Colorful Phoenix Shines in the World

I came across this book a long time ago. I thought it was pretty good at the time, so I kept reading it until now. What I see now is a map of the second dimension. Let me talk about my feeling at the beginning. The author of this book is a new beauty writer. Overall, the writing is quite remarkable. It starts with time travel, directly naming the heroine's identity, quickly entering the subsequent plot, and then cheating and getting a golden finger. Then it begins to enter a slight flashback, naming the original protagonist's identity, and merging the two together. In my opinion, this section is a very natural transition. The protagonist is a little girl who started out at the age of ten. It may be that the main idea is to slowly grow up. The heroine has many plug-ins, each with its own strengths and weaknesses. I personally think the setting is very reasonable, and there is no feeling of indiscriminate firing across the map. In the subsequent series of plot developments, the heroine encountered difficulties and gradually solved them, and then gained new functions. In this early stage, maybe because of the new writer, I personally feel that the plot is a bit thin, that is, it is too smooth. There are some interesting points, but it is not fully explored. But later on, it can be seen that the author's level has obviously changed in quality. Some of the transitions are very well-structured, and it no longer describes a process through multiple visuals as it was originally. Of course, it may also have something to do with the increase in the number of characters. It is also worthy of recognition that this book is said to be a heroine, but in fact, the author shows a kind of cooperation in team fighting. This point is eye-catching in the sea of ​​stories about one man against the gods. I don't really like the kind of invincibility where the heroine is absolutely invincible, although it looks quite cool. In addition, the overall logic of the story is online, and the IQs of the supporting characters and enemies are also online. Some descriptions of villains and characters who are both good and evil also have their own highlights, and there is no such justice concept of right and wrong, which I like very much.       ，，，，，，， The most commendable thing is that reading this book is very relaxing and enjoyable. I can read it without realizing it without too much embarrassment. I recommend you to read it and I will continue to read it.

An exquisite fantasy legend. Alas, is the rumor that "the great fantasy gods are all cross-dressers" true? Although I have only read chapters 111 to 114 back and forth (which should be the climax of a stage), I have already been conquered by the delicate writing style of this book, so what? Envy, jealousy and hatred. But I also know that this kind of meticulous pixelated writing style takes time to refine, and it cannot be the same throughout the entire article, because the update system of online articles is a disguised destruction of literariness. To give a simple example, choose a paragraph below: "As Feng Xiyue held her breath, black and white collided suddenly! There was no terrifying explosion as expected, the picture of West Lake remained still for a few seconds, and then completely distorted! Feng Xiyue heard a series of There was a sound like glass breaking, that was when the space was broken again, and the blazing white light filled the whole picture, and Feng Xiyue had to temporarily close her eyes. " This is a picture-in-picture seen through the perspective of the protagonist. First of all, this kind of description can be brought in very well. Then the color represents "black and white", the sound represents "no explosion", and the side highlights the "distortion of the lake surface". Then switch back to the protagonist's hearing, and use the voice to write the picture "glass broken-hot white". I dare say that this paragraph is directly directed to a certain CG director, and the director will cry. It seems that it would be difficult to visualize it with just a few lines of words. So this is the so-called literary nature. The author conveys impossible pictures by tapping the reader's imagination. I just said that this was just a random selection. Yes, these three chapters describe a continuous battle description that can "fill holes" and "dig holes". Both in terms of structure and description details, they are textbook-like masterpieces. If the Qidian editor sees this and doesn't sign the contract... In short, although this book has changed my previous habit of ranking, what happened to female channels? Female channels can write hard-core fantasy that most male channels cannot see. Its rare and valuable outline and rendering of the characters' psychology are the strengths of female videos. At this moment, I was imagining a cross-dressing guy looking at my comments, feeling chilled in my heart. Story: The battle between the good and the villain of the nine generations, the blood feud and the long-lasting love between children. Justice never dies, making people remember how a woman's choice between the Holy Spirit and evil spirits, good and evil, makes the world more absurd, and the protagonist can prove the meaning of his existence. Structure: A complete explosive structure, with rigorous transitions from top to bottom, and description, narrative, and exposition complement each other. There is just a slight mistake. In the dialogue between the Eighth Generation Holy Spirit and his brother after the war, several characters were redundantly reflected. If it is not necessary (the possibility of the characters appearing later), it may be better to go through it faster (maybe the author is just for the sake of word count, haha). Creativity: Hard-core fantasy does not need to be imaginative in the setting. Just writing the original world setting is of a very high standard. The simple confrontation between good and evil lasts for eight worlds. There are too many stories that can be innovated. To be honest, given the author's writing skills, if she had her write about the protagonist practicing swordplay 10,000 times every day, she would probably be able to come up with new ideas every time she writes a chapter. Writing style: Suitable for moderate Internet readers, old bookworms, both men and women. Because I haven't seen too many "emotional dramas", and human love doesn't count, I just want to say, hardcore fantasy + real heroine, both of them can be good after becoming gods. Rhythm: You can't see much rhythm from just the big explosion and climax. The place I looked at happened to be the link between the previous and the following. Reading the whole text requires careful reading, and I can't skip paragraphs, and I can't bear to do so. It is still recommended that the author break the long description into short sentences, which will be more friendly to new bookworms on mobile phones. Update: This book has been put on the shelves, and updates are absolutely guaranteed. The author also said that she is here to realize her dream, so please support me. Even if you read online articles with this style of writing one chapter a day, it is more comfortable than following other famous celebrities in chapters. Perception: When writing this type of thing, I silently lit up a cigarette. Male compatriots should understand that feeling. General comments: Judging from the out of context, there is no doubt that fairy grass is. This book is like a newly launched French dish, using exquisite techniques and embellishments, as well as delicate taste differences to challenge discerning diners. The woman who made the reservation, but the male companion who came with her was attracted by this dish, and the temptation exceeded the charm of his female companion. That's it, haha, the Chinese name of this French dish is "Xi Shi Tofu", and the Chinese name of the French name means "Run, beautiful oriental girl, water tofu sauce and foie gras".

Feng Xiyue, sincere and lovely, once traveled through time for fun, just in time for the Luofeng City Incident. When I first met the Lone Wolf Commander, he was ruthless and ruthless. Feng Xiyue hit him with the Yin and Yang Bipolar Divine Light. This name sounds very touching, okay? Meet the cute little couple again, and meet His Royal Highness Prince Mo Chenye again. The interaction is so sweet! She is kind and smart, and uses other people's bad intentions to sneak into the other party's camp. When it's time to take action, act quickly and without any delay. Treat scum the way you should treat scum. Yuan Tiangui has a carefree personality and is a bit straight-tempered, but he is pure and kind. Yu Wenlan, on the contrary, is a bit sinister and quick-witted. "Sister, your eyes are not ugly, why are you covering them?" Hahaha, straight men have cancer, so they learn from Yu Wenlan, he is very good at flirting with girls, he is very skillful, he gives little sister He Xianling a bracelet, and he is a hero to save the beauty. Although Feng Xiyue seems to be a fickle person, she has a calm attitude in every big event. She knows how to advance and retreat, knows the gains and losses, protects the people she wants to protect, can recognize the difference in strength, and does not allow anyone to insult the Feng clan. Her character is really lovable. And he is only ten years old. Take my little Tiantian away. Chapter 38: I want to blow up the conversation with the young master of the Fei family, praise it. Remember a sentence:We don't cause trouble, and we are not afraid of trouble. It would be perfect for her. Ice King, Dugu Lengyue, Shadow Pavilion. Unlocking the prologue of the past, the cruel reality emerges. Dugu Lengyue has a gentle heart under her cold appearance. She protects her shortcomings without explaining anything. She protects Feng Xiyue, her little apprentice. She is domineering and strong, has a walking buff, and has a great interaction with the Ice Emperor.        ，，， Older? I'll beat you until you change your mind, haha.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of the book, the elemental dance setting, beautiful and magnificent, fighting should use fairy fighting methods. Snow is dancing all over the sky, thousands of miles of ice versus thousands of miles of ice, you still have to have dreams, what if they come true? Brother Ice King was almost frozen, but luckily there was a storm wall. I prefer to dance in the snow for a long time, and build an ice city with one dance. The majestic momentum of fantasy surges forward. Mo Chenye was finally released, Chapter 76, what a miserable male protagonist. Moreover, the male protagonist was seriously injured as soon as he arrived, and the female protagonist's rescue was backfired. The author's stepmother, get out of here and give me a good beating first. Fortunately, misfortunes are where blessings come from. Blessings come out of disguise. Take back the hand that hits you first. Touch the goddaughter Mo Chenye just recognized, my dearest girl, hello. The male protagonist is cursed and has a bleak background. It seems that his family members are blood-sucking devils. 👿 He avoids her and she approaches. Can they be together? Will the process be difficult? I look forward to the follow-up. Small opinion: It would be very pleasing to add some new settings and new tricks to the old routines. After all, since ancient times, deep love cannot be retained, only routines can win people's hearts.       ，

My imagination is too big. Please save it. It's well written. Come on💪

First of all, I would like to apologize to everyone. I originally planned to release the new book in mid-June, but due to work reasons and other factors, it was not ready yet, so the release of the new book was delayed. The next new book is a light novel in Japanese manga style. The outline and characters have been initially formed. However, internal investment has been frustrated many times and the beginning has been changed many times. I originally wanted to save the manuscript and publish it directly. Yesterday, I suddenly received a big message from an editor, giving guidance and asking me to revise it before coming back, so I will probably continue to work hard. Of course, no matter whether the internal investment is passed or not, the book will definitely be published before July 5th. I wrote the book to write my own story, not to follow the crowd, otherwise it would not be the original intention of writing, so everyone can rest assured that there will be a new book. See you in July~ξ( ✿＞◡❛)

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It's been one year since Caihuang published the book ~ 1.5 Million words have been reached! HappyＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ

Come and praise our lovely heroine and little beauty author. I'll go first, the kitten is such a cutie🤗🤗

By the way, one day our little friend Feng Xiyue finally reached adulthood, so she thought about whether it was time to fall in love. Little classmate Bai Sheng on the side heard Feng Xiyue's shocking remarks, and suddenly felt a sense of crisis. Shouldn't it be first-come-first-serve near the water and the building? So he blinked his eyes and hinted wildly, Xiao Yueyue, I can, Kangkang me, choose me in online dating, I am super sweet, choose me in real life, I am even sweeter. When Feng Xiyue saw Bai Sheng's cramped eyes, she asked with concern: "Are you... Flooded in your brain?" Bai Sheng's enthusiasm was extinguished, and after thinking for a while, he said: "My brain is flooded with Yuan Hua."

This is a black kitten~

I've read dozens of chapters and come here to review. Don't be nervous, little cat. It's very well written (I saw a little cat in the middle and said I was nervous) 😁 It's time travel and rebirth, and the little cat can still attract many readers. It's excellent. The story is exciting, the description is okay, and there are many words. If you like it, you can read it as much as you like, 🤭 Like it, it's great.

The second issue of the column has been reviewed, and your work has been selected. Unfortunately, the column has not been refined. I will keep up the good work in the small column. At the same time, I also wish Dada's works prosperous, and I hope Dada will keep improving and continue to create 🌹🌹🌹

Speaking of Feng Xiyue, an eleven-year-old girl, fighting and causing trouble everywhere, is there any justice? Is there any royal law? By the way, in this different world, whoever has the bigger fist is the truth, so let's just say that! The beautiful girl is very cute, and this invincible beautiful girl likes the handsome boy very much. Um! I'm an old handsome guy. Currently, I am reading about forming a mascot combination with Brother Bai Sheng. It looks great! Full subscription support! Cheers for the cats! Is this considered a fan? Okay! The level of whispering is incoherent. If you don't like it, please delete it.

I really like the heroine's character! Great work, please update soon!

The writing style of the novel is very good, and the plot design is also quite good. The perspective of focusing on the heroine at the beginning is quite innovative, and the article has a full sense of tension and immersion. I give it a good review. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update, please come on.

123. Sure enough, good and evil are incompatible! The difference in fundamental stances, The upright world is for the common good, why should we not sacrifice it? 124 Perfectly explains this point, The villain world has nothing to do with me, I follow my own way, there is nothing that cannot be sacrificed. The writing is great, the position is very clear👍🏻, I admire it, hehe, I have collected it

The author is a serious storyteller, like a tourist in pursuit of poetry and distant places. He worships on the pilgrimage road to Tibet, sails on the Western Ocean, and explores through the tropical rainforest of the Congo Basin. In short, this is a rain and fog story told with heart.

The poignant love in the latest chapter is touching, and only a girl of Xiaomao's age can write it. After experiencing an ordinary life of firewood, rice, oil, salt, soy sauce, vinegar and tea, from being close to each other until we become a part of each other. That was the longing of many people in the past for a beautiful love in the future. The author uses beautiful words to express that the best time of love is always touching and makes people think a lot. Looking back suddenly, I recall the most beautiful time in the past. That was our lost youth!

With 1.36 Million words and one month left, this book will be a year old, which is not easy. Come on, cats! Full order support (´-ω-`). 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺 Every author spends his spare time, races against time, and works hard to write one story after another🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄 The process of hard work is hard, I wish you better and better results! 🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻

Master, automatic subscription has been turned on. I like it very much. Please update as soon as possible. Looking forward to it.

This book is well written! Those who have tickets can support a wave, recommend votes, and monthly votes. The author will not dislike it!

The heroine's new fantasy book "Protect China!" Flirting with the Sword Lord! "Goddess of Destiny is Beautiful and Sassy" has made its debut on fan~qie. The heroine is the daughter of Feng Xiyue and Bai Sheng~ Welcome to watch!

What is more poisonous than the card CP is the one summoned by my magical black hand Feng Xiyue·Planning Card, please stop showing off, European Emperors

What is more poisonous than the card CP is the Feng Xiyue·Planning card summoned by my magical black hand. Please stop showing off