Conqueror of the Steampunk World

The author, in the third picture, the protagonist's father said that the protagonist is almost sixteen, but you wrote that I am almost sixteen! ! ! ! In a magical world, the protagonist's father is not yet sixteen! ! ! ! ! !

One of the ugliest novels I've ever read

The subsequent war plot is too boring. There are several chapters in a plan. It takes thirty chapters from preparing for the street battle to the beginning. . . The pace is too obvious

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The book is a good book, but do you want it to be so watery?

Such an ugly novel is completely unacceptable

It's true that there are many chapters with narration and commentary standing in half of the plot.

It's ugly. Really, why is the male protagonist always doing nothing? With such a good status and talent, why doesn't he work hard? Don't you know that trash doesn't have human rights?

Sir, your writing is actually quite good, at least more than food and grass, not as good as fairy grass. The biggest failure is that you have too many explanations. You are writing novels, not expository essays. If possible, the author can take a break first, calm down, change his writing style a little, remove so many explanations, and at least condense the current 200 chapters into 50-100 chapters, so that your novel can at least be upgraded to a higher level.

It is now popular to write the relationship between the protagonist and the girl in an awkward and weird way? ? Japanese comics?

After reading the introduction, I remembered that the Trojan horse war in history appeared in magical steampunk. I couldn't believe it. I just pretended to watch the legendary war in the mythical world and hypnotized myself.

Don't make your direction so obvious. The plot is basically the same, just change the name. There's no sense of expectation.

What the hell! There are too many unnecessary words, and the background that does not need () explanation seriously affects the viewing! ! !

Don't just keep reading about hydrology, not all the people watching are elementary school students! ! !

The protagonist actually died before the battle was over. So disgusting.