One Piece: in the Name of the Father

It's a good book, but it's not very updated. Come on! ! !

Detox, don't watch, don't watch! I have become addicted. The plot has absolutely nothing to do with the title In the Name of the Father, nor does it have anything to do with the introduction. I insisted on reading more than 10 chapters. The protagonist was just like keeping a running account. There was no plot at all every day. It would be more interesting to read the compositions of elementary school students. 🙂

Just like the classic quote from Luffy, the protagonist in One Piece, I want to become the Pirate King, I must firmly tell myself that I want to write a One Piece fan novel. Because One Piece is my youth! And it's not over yet.

Did you make the original story line too outrageous? Returning to the original storyline of One Piece, after Oden returned to Wano, Wano had already fallen into the hands of Orochi and Kaido, and Orochi was just a useless waiter with no outstanding fighting ability. Moriah also came to Wano to challenge Kaido a few years after Oden returned. The more you get to the back, the more outrageous it becomes. If someone who has watched One Piece comes to see this, he will be disgusted

Is this book so miserable?

After reading a few chapters, it's either the protagonist's name or his, his, his.

Yesterday at noon, I posted game adaptation recommendations on the light novel channel of the new website. How many friends came in through this channel 😍😍😍

If you want to read this book carefully, you should skip the prologue.

The front part is all about what so-and-so did and how well they did. . . When it comes to writing diaries for primary school students, the only thing that is better than primary school students is that there are more details in doing things and it is not too dry. But it's really unbearable for a name to appear ten or even dozens of times in a row.

Some references for the author: Natural system: wind, thunder, snow, aurora (the aurora with high-speed charged particle flow), steam, crystal (the ability is similar to the frozen fruit of the blue pheasant), swamp, sour, and so on. Superman type: milk, jelly, medicine, vitality, Mengmeng (can make others dream, allow the dreamer to quickly recover healing effects, have nightmares, mental attacks, invade and change other people's dreams, etc.), Zipper (equivalent to the door fruit + chainsaw, can open zipper space, or Use zippers for physical attacks), thorns, beans, explosions, steel Ancient species of animals: giant ape, cave bear, ferocious lion, Archaeopteryx, Titanoboa, terror bird (similar to ostrich), ancient millipede (similar to centipede) (I didn't look for animals like dragons, because there are more of them). To give the author a reference, I hope that the children of the protagonist will not be mainly Devil Fruits. After all, so many talents are no worse than Devil Fruits. If there are Devil Fruits, I hope there will be more Superman types, one or two natural types, two or three ancient species, and at most one fantasy beast type besides Asura, or not, because it is too rare.

Is there anyone out there who is as bored as me? After reading it, I read Chapter 1 again and started counting how many Matsurizawa there are. Let me tell you that the name Matsurizawa appears a total of 7446 times, with an error of no more than 50 times [f n=33]🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

This book may not be very good at the beginning, but it gets pretty good later on and gets better and better.

If you want to get Devil Fruits, I recommend a few, the natural-type burning fruit, the snow-type fruit, the wind-wind fruit, the steam fruit, the thunder fruit, the animal-type fantasy beast type three-legged golden crow, the ancient type of saber-toothed tiger, the superhuman type of surgical fruit, the Momo fruit, and the explosive fruit.

The first three golden chapters are average in writing, but what is the highlight of the protagonist? Fear of heights, panic, getting lost, carelessness. How much of a waste should the protagonist be? The beginning of the coming-of-age story is really unpleasant.

I contacted the editor-in-chief and it will be available at 12 noon tomorrow.

After reading a few chapters, all I could think of was Matsuriza.

Keep up the good work, author. Writing is not easy but there are still readers who cheer you on.

We have entered the third volume, and I am a little busy in real life. The update is changed from 9 am to 9 pm every day!

Let me go, there are too many cubs now. Why don't the author introduce them all in a single chapter? Thanks to you for coming up with so many names, and your talent, etc., My head is spinning!

In this chapter, your name Pig's Feet appears more than eighty times. The sea is really all water.

The author is also a talent! The name of the protagonist is almost enough for a novel... Haha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

To be honest, I really didn't notice that the protagonist's eldest son had the same talent as the aunt. The aunt could kill giants at a young age, and there were people whose skin was as hard as iron since childhood. I didn't notice it at all in the protagonist's eldest son. Could it be that I missed it? Also, the fight ended too quickly. In One Piece, as long as the strength of the two sides is not hugely different, it won't end in one or two seconds. Moreover, the people in One Piece are very tenacious, so why did you die so easily?

I like this kind of slow heat, it's quite interesting!

If you get the Devil Fruit at the back, get more Superman-type and Animal-type. Superman series. You can do something original. (Gourmet series. Lifestyle series. Table of Elements series. Bacteria series including viruses. And realistic fantasy series.) If the Superman series is written. Very interesting. Animal department. Can be original. More ancient species. Common species, preferably large ones. It would be bad if there were too many of one or two phantom beasts. Don't want too many natural ones. I really don't have any inspiration to crowdfund.

If there is a system, please tell me early 🤫 Do you need to add system flow to the tag? Waste of time, farewell

Dear author, are your talents a bit lacking and repetitive? ! Let me tell you what I think: Five sense enhancement (2 stars) - Sixth sense (intuition, spirit) enhancement (3) - Innate sight and hearing (4) - Special sight and hearing (psychic, natural spirit, affinity, etc.) (5) Partial physical enhancement (legs, hands, body, self-healing, etc.) (3) - Comprehensive physical enhancement (steel and iron bones, infinite strength, enhanced self-healing, etc.) (4) - Special enhancement (super regeneration) Immortality (super adaptability) Devouring recovery (similar to life return) and the like) (5) There are also special ones, such as: weapon mastery, fist and foot proficiency, super luck Dual-core driver (two Devil Fruits 😁) Swordsman talent (can be divided into several levels) There should also be some talents for life and personality, these are almost all one or two stars, as well as some professional skill talents. We can't all rely on physics (≧∇≦) Also, please translate it! 😍

I suggest you just write about your own family or the development of your children. You don't need to involve so many descriptions of other characters. It feels weird.

The protagonist's wife reminds me of a person, the legendary champion mother.

Yang Jiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

This introduction is Ha, biting Kaido and not letting go.