The Age of Contractual Reincarnation

After reading the first few chapters, I felt that this could have been done, the story flowed very well, and the writing was average to above average. However, I personally don't know much about the fantasy category, and I am not very familiar with some of the exclusive vocabulary in it. Then, I put together a few suggestions: 1. I don't know if all fantasy categories are like this. In short, as a stranger, the author's introduction is not too eye-catching. It is better to respect the market as much as possible without touching the bottom line of creation. 2. It is obvious that the author has a foundation for writing in large letters. At least he will not make small mistakes like paragraphing, but... The protagonist is a bit self-indulgent. Half of a chapter is about his inner drama. I feel that there is still a need for improvement here, but there is no need to change it if it has been written before. Just pay more attention to it later. 3. In addition to psychological description, I personally suggest that action description can more directly portray the image of the character. This is not to say that psychological description is not good, but I just want to say that the author can try to intersperse and mix it up. (The above are all personal suggestions. I am a bit venomous. I hope the author can learn from them as appropriate and discard the bad)

Tomorrow, the content of the first few chapters of the work will be optimized and rectified, so updates will be suspended for one day. There was a problem with saving the manuscript. Subsequent updates will be stable. Someone has already told me about certain problems with the content. Thank you for your support.

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Well written, keep up the good work!

I am a book fan for five years but not an author. I would like to mention some of the more useful methods that I have learned from somewhere and I hope you can take a look at them. Three golden chapters, the first few plots are compact, refreshing and more attractive Try not to repeat the modal words as much as possible When describing the protagonist nb, you must not boast (except for some humorous plots)

Very good. After watching half of it, I feel that the characters are very distinct. Don't stop updating.

Well, when I look at the title of the book, I don't know what it's trying to express, which is the theme. But after looking at the content, it's pretty ok. The world view is grand, the writing is excellent, and the sense of characters is a bit weak, probably because the characters are poorly drawn.

The world view is broad, the writing is good, the concept is exquisite, and the description of the characters is broad. Come on. Feedback and evaluation from each other

Although it is only three chapters, the self-righteous character of Leonard, who can be said to be a mere stranger, is highlighted, and some of the settings of this work can be understood from the inner dialogue. Come on! Support!

Not bad. The article is quite detailed. I personally feel it is a bit dry. I have already invested and I am looking for mutual support.