Ye Xiaofan's Story of Cultivating Gods in Another World

The writing style is childish, so childish...

I was put off by the first few chapters. The heroine was too nymphomaniacal. I was speechless.

The setting of this story is quite good, and the immediate feeling is that it is a nymphomaniac and a shameless person. . A little embarrassed and confused

The vulgar heroine Marie Suvin...

It's been a long time since I've been here. I'd like to support my sister with all reservations.

Congratulations to my friend for finishing this book. When will the new book be released?

It feels a little too childish. As an adult dressing up as a child, her character should be that of an adult, but the heroine feels like a little doll to me, without a mature mind. For example, she usually says she doesn't care about children, but she bombards them with childish talk. Works like "Time Travel: It's Not Easy to Be a Man" or even fetal traversal works handle the heroine's character very well, and it doesn't make people think she is a childish little doll at all, even if she is only a few years old. Modern and fantasy worlds are not well combined. For example, many words such as girlfriend, new song singing, goddess, and natural secretions are all modern languages. I originally thought I was traveling to a continent similar to ancient times, but many of the character dialogues had a completely modern feel. For example, the background setting of "The Tribulation of Ten Thousand Races" is quite complete. It doesn't make me feel like it is in modern times at all. The various world views, martial arts realms, and environmental settings are very clear. The author can learn from the writing methods of other authors, which will make the work more mature. After all, it is a long work, and a complete background and a comprehensive portrayal of the protagonist are necessities. (Of course, it may be that I only read the beginning and don't know if it will get better after that. I'm just giving a small suggestion)

I stopped reading after reading the first chapter 😅

Author Da Da: Isn't it better to abandon the pit or abandon the pit? I want to confirm... If it is only updated irregularly, then you have the courage to enter the trap. If it is to abandon the trap... You are a little worried and dare not enter the trap...!

Author: Well, your setting is pretty good, but the writing style feels a bit weird. After all, she is an adult, and then she wears it on a nine-year-old girl, but she should have learned to hide it. Even if she doesn't hide it, your combination of modernity and fantasy is a bit inconsistent. It feels a little strange. It started to feel a little weird starting from about 30 chapters, and I don't know what it feels like. But maybe it's not a matter of good rapport or the style of writing! Also, I kind of hope that the entertainment industry in this world can have real movies and TV shows from which we can gain enlightenment, just like "Xianwu Star", it would be even better. You can take photos of Three Lifetimes of Acquaintance and Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms! Whee! This sword cultivation planet has different cultivation methods.

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