The Immortal Man in Baiyun Palace

Not bad, add a bookshelf, come on

Here's a suggestion: if you want the protagonist to act cool, don't keep emphasizing that you need to be low-key. If you want to be low-key, don't force the protagonist to act cool all the time.

To tell a joke, the eunuchs of the Millennium Dynasty were in power🤭🤭

I have written 14,000 words since this morning. Wearing a pig's trotter and a big b. There are currently 150,000 manuscripts in stock.

The part where I saw Takeo dying violently was really unbearable. Everything I wrote before was good, but I had to add a prodigal son and a wretched man. Does he deserve the word prodigal? I suggest changing it. If the protagonist is really born, he should treat the people of the world like ordinary civilians. In my opinion, the protagonist is actually the same as Xiaoyao Hou, both are accomplices of rapists. This part is really disgusting to me.

He talks about being low-key and low-key, but he constantly looks for opportunities to show off and meddle in other people's business.

The names of gods and goddesses in the book are all there. I vomited. A woman is named Wang Tiejian, a man is named Wu, etc.??? Am I asking this question because I have doubts?

Queen Li, Liu Qiuqiu, Li Qiaoqi, Wang Tiejian, this author is really a genius at naming names. The subject matter is novel and the plot is very poisonous. He is either pretending to be cool or pretending to be cool and punching in the face.

Wuxia is not martial arts, Xianxia is not Xianxia, ​​Xianwu is even more incompatible, Liaozhai lacks a bit of flavor, and the whole thing is nondescript and a bit different.

I am confused and confused, what exactly do you want to talk about, what do you want to write about the main line? Are you going to write a transcendent protagonist? After reading a few chapters, I was really confused... The names of people are not as good as those of Zhang San and Li Si. What about Li Qiaoqi, Wang Xiaojiang, Zhang Baishi 😅 and Li Keke and Liu Kekou?

He is obviously invincible but no one can save him

Coming from the Extraordinary Earl, the last book was really good and I have high expectations for this one, but to be honest, I am a bit disappointed. I said I am a cultivator but I have not seen any cultivators at all. It is said that a martial artist can live for two or three hundred years. The elements such as city gods and demons that appear have nothing to do with the plot. I don't know what I want to write. It feels a bit useless. I will wait and see. If it doesn't work, just quit 😐

The four dissimilarities are tasteless and can be discarded.

There is no future for the author to write like this.

The author's writing is first-rate and the characters are brilliant. Why is the plot not great?

You are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, you are so poisonous. . . . .

After reading dozens of chapters, I still can't find any connection between the content of this book and the title. I feel like it's just a martial arts with a bit of ghosts and gods. I don't have the patience to read any more.

Lao Lu is still worthy of the protagonist. He doesn't notice the difference in the protagonist's soul. He thinks he is better than the protagonist and uses the formation. He doesn't forcefully kill the protagonist to avoid the embarrassment of a thousand-year friendship. He also doesn't kill the protagonist's apprentice and Li Xiaomei. He just leaves. How can you evaluate the evil spirit of the demon? Demons eat people just like humans eat animals. Lao Lu still has feelings. Personally, I have always felt that Li Xiaomei's existence is poisonous. He has to protect his sister for the rest of his life. He has a single-minded partner and accepts other people.

It's rubbish. It's okay at the beginning. The more you write, the more confusing it becomes. Pig's feet have no sense of justice and are just pretending. There is no sense of substitution. Abandon the book!

Always pretending, but also pretending to be understated. The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes.

It feels a bit confusing, I don't know what the protagonist is going to do

Doesn't the author have an outline? The more he writes, the more confusing he becomes.

There is a reason why there are so few tickets. It can be seen that the author wants to write more deeply, but the overall idea feels messy and disorganized. It goes from one end to the other. It makes me confused. Please support me with four tickets. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

After reading three chapters, the author's writing and descriptions are terrible, and his sentences are full of errors. I don't know how you can continue reading. Did your writing get better later? Otherwise, this score is fake.

Except for the emphasis on low-keyness at the beginning and the pretentiousness later on, which gave me a bad feeling about the classic routine writing (it felt a bit like trying to sell a dog's meat over someone else's head:), the rest of it was pretty good. The level was at least above average, and it was a piece of food. I won't go into details until you read the writing yourself. I saw more than 30 pictures when I posted this post, but I stopped reading them later, for personal reasons. I used to read too many routine articles, but then I stopped reading them. I was attracted by the title of the book when I clicked on it. Later, I thought the first few pictures said the protagonist was low-key and thought it was similar to a senior brother's steady article. After reading a few pictures, I found that the protagonist's family has been living in poverty for more than a thousand years. Is this generation ready to be stubborn? I lost interest in reading it later.

If you want to be invincible, then be invincible. If you want to show off, just show off, okay? What is the main line? Is this a diary?

I read the book based on the title and read a few chapters. It's not bad. Keep up the good work.

After basically reading it, it became more and more boring. I feel that the author made a mistake by forcing the villain of Wuweiwen to have a high IQ... Then it would be difficult to write the plot after the protagonist takes action a few times... The author then throws out the setting, and then forces him to stay in the small world. I don't know what he is doing? The setting of Jianghu is very good. As long as you don't write invincible articles, your results should be much better.

Just started watching. However, why are there so many words "also" and "is" in the article? Personally I find it a bit awkward.

Let me ask you how many chapters of Territory Construction are introduced in "The Extraordinary Earl"?