My Wife Is Not a White Snake

Here I Come This book is generally good and well polished (the author must have been polishing it for more than a month). I like it very much and was recommended by a friend. Come on Oli, I believe you, I am also a fan of Li Bai (I hope the protagonist can get Brother Bai's sword and inheritance)

I think this book is very interesting. I am interested in this book. Please don't give me a reward of 1,000 points. It is best to make a plan and write 2,000 chapters. We will see how it goes on the shelves. The protagonist is kind-hearted and must have a good grasp of the connection between leaving to cultivate immortality and caring about the people, his family, and the people in the village. This is a difficult point recently. I read it on QQ and came here when I saw that the author said it was a starting point book. 🤓 I have been reading novels for 12 years and have experience in reading them. I will point out some points that need attention. How to write them specifically is up to you, the author. I just like to discover new good books. The book Jiuxing Poisonous Milk has just released its 50th chapter and I followed it. The result is not bad. I think the author's book still has great potential. Once written, it will not be worse than Poisonous Milk. Good luck, author.

What is that follow-up reading? How to collect it?

The recommendation position will be officially launched at 2 pm tomorrow afternoon and will be updated three times a day. I hope you will support me!

Come on, the author, keep at it. I'm really looking forward to the world in your mouth.

The book is good, and the writing is okay. It's not popular because the pace is a bit slow, or I just don't feel comfortable reading it. Let's look at daily paddling at the beginning. The protagonist can be strong or not, and supporting characters such as the villager crocodile are no problem. If you keep paddling, it's no problem. But if you want to follow the Liao Zhai style, you must greatly strengthen the halo of the protagonist, let alone integrate the prehistoric world. Personally, I suggest that you arrange a golden finger to strengthen the protagonist's strength, follow a daily flow, describe more daily life, and find some points to make some jokes. Or delete the procrastinating plot and create a hero who kills decisively and uses the background of the times to rise up as a villain. In the end, I still didn't enjoy watching it. The lack of strength of the protagonist was quite worrying. Real life is bad enough, at least read novels and have fun.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Being smart, I have already figured out the plot for the future. .

If you invest over 100, I will give you a small recommendation, please

Why delete yesterday's chapter about Mao and repost it?

The protagonist's golden finger is not obvious, the strength or the team's speed of getting stronger is a little slow, and it is a bit sadistic and may not be what everyone likes to watch. I suggest you arrange some adventures with Golden Finger for the protagonist, and don't forget to describe White Snake. There are many chapters without White Snake, so don't forget the title of the book.

Is this the route of dynasty hegemony or the route of personal cultivation of immortality? Also, will the character of the protagonist be more mature in the future? Anyone who achieves great things must be ruthless and decisive regardless of his ability. I feel like complaining when I see the blacksmith. Isn't this a gamble? Respecting freedom is right, but it is also relative. The right thing to do is to minimize the danger. I hope the author can realize the responsibility he bears. I don't mean any harm, I'm just complaining, please forgive me if it's offensive.

I don't know when the next recommendation will be. It may be on the shelves naked. I hope everyone will support me.

He lifted the coffin and carried it away, shouting. ,,

The ordinary villagers, except for the protagonist, have poor qualifications and basically have no hope of becoming immortals. As a protagonist, you must travel all over the world. The world of cultivating immortals is very dangerous and the journey is long, so you can't carry a bunch of baggage with you wherever you go. As the protagonist of the counterattack flow, he has no resources except his grandfather. His growth is bound to rob the resources of a large number of sects. The higher the cultivation level, the higher the enemy's strength will be. Taking the villagers with him is really leaving his weakness to others. The pace of the farming story is very slow, so it is more appropriate to lead the villagers. As for the counterattack flow, most of the protagonists take less than a hundred years from acquiring the old man to ascending to the throne.

The protagonist's strength improves very slowly. Xu Xian next door has already become brothers with the Lord of Hell in more than 40 chapters. .