Caribbean Dream

I couldn't stand this article at all, and started to persuade me to quit at chapter 20. I rushed to the Caribbean and read chapter 70, and was successfully persuaded to quit by Barbossa's "I'm so stupid". The protagonist really didn't pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger, because he was a pig himself. The writing was really stupid, and it turned into a piece of nonsense as he wrote it.

The name of this book is great, Caribbean Dreams. Who doesn't want to swim in the sea, make a splash in the magical waters of the Caribbean, and let yourself go? Unfortunately, dreams are beautiful, but reality is cruel, and they are all oppressed by the burden of life. . . . There are things in my heart that I can't say. . .

This is what I saw

The protagonist was brutally tortured while carrying the system. He was beaten on the back of the head and beaten again and again. The system was useless. The protagonist had no growth pattern at all. A good theme was written to pieces, but the plot was the same as the original drama. I felt a bit disappointed. This is not realistic. Isn't web writing supposed to be reasonable and logical? Isn't it just to relax when reading this article? Who hasn't been abused enough in reality?

You plan to write about a pirate, but the protagonist is submissive and lacks any opinions. Everyone kicks him around like a 🐶. How? Even a dog licker has to go to sea to make a living? After dozens of chapters, the protagonist is being beaten all the time, and the beatings are inexplicable. Even an ordinary person wouldn't be such a waste, right? The character's personality is not suitable for being a pirate, and his behavior is even more difficult to understand. Apart from being bullied and despised by various plot characters, I didn't find that he did anything.

Is there something wrong with the protagonist's brain? Is his brain as powerful as a dog? Does he really want to find an owner?

There are indeed a lot of poisonous spots. These are not too annoying, but they are very disgusting. There is an inexplicable sense of sight when licking a dog.

It's disgusting to watch. It would be better for the protagonist to die

After reading the first chapter, I felt so uncomfortable that I couldn't stand it anymore. I would like to give a suggestion to the author. The subject matter is really good, but there are too many problems with paragraphing, narrative, and punctuation. Only by correcting it can it have a chance of becoming popular.

I really doubt that the author has ever read Pirates of the Caribbean. There are many places where the writing is messy. Needless to say, the details are not consistent with the original work. There are too many bugs and it is uncomfortable to read. It was only the name Caribbean that made me read it. But the ten-year-old bookworm was poisoned to death.

A clown-like Chinese protagonist is played wantonly by British men and women.

The story is very interesting, but it's a pity that the investment opportunities have run out this month.

If I had money, I could support you to write this book seriously. But I am poor, and 99% of the books I have read for more than ten years are pirated🌚🌚

Brother, I just came from another website and you poisoned me to death. I don't understand. How dare you write about a Turner who treats the protagonist like a monkey? Did you have any meaning in writing this character of the protagonist?

I've been following it and I really like this story.

I like pirate-type novels very much, and I have also watched the Caribbean movie series, so basically everyone who reads this type of novels has seen the movies. The author does not need to copy them all according to the movies. I recommend that the author can refer to "The Skull and Bones Flag that Never Fades". It would be better to write according to this type.

In fact, I think it's okay to throw away those poisonous points. I don't think it's that bad later. If the author sees this sentence and wants to write a second season, please tell me, thank you!

What are you writing? It's rubbish. This book of yours is one of the few rubbish I've ever seen.

Not what the hell? As soon as I added it to my bookshelf, it was eunuch.

I want to recommend books when I see pirates

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