Dusk and Evening Clouds Gather

The writing style is really good, and the reading is smooth and immersive. It's a good book! Come on!

A pinched character [Gong Liansheng]

🐷Readers or friends are welcome to comment, vote, and collect. 🐷The origin of this novel is a dream I had one day. After I woke up, I felt lost, so I decided to write it down. It tells a story of love that grows over time. I hope that I and my friends who read this book can cherish the present moment and the people in front of me. Okay, I think inspiration often appears in my dreams, and I have saved many small outlines. I will write those stories in the future if anyone reads them. Because I don't believe that a person can be bad for no reason, so I will try my best to enrich the image of the villain from a neutral perspective, and let everyone judge whether it is love or hate. If you have any opinions or suggestions, you can leave them. You are welcome 🌹🌹🌹～

Wow! The book cover is changing! What a great god! The plot writing is top-notch. The characters are lifelike. (๑´∀`๑) Come on! Great support! Yun Ji is very flirty, Mu Wan is very cute, and the plot is super sweet. The author is super diligent😁 Come on, come on, come on Come on, come on, come on Come on, come on, come on Come on, come on, come on Come on, come on, come on

The pinched characterLanyi

It's really heartbreaking to call my Liansheng. Don't be sad, your Aheng doesn't hate you anymore. (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)

The writing is so good, ฅ^._.^ฅ Am I cute?

Since I have to code words later, I'm just reading the beginning now, and I'll continue reading when I have time during the day. Hmm... After reading the wedge, I summarized it in seven words: As expected of a female video author! The writing style is really delicate, much better than the average newbie, and the pace of behavior is not sluggish and relaxed. Then, I compiled some suggestions: 1. The last paragraph of the introduction should be what the male protagonist said to the female protagonist. It feels a bit pale and can be slightly polished. For example: Yun Ji felt the life of the beautiful woman in his arms gradually disappearing. He held back his tears and expressed his feelings that had been buried in his heart for many years: "Wanwan, I'm sorry! I, I love you..." (Just written in a hurry, the writing style is Poor) 2. In Mu Wan's self-narration at the beginning, the perspective is a bit unclear. Since it is a self-narration, it is better to look at the world from your own perspective. If you need to change the perspective, you still need more practice. As of now, it is still a little stiff. PS: The above are all personal suggestions. I am a bit venomous. I hope the author will learn from them as appropriate and take the best and discard the bad (Look forward to a return visit)

There are so many styles, little brother, it's a porridge, keep writing, you can't give up! ! !

Come on, my yandere male lead is great

There are too many things to do in reality, and I have to squeeze out the time for coding, so I have to save my books first. I'll continue reading when I have some free time. 😐I'm busy

I predict that with a wonderful plot and beautiful writing like DaDa, there will be a chance to make a drama. If it becomes popular, this position will be mine from now on 😃🪖😎

When will my good baby Yunji come back? Can you give me more sperm? 😁

I like the introduction, and the content is even better, keep it up ＾0＾~

Good book, the author is also a good person, I wish you can become a god soon!