Danlu Xianhua

Yes, it was a bit unbearable at the beginning. I felt that some of the words were used too much. For example, when writing about the heroine, every sentence about the heroine should start with a big wink. However, later on, I didn't see the big wink included. It became more and more exciting and worth watching!

It feels pretty good! 😁😁The writing is mature and the characters have distinct personalities🤭

The author's writing is really good, it would be nice if there were more chapters every day!

When I first started watching it, I felt that the character was rather childish, like a little girl. Maybe the character is really young, but it just feels a bit weird.

After reading a few chapters, I always felt that the writing was going to be a Madonna and Mary Sue. It shouldn't be a pure cultivation novel. I wanted to see monsters defeated and upgraded, but I didn't like that the heroine had too many so-called relatives who were holding her back. I was confused.

Suddenly I felt that the following plot was a bit boring, it felt like it was repeating the plot of Tianxiang Continent, and Duan Zihua could never be beaten to death...

I hope the author will continue to write about things after God Realm

The heroine is a woman. How old are the children? She speaks like "Grandpa" and shuts up about "Grandpa". She grew up in the world of cultivating immortals. Most of the time, I see older people calling me "Senior". Anyway, when I see a woman calling the heroine "Grandpa", I feel goosebumps. There is a sense of embarrassment that the heroine is a little girl.

The plot framework still needs to be strengthened

As soon as the author writes about Duan Zihua, he becomes smarter. From the Qi training stage to the golden elixir, he didn't kill anyone, just like a psoriasis The heroine clearly saw Duan Zihua's disguise and hypnotized herself. She shouldn't be Duan Zihua. She didn't even mention it to the male protagonist who was traveling with her, and was kidnapped by Duan Zihua in the end I don't quite understand. The purpose of writing this is not only to make readers have high blood pressure, which is a very clumsy plot arrangement, but the biggest flaw in the whole text is the scenes related to Duan Zihua After more than a hundred chapters, Duan Zihua started to have a tendency to whitewash and become the second male lead. An evil cultivator who tried every means to use the heroine as a furnace began to analyze his mental journey. I was scared to watch it😬

Overall, the overall story concept is good, the writing is good, and the logic is good. It can continue to be a sequel. Some small bugs are quite good in the female author's fairy tales. Come on💪!