The Dark Night Heritage of the Superpower World

A royal plot, I feel like it could add some variables and more plump supporting characters

Come on (*'▽'*)♪

It looks a bit scary, hahaha

I just want to know if anyone comes to see it. If so, please leave your name. Thank you very much.

First, character setting, give the characters some words and describe their appearance, can you? The protagonist, Nie Shinan, is a thief, has supernatural powers, cheats and cheats, but what next? Chi Xueyu (eating cod?) Flame, female, fierce, and then what? Ding Ming, a man, a fat man, a turtle shell, and then what? You have explained the appearance of the supporting role, there is no distinction between priority and priority. This is the character you showed me. Second, the plot, a stranger who has never met meets the male protagonist by chance, and then talks to the male protagonist for a while, and then completely gives up his vulnerable side to the protagonist? No foreshadowing at all, suddenly crying? ? ? If you are using a protagonist, you must also use the character's words to inform the reader. Otherwise, can you move this plot back a little bit, and wait until the protagonist gets familiar with her and has a foreshadowing, then it won't be too late to throw it out again. Don't you think it's awkward? I'm embarrassed to death. Third, the author's will. When writing, do not incorporate your emotions or other thoughts into the text. Everything in the text serves the plot and the world in the text. The author's existence is only to use words to assist in forming this world. Instead of asking you to blend in, use your words to participate. Look at other big-written books. Are there any that embarrass your own views and thoughts about the characters in the text? Overall evaluation, the writing style is acceptable, the story is acceptable, it is a bit cliche, but I can tell what plot is going to happen next, which lowered my curiosity. It is recommended that the character be fleshed out and not leave the paper person to the readers. Let's delve into the plot a little more, at least not letting readers guess what happens next. In the first battle, you can choose that the protagonist loses, and then the woman comes to find the male protagonist, and the woman's fiancé is angry, and continues to cause trouble for the male protagonist, and the woman is angry, and troubles her fiancé. The male protagonist comforts the woman, and naturally becomes the woman's best friend, and then duels with the woman's fiancé, and then loses again, and continues to practice, with the woman accompanying him, and then naturally takes the woman into his harem, and then the protagonist goes out and crushes the woman's fiancé. This simple matter is enough for you to write hundreds of thousands of words. _(:з∠)_Come on!

Come on and update, author, I will collect it here first.