Hogwarts Academic Mastery System

Please don't add Eastern elements into Western fan fiction, it will make people look funny. If you don't write Eastern elements as well as Western magic, some people will say that you favor foreigners and don't understand the things of your ancestors. You set the Eastern elements to be very awesome, and you break the balance of the original power system every minute. You can't control it at all. Forcibly integrating it will only be embarrassing.

It is very similar to the poisonous egg setting, but the system feels useless. Adding extra-world settings will easily cause it to collapse. Also, it is best not to write about Eastern wizards, because it is easy to create drama if you write wizards as cultivators.

It seems a bit like licking a dog, doting on Hermione too much

Some people don't understand the purpose of your system. Can you briefly explain it? The same card has different star ratings. The difference lies in the qualifications. Does each card have a time limit after use? After reading it, I feel like it has nothing to do with the Xueba system.

How to say it? Anyway, I really don't like cultivating immortality in the magical world. I think that if you choose a Western one, you should choose a Western one. There are so many Western magical worlds, so having to make an Eastern one feels nondescript.

I feel that in an IP with a complete system like Harry Potter, we should not add things that have nothing to do with the system. Looking at the Populus euphratica wand, I feel that talking about the extinction of Populus euphratica and some things about God's will are a bit nonsense. Later, I saw that the Xueba system was actually used to obtain knowledge from other worlds. Does this have anything to do with Xueba being a dime? Or draw a card. Uncle Jiu was a poisonous one at the beginning. The core of his Maoshan Taoism must be catching ghosts. Catching ghosts in Harry Potter, catching that Professor of History of Magic? I feel it's too far-fetched. Your wand drawing talisman still uses magic power to evolve yin and yang.

Is your system a top-notch system? ? ! ! ! How many chapters have you studied, and Chapter 10 says that when school starts, you will show off in front of other students to gain academic points? ? ! ! This is a show-off system! ! ! Bye bye

The biggest poisonous point among Harry Potter fandoms is Hermione. Everyone wants to have sex with her, but they can't control the level of coquettishness and unreasonableness. Therefore, almost every fandom has to be criticized. However, some authors have changed it, but some are stubborn and don't feel like they are themselves. It's well written, brother, it makes money. If it's not shabby, you won't have money if you're stubborn. It's better to give up on Hermione and write about other heroines. Besides, if you want to fall in love with Hermione, just look at her face. If you can, I still hope to know some dirty information about her and don't be stupid.

Being beaten like this, I feel good about her. Not killing him after I finish my studies is already the greatest gift to him. Aren't all people the Virgin? How can you not feel dark after dying once?

Isn't it talking about the Xueba system? In what way is it the Xueba system?

What kind of Jb thing is this golden finger setting? What the hell is that overlay value? The card settings are not clearly written either. It's better not to have this golden finger. Even after using the cards, I feel that there is no effect at all.

The protagonist is full of inner drama, and why do you all love Hermione? Just live it all over again?

The Copying Curse is another protagonist who uses the Copying Curse. What is created by the copying spell should not be permanent! Why do we need the Philosopher's Stone if it exists forever? Just copy a pile of gold and that's it!

Apart from absorbing the Obscurus at the beginning and opening the Occlumency technique, the sensory system has no use.

This shouldn't be Qidian's first book, right? I feel like the main character is too childish and the system is simply redundant.

After reading it, I don't know what the purpose of rebirth or the system is. Who is the protagonist of this book? Either it has a lot of words or it's the protagonist. What about your own plot? The first few chapters are interesting, but the rest is the original work. Is it so easy to make money? ?

I might as well ask where Ron is? Many HP fans always think that the role of Ron is not important, but I think Ron is actually very important to Harry Potter, or the love of Ron's family for Harry is very important. He and his parents are the complement of Harry's friendship and family love. Without Ron's friendship and the love of his family, Harry might well have gone the same way as Voldemort. Although the protagonist's friendship with Harry is included in this book, Ron's friendship is still indispensable. The protagonist is a mentor-type friend, while Ron is a close friend.

Really, I have read so many Harry novels that I almost vomited after reading all the plots before the second grade, including before entering school. The first few dozen chapters are always very painful, except for the occasional few masterpieces.

As soon as I saw Chapter 15, I couldn't stand it anymore. There's no need to praise the West and try to criticize the East. According to the traditional mythology, the system of cultivation is inherently different. Is it necessary to make comparisons?