Dawn of Cataclysm

The sister in my childhood dream appears in front of me. The beginning is very attractive. The writing style is good, but the details are a bit lacking. It would be nice to have more descriptions.

1. From the introduction, it seems that it is an apocalyptic novel. After reading the first three chapters, there is no apocalyptic atmosphere at all. 2. The character appeared. I didn't remember the name of the protagonist? 3. From the beginning, is the author introducing Goldfinger? Jumping from the earth to the blue star all at once, when I saw the blue star, I was a little at a loss. Where is the blue star? Appearing directly without any foreshadowing, I was very confused! 4. What is the world background of the novel? The author introduces the ethereal thing throughout the whole article. Why not give a good introduction to the background of the world and explain what your universe system is?

Sure! Not bad! The content structure is okay, and the subject matter is also a completely new direction. It can be regarded as a new trend in the system flow! But the details should be more detailed.

Because the post was deleted due to violation of regulations, I couldn't reply in time, so I came to guest post and read it by the way. The writing is great, keep up the good work.

The writing style is unique and unique. It's very beautiful. I look forward to the update.

I thought it was like Dawn of the Epoch

I really like this type of novel. Please recommend others of the same type.