Storm Lament

Rookie Book Review (01) Ah, let me express my feelings in one sentence: It's beautiful! ! So cool! Your book has been added to my top list, please update it! Let me talk about my feelings: ①First impression: As the boss on the top floor said, I was confused when I first read it - suddenly the bones of a certain family were stolen, which also led to the interpretation of the background of the times, which is still not that common in the books I read. But after reading it later, I found that the advantage of writing like this is: Firstly, it saves the complexity of subsequent descriptions, because a book like this that seems to have a grand structure cannot avoid describing the worldview. If there is a necessary explanation at the beginning, then this part can be omitted at the end, and it will be natural to supplement it. (In short, I just don't agree with the top floor). Secondly, if you handle it like the author does, you can introduce the main characters. I think it is quite fast and natural, not abrupt at all. ②Plot: When I first read it, I had a feeling that this book seemed a bit like the beginning of "A Mortal's Biography of Immortality"? The plot of Fatty Han coming to take Han Li to Qixuanmen is slightly similar to the plot where the clown ran away with the protagonist, although there are still differences. In short, this kind of beginning is still attractive to readers like me who are used to reading fairy tales. Compared with the same period last year, I recently read a book written by a newcomer called "The Perfection of Witchcraft". The author is also talking about mortals cultivating witchcraft. But I don't mean to criticize them. To be honest, I think the world view of the book "The Great Witch" is a bit confusing... So in comparison, it is the book written by the author that makes me feel more involved. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. There are many advantages in that book. You can read it and learn from it. ③Language and writing style: In my opinion, although the writing style of this article is not particularly superb, the connection in some places is a bit abrupt. For example, in the first chapter, when describing the protagonist skipping classes as usual, there is also a sentence called: "Familiarity with magic texts is a required course for every nobleman when he is young." I also read some in subsequent articles, but I won't list them here. But! The above idea is actually based on my own reading habits and may not be correct. In short, the author's writing style is quite skillful and the rhythm is well controlled. I read it without realizing it. Finally, although my book review is terrible 😁, I will always pay attention to your book and try to update it

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is good and fluent. The story setting is relatively general. The overall impression is acceptable and edible. The plot setting lacks a bit of flavor, come on!

To be honest, when I first wrote it, there was something missing, and the plot was a bit abrupt at first. I think it should be introduced bit by bit, leaving the suspense for a while, to enhance the reader's stickiness and keep reading. The writing is good, but I think it could use more words to describe and portray the characters.

Personally, I think there is nothing wrong with the author's big opening, it is still a relatively passionate story. I like stories that don't have too many cheats at the beginning, so that I can feel the growth of the protagonist~

Finally got up the courage to post a book on the male channel~

Come on! ! ! Go! ! ! Update soon! ! ! !

Thanks. I will read it carefully and have received and reviewed it.

Well written, keep up the good work.

It's amazing👍I think the author also has a strong soul in his heart.

Very comfortable, please update!

Received, come on 😊😊😊

Is the website shortcoming coming? I'm so panicked 😢😢😢