A Demon Hunter in Tokyo’s Manifestation World

Being shitted by a psychopathic woman N times, either in public or privately, is not a description, it is really shitted. The protagonist can also lick it. It can be called the first licking in the beginning, awesome. This Shennong has died suddenly, you continue

I found this book by accident. It's great. Let's not talk about it. As long as it doesn't collapse, judging from its current state, there is no problem with the quality.

The background setting is too trivial. It's just a third-rate vulgar romance novel. It's boring, vulgar, and all kinds of mentally retarded.

I don't have any memory of the previous life. To be honest, I don't really want to read it. Let's wait until the book is out to read it!

The author has a twisted character, and arranges for the protagonist to be beaten constantly, and is beaten while being treated. . The cowardly protagonist... In real life, if a random person beats you up for no reason, you can still smile at him???

I have read this book three or four times, so let me tell you. First☝🏻The writing of this book is childish, and many of the wordings are childish and embarrassing Second☝🏻The construction of the worldview is very good. This is what attracts me the most. Whether it is the cultivation system, social structure or humanistic atmosphere, I like it very much. Huan, it can also be seen that the author spent a lot of thought on it Thirdly, there are still flaws in the character creation. On the one hand, the author's writing skills are insufficient and it is difficult to control multiple characters. On the other hand, the plot is out of balance in the early and middle stages, creating a gap. In the early stages, the author put a lot of effort into many characters, such as Yu Qinglin, Xie Caiwei, Xie Yuhang, Kong Jian, etc. The characters were more distinct, more three-dimensional, and more harmoniously integrated with the plot. However, in the middle and later stages, many characters became perfunctory, such as the typical Tang Tang and Xia Yuxin. Fourth ☝🏻The plot is relatively smooth and not too abrupt, but due to the writing style, it is still a bit awkward. Some plot settings are quite uncomfortable, such as the "Black Car Case" and "Trial of Another World Transformed into a War Game", etc., Which are a bit awkward. The "brilliance" of the protagonist is not really written. It can only be said to be "smart". It feels a bit forced and cannot complete the smooth transition of the plot. Fifth ☝🏻 The control is still not good enough. One is that the description is a bit straightforward, and the other is that the battle scenes are seriously lacking. The pleasure comes from contrast, but there are many "gaps" in the novel but few "contrasts", which makes it difficult to give people pleasure. There are really too few battle scenes. To put it bluntly, it just means "crushing", which is meaningless. In other words, even if it is crushing, it should be a bit satisfying, but it really isn't. To sum up, the flaws do not hide the advantages

There was still some market for this kind of pure YY novel a few years ago, but now it can only be said to be a bit disgusting, and the writing style is somewhat refined 😰

The writing is average, but it's too licky.

Thank you to the author for persisting in writing this book.

This book, which is not on the shelves, is actually the most updated among the books I am reading now. It is really a source of love.