I Have a Big River in Shanhaijing

Give me some comments: I read it very quickly, but your subject matter and content are suitable for reading slowly, which makes this work a niche. Niche niche does not mean there is no market, but your style of words and sentences has blocked a group of readers who are interested in the Classic of Mountains and Seas but are not particularly focused on it. The above two are general issues. As for the details, I think you will do better than most readers, otherwise you would not dare to be so hard-core. Generally speaking, the author's skills will be stronger than those of ordinary readers, which is worth looking forward to. If the story is about storytelling, you should read it slowly. (I found that I kept encountering authors whose writing skills were better than others but whose styles were niche... Am I the Savior Zero? Ahem.) 🥵

The writing is good, but the first two chapters are too discouraging. Writing about a big setting such as the prehistoric universe will make people feel a little tired. If you are a newcomer to a new book and you don't have a certain number of fans, you still have to write something eye-catching. To put it bluntly, it is just telling a story. The plot of the first two chapters is too weak.

This book was conceived after reading the Classic of Mountains and Seas. Nowadays, the Classic of Mountains and Seas is not well understood by the public. In fact, the Classic of Mountains and Seas is a book on geography, medicine, animals, history, and minerals. There are many mythological stories that evolved from it. It was actually very painful when I was writing it. Maybe the writing style is not enough to fully describe the connotation of the Classic of Mountains and Seas. I will improve in the future. People, just write more. I hope that reading this book will give everyone a different experience of mythology, the Classic of Mountains and Seas, and pre-Qin mythology. I didn't write the first few chapters well, so I hope you'll be considerate. I'll make it more concise in the following chapters, focus on the key points, and describe the Classic of Mountains and Seas. However, I like to describe it in detail and use more delicate words. I don't know if this style of writing will be accepted by everyone. 😠😠😠😠😠 Come on, code words! The coding is still too slow now. For now, one chapter a day, one chapter is 3,000 words. After you get familiar with it, you can speed up later. Thank you for your support! Thank you for the beating! Eat fish!

I won't say anything but collected it, it's a great book.

Already collected. Already recommended. The investment has been used up this month, so there is no investment. I originally wanted to invest, but it was so embarrassing. Laugh.

I read the first four chapters again. Can these settings and worldviews allow the protagonist to lead the readers to explore step by step? I have not read The Classic of Mountains and Seas, but the new author writes like this. I am really worried about you 🤤🤤

Don't be shy, author. I invested and pursued it.

I just want to say 666, come on, big man, tell the story of the Classic of Mountains and Seas. There must be people who are curious about the Classic of Mountains and Seas, but have never understood it. Thanks to you for popularizing it through this book and letting readers understand it.

It's like a fairy tale, but I don't know the pronunciation of some words, which makes me embarrassed.

Will the book be completed ahead of schedule without being put on the shelves?

I have a brief opinion about the ranks, taking Taoism as an example: First level: Taoist priest - familiar with Taoist classics, he could be a scholar in ancient times Second level: mage-acquired one true method to practice internally, qualified for ritual rituals Third level: high skill-governing one scripture Classic, high in power and profound in Dharma Level 4: True Immortal - has been in Taoism for a long time, and clearly understands the true nature Level 5: Immortal - both human and immortal, gradually leaves the mortal body, and refines the Dharma body Level 6: True Immortal - the soul and Dharma body have been perfected, and are no longer ordinary people. It's like it was made innately. ………… Hope it will be helpful to the author.

A big river full of water has been invested. Come on, author

Some names from the Classic of Mountains and Seas should be quoted, and quoting from classics is also very good.

First of all, I was confused when I read it, and then the text was quite impressive 👍 (Just commenting casually @_@)

This book gives people a bright feeling. Although I am not familiar with Classics of Mountains and Seas, I think it is suitable for people like me who are short on books.

I don't know what the hell it was written about. I only know a way of writing that is not suitable for web articles. Hope the next book will be better!

The author's settings are so heavy and attractive!

The writing is pretty good, but it's not very comfortable to read.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

My destiny is up to me and not to others. If others don't do what I want, it means destroying humanity, so what! Reopen the world and create humanity again