Uncle Nine Says I Have an Immortal Aura

Due to the slow update of the author, our organization decided to send the author to the United States

Typos greatly affect the viewing experience. Please help me catch bugs. You can explain the chapters and sentences downstairs, or you can just mark this chapter and someone will seriously revise it. Thanks in advance, thank you! PS: A balding middle-aged man with disabled hands and short-sightedness. Although he checked each chapter several times, he still inevitably missed something (face covering).

Write less of those poisonous paragraphs. If you can't stand it, don't write if you don't know how to get along with women. Don't be like the heroine. The part with Qingqing is really too poisonous.

If you don't want a heroine, don't deliberately arrange for her to appear. If you deliberately arrange it, then say "I just want to practice by myself…" Don't you feel awkward writing it yourself?

Evaluation: The protagonist is very vulgar. The author may want to describe him as cold and handsome, devoted to Taoism. However, too many descriptions of the protagonist's appearance without matching the pursuit of Taoism immediately make the protagonist unbearably vulgar Perhaps it is to highlight the handsomeness of the protagonist. , Tingting is a pretty dog in the author's writing, and the female ghost is a pretty dog in the author's writing. The protagonist also has many ambiguous psychological descriptions of Tingting. He curses and thinks in his heart, it is really disgusting and obscene Perhaps to emphasize the protagonist's awesomeness, the author keeps writing about Uncle Jiu. You praise the protagonist and the protagonist's disdain for Qiu Sheng's literary talent is almost undisguised. No matter as a practitioner or as an elder of Qiu Sheng's literary talent, you are not a normal mentality And judging from the contact with Master Ren, you only took ten A few oceans are for the show to Uncle Jiu. The protagonist may not love money, but he definitely doesn't regard money as nothing. He doesn't mind the protagonist's desires, but this kind of forced pretending not to care is really about cultivating a chicken path I hope these insights can help the author improve his work.

It turned out to be a shocking novel, but it has been withdrawn. When the protagonist appears, he is a passerby and a supporting character. His appearance is shocking, and his spells are shocking.

There is also a person named Lin Yujiao, hahaha

The protagonist is just doing this to return merit, haha, do you want to laugh to death in Chapter 7?

It's getting more and more ugly since Shi Feiyue's appearance. The protagonist has been tolerant in every possible way. He broke into someone else's pure land and saved the protagonist once, but then he went crazy and jumped off a cliff. What the hell does it have to do with the protagonist? The protagonist is familiar with her? Do you have to keep licking?

Complaints, a mortal Taoist priest who has never received a golden elixir has ever seen an immortal? The fairy spirit he talks about is as funny as the beggar saying that steamed buns are more delicious than the Man-Han Banquet