, which makes the audience feel confused. Overall, the idea is good, but the writing still needs some practice. Okay, I won't hit you either, come on! Hopefully I have raised these points. You can correct it.

Is this... A new generation trend?

Why write about Saitama's training? Saitama's training volume is just a warm-up level for Chaofan. There are many people in One Punch Man who train more than Saitama, but none of them are stronger than Saitama. Who gave the protagonist the illusion that he can become stronger by using Saitama's training method?

Good guy, after eating the communication fruit, can't you communicate with all realms by yourself? If you are not strong enough, just take your time. ™ When One Piece comes out, will the protagonist still be the protagonist? The protagonist in the meaning of the world, I slipped away.

Writing for primary school students😅

After reading the introduction, if you eat the Communication Fruit, you can communicate with all realms. Then, if you eat the Door Fruit, can you directly travel through time?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I slipped away, I personally don't like it! ! !

At the beginning, I was quite interested. When I saw the monsters from outside the world, I felt like they were playing together. When I recruited people, I didn't write down the characters of the members. I felt that the presence was too low in a flash.

There are more and more weird fruits these days

It's not good if there are local people in this group. Devil Fruit might as well be changed to a system

It seems that all the people in Zhan Chi's chat group are writing the animated version Obviously the original work is a comic. And the ending is different Tazimi did not die in the comics and had a child with Ma Yin

In the chapter, the God of Creation combined with the protagonist's Devil Fruit to create a dimensional group. The God of Creation is the administrator, and he is like a manager. He will introduce new people when they come, and he does his best. The leader of the group, the protagonist, self-destructs when he comes up. I am a time traveler, and I know your future and so on.

It feels like I'm looking at the chat history...

It really feels like a primary school student's composition...

Who is Lu Wen? The names of the protagonists in some chapters are wrong.

I feel that the Creator plot is really poisonous, and of course it may be a foreshadowing, but I can't stand it anymore. The Creator created the world of One Piece, so the Devil Fruit born in it must have been created by him. But you tell me, the Creator created the chat group based on the communication fruit of the protagonist, and he is only an administrator, and the protagonist is the group leader. I really feel confused. I can barely figure it out on my own, but why is the group leader the protagonist?

What a novice's novel. Not only can it communicate with non-intelligent creatures, but it can also make intelligent creatures obey. It is written like a running account. Yesterday I asked the water to give me fifty fish, and today I asked the water to give me sixty fish.

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Really good

It's a bit miserable, today is the 24th, monthly ticket is 0

Juejue~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply