I Just Want to Create God Quietly

There are too many slap-in-the-face plots in this book. It's fine once in a while, but too much would be awkward. Also, the women around the protagonist are all the kids left behind by the big shots. Other than that, it's quite interesting.

Although the routine is a bit old, the writing is still very smooth. There is nothing embarrassing or disgusting. There is a little humor from the author, and occasionally he will drive seriously, and the emotional scenes are also okay. This result is a pity, it feels better than the many books in Daodu every day!

I think the content and subject matter are okay, but the author's writing style is not very good. It is always too bland. The content should be interesting, but I just can't read it. It just feels very boring and bland. Not passionate, not funny, not exciting.

Can you put it mildly? As long as you meet a woman who can be described in a few sentences, the next plot will inevitably include a dandy, a workplace villain, who is used to pretend to slap the pig's feet in the face. In fact, these women do not play any transitional role in the actual plot line. They are just used to fill the word count and will not participate in the subsequent plot line. Removing these vases and face-slapping tool people will have no impact on the plot. The plot twist actually relies on this kind of plot without surprises. I really can't read it, think about it more, it's written like a running account. The protagonist's behavior has almost no plot driving force. He just goes out to fight monsters and gain experience. The foreshadowing of your non-biological sister is inexplicably hidden, and the purpose of recruiting a team of villains for the protagonist is too obvious. It is not the original driving force for the protagonist to become stronger. Why has your protagonist become stronger? As for the book you said you like, get out of the way, so you want to add the element of having a pretty face and big muscles. This is too stretched. Think carefully about the original driving force of the mysterious journey that drives the protagonist to become stronger. Have you written it? Is the plot driven by crazy people like you who wear vase and face-slapping tools?

It feels a bit like an old book from a few years ago

Not enough (.`ω´)

One thing I hope the author will pay more attention to is that the protagonist will continue to create gods in the later stage, so his identity will be positioned at the later stage, that is, the level of the creation god, or even higher. So what is the identity of the heroine? I don't mean to slander, but if the identity gap between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is too big, there will always be problems, especially if the gap reaches a certain level, the protagonist's mentality will definitely be different, and some of his human characteristics will disappear. After all, in a sense, the protagonist's status is incredibly high. Then will he still treat the heroine the same as he did at the beginning? This is a problem. This book has not yet entered the advanced stage, so I would like to give the author two suggestions for your reference.                                      : ，，，，                        2: Raise the status of the heroine to be similar to that of the protagonist (not very recommended) After all, this will lead to classic scenes, that is, enemies, aristocratic families, etc., (For example) becoming a typical example of slap-in-the-face stories, so it is not very recommended. I hope the author will take a serious look at it. After all, it is not in the later stages yet. It is actually very easy to change it. You only need to fine-tune the main line, or continue to marginalize the heroine as it is now until the relationship between the two fades. This is best. It does not disrupt the main line and has no impact. (Ps: Does the author have a book club?)

Let me tell you, this thing is a tapir. Think about what our little protagonist said in Chapter 123 Expand the tapir. Even an intercontinental missile cannot destroy the third level as long as it does not hit it head-on. Lin Yuan's mind moved, and a layer of dark tapir appeared in his body. This layer of tapirs is extremely dark and weird. It is completely different from the tapirs Lin Yuan has seen. But its defense power and ability to pollute ordinary people are definitely stronger than those of ordinary transcendent tapirs. Looking at this thing, hahaha, I'm afraid it's not here to laugh me to death so that I can inherit my Huabei loan 🤭😂😂😂

Finished it in one go, waiting for updates, let's talk about your current thoughts 1. The writing in Yama is good 2. In Destiny, it feels like the bat doesn't look like an old monster that has lived for a long time 3. In terms of the villain's IQ, it's just a family, why is it so cliche? 4. In the beginning, Yama joined The sect has no drama now 5. The various forces are still thinking about fighting [I always feel a little uncomfortable thinking from God's perspective], and the dark tide is coming 6. Every time the scenes are written more than halfway, they are gone [such as the college plot, the class plot, the incident plot] 7. Are Tianting and Mingyuan developing in the wrong direction? One is fast and the other is slow. Readers don't know the controlling forces. How many people are at level six and how many are at level seven? The ratio is wrong. The disadvantages are probably this, and there are many advantages, otherwise I wouldn't be able to read them After all, it's good to read a book, don't expect too much [TMD starting point has almost banned my favorite transformation]

A good behind-the-scenes flow is written as an academy flow. After the protagonist enters the academy, he can't stand it anymore.

I have to complain about the author's common sense. Aunt refers to the mother's sister, and grandpa refers to the father's father. My aunt and my grandpa have a rough relationship. Grandpa's matter is a matter of the protagonist's father's line. My aunt wants to make a plan for 2 millionto

This book is okay, but the results are so bad

The more I look at it, the more rubbish I feel, really.

I have to admit that the picture quality is not as good as others, but I have a good handle on the temperament

The author should be a foreigner and does not understand Chinese kinship relations. My aunt is my mother's sister. My aunt is my father's sister. Your grandpa is hospitalized, but your aunt won't go because it has nothing to do with her at all. It would be embarrassing if you go there, just like a beggar on the street who comes to do favors. Never happens in reality. In rural terms, your grandfather and your aunt are not relatives.

How do I feel about it? The character's IQ is not very high... Maybe the author doesn't feel it, but in my opinion, most of the superpowers in the book are around 250. For example, there is a story in the book called Shomatsu Michiko. If he is unhappy with others, he will just kill his whole family. The problem is that it can really be done... When I was watching a similar plot, I kept thinking that it doesn't take more than two or three of these people to destroy the country. But there are piles of similar people in the book, which makes me feel that the world is hopeless, so run away.

It's very nice to me, let's talk about it briefly now: 1 The book is non-toxic, there are no nonsense tricks 😄 2 IQ is online, of course, the supporting characters are a bit stupid, but they are much better 🤭🤭 3 Readers who like to read invincible articles, behind the scenes, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers Blessed, I have read more than a hundred chapters now. The protagonist's combat power is high, but he is never too high-profile, and he has no habit of letting the villain do whatever he wants. He has revenge and kindness, which is very comfortable to watch 👍👍👍 4 The protagonist is very handsome, which can be seen from the people around him, and And the writing is more normal, there is no plot like falling in love after a disagreement, but shyly looking for a wingman to quietly bala bala (The sense of substitution is good🤓🤓) 5 I think the plot flows smoothly, there is no big jump at once, and the water is not as deep as the sea. It should be in line with the general situation. Taste of Home 6 Finally, I am posting this just to let everyone support this kind of author. Although the level is low, I cannot deny his strength. I hope that other authors can make similar innovations. Although we readers are not very good at writing novels, we still have some basic comments, just like the subjective questions of Chinese language 😏

I'm following the update again, hoping there will be an ending, really

What does this book say? It was a little bit toxic in the early stages, and I could tell that. It's not that the author did it deliberately. The author must be a novice, or maybe it's his first novel. Slowly it started to get more exciting from the end. Although I can't say it's very good, it's good enough to be used as food. If you don't have much to read, you can read it. It's pretty good.

Remove the number of words that describe a woman's appearance, figure, and clothing. How many words are left? Is there still a market for pretending to slap people in the face?

Dear author, as long as you write one chapter a day, I will reward you with 100 points per chapter.

I'm alive, fuck, I don't know when I'll go in again

I was just talking about why I ran out of coins. It turns out that this book automatically subscribes to me. Thank you so much ^0^~ I have been so diligent these past two days.

Brother, it's been more than a month. Please update me.

Please update more, everything will be available!

Don't pretend to be dead, hurry up and pretend to be dead. It's really exciting.

Quick update😒😒😒

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