Become a Witcher in the World of Tokyo

It's a good book, and it's even finished before it's on the shelves. It's better than a few books on the shelves! Thank you very much!

Being shitted by a psychopathic woman N times, either in public or privately, is not a description, it is really shitted. The protagonist can also lick it. It can be called the first licking in the beginning, awesome. This Shennong has died suddenly, you continue

I found this book by accident. It's great. Let's not talk about it. As long as it doesn't collapse, judging from its current state, there is no problem with the quality.

I don't have any memory of the previous life. To be honest, I don't really want to read it. Let's wait until the book is out to read it!

The background setting is too trivial. It's just a third-rate vulgar romance novel. It's boring, vulgar, and all kinds of mentally retarded.

The author has a twisted character, and arranges for the protagonist to be beaten constantly, and is beaten while being treated. . The cowardly protagonist... In real life, if a random person beats you up for no reason, you can still smile at him? ? ?

The writing is average, but it's too licky.

Thank you to the author for persisting in writing this book.

This book, which is not on the shelves, is actually the most updated among the books I am reading now. It is really a source of love.

There was still some market for this kind of pure YY novel a few years ago, but now it can only be said to be a bit disgusting, and the writing style is somewhat refined 😰

I have read this book three or four times, so let me tell you. First☝🏻The writing of this book is childish, and many of the wordings are childish and embarrassing Second☝🏻The construction of the worldview is very good. This is what attracts me the most. Whether it is the cultivation system, social structure or humanistic atmosphere, I like it very much. Huan, it can also be seen that the author spent a lot of thought on it Thirdly, there are still flaws in the character creation. On the one hand, the author's writing skills are insufficient and it is difficult to control multiple characters. On the other hand, the plot is out of balance in the early and middle stages, creating a gap. In the early stages, the author put a lot of effort into many characters, such as Yu Qinglin, Xie Caiwei, Xie Yuhang, Kong Jian, etc. The characters were more distinct, more three-dimensional, and more harmoniously integrated with the plot. However, in the middle and later stages, many characters became perfunctory, such as the typical Tang Tang and Xia Yuxin. Fourth ☝🏻The plot is relatively smooth and not too abrupt, but due to the writing style, it is still a bit awkward. Some plot settings are quite uncomfortable, such as the "Black Car Case" and "Trial of Another World Transformed into a War Game", etc., Which are a bit awkward. The "brilliance" of the protagonist is not really written. It can only be said to be "smart". It feels a bit forced and cannot complete the smooth transition of the plot. Fifth ☝🏻 The control is still not good enough. One is that the description is a bit straightforward, and the other is that the battle scenes are seriously lacking. The pleasure comes from contrast, but there are many "gaps" in the novel but few "contrasts", which makes it difficult to give people pleasure. There are really too few battle scenes. To put it bluntly, it just means "crushing", which is meaningless. In other words, even if it is crushing, it should be a bit satisfying, but it really isn't. To sum up, the flaws do not hide the advantages

The protagonist is the biggest cheat, but the writing is really good, better than 95% of the novels. I don't know why I didn't sign the contract, but I still gave me the only ticket.

This book is a rare masterpiece in a big environment. The characters' IQs are online. It's pretty good.

This book by the author is a bit sadistic, but that's what I like! Please reply and communicate

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

It is recommended that the author write about the daily adventure of the adventure. The competition for favor does not seem very good, and it feels that the profit-seeking factor is too strong. 😥😥😥

Those wives are not as good as concubines, the protagonist is really a loser

Very vulgar, the writing is quite young. But overall there are no major flaws, and there is no particular description that feels inconsistent. The character setting is quite suitable for young people between the ages of fourteen and eighteen. In a sense, it can be regarded as a campus novel with the appearance of cultivating immortals, but it is still the kind without scheming and intrigue. It is more suitable for people who want to relax and look back on the happy times when they were fifteen or sixteen years old. If it was a pretty good book in one or two years ago, it would be too immature in today's environment, but it's really pretty good.

Emotionally speaking, the girls in the Demon Hunting Group are more affectionate than this junior sister who appears out of nowhere. The protagonist probably has a deeper affection for the girl in the Demon Hunting Group. After all, they are comrades who are fighting together, and this junior sister is just a stranger! You still show off your face to others, you have no self-awareness! The protagonist shouldn't get used to it. Although she thought the protagonist was still her former senior brother, after all, the protagonist knew what was going on. In terms of closeness, she was far behind! Moreover, this junior sister is so self-righteous when she appears, it's disgusting!

The work is very beautiful, I can't wait for this book to become a hit.

After reading the previous point, I found a huge problem. How did the protagonist pass the body seizing test? Was it vaguely carried away by the author?