Cause and Effect Red Envelope Group

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I don't know why, but I quit immediately when I saw the students starting the game. I haven't read the book yet. I clicked in because of the title.

Be careful, everyone, this is this year's new drug, go away!

Poison Three Chapters🙏Farewell

After reading the first dozen chapters, I found that the character creation of the protagonist and supporting characters was a bit poor, the plot was too fluid, and it seemed that the dialect was mixed in from the first chapter, which was a bit unclear.

Immortals have no personality and are no different from mortals. Since they are causal groups, things should have causes and effects. It feels like the protagonist talks to the group about what he wants, and various bosses give it to him. . The dragon is not as good as the snake, and there can be topics for chatting. The protagonist is also too eccentric. When one succeeds, one becomes arrogant

That's right! I was blown up by the treasure box

Come on, come on, future master 🤓🪖👍

After looking at the first few pictures, I have a preliminary story logic, but the writing style is not delicate enough, and it seems to be quite streamlined. Why can my girlfriend still swallow medicine when she is half-dead? Even if this medicine is a miracle medicine and melts in the mouth, you have to write it down. Then why does the girlfriend listen to the protagonist after taking medicine and sobering up? ? ? A normal person's first reaction should be who am I? Where am I? What am I doing? ? ? (For reference only, opinions only)