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Is the author a newbie? ? ,, After reading thirty chapters, I felt that the author probably didn't have an outline. He wrote wherever he thought, and somehow wrote a plot about eating stinky tofu. Maybe the author suddenly wanted to eat it, so he wrote two chapters of this content. There are all kinds of shortcomings left. I suggest the author sort them out himself and write an outline and detailed outline.

The book is good, and I send a few recommendations every day

It's a good online game novel, and I enjoyed reading it. However, a stinky tofu plot popped up. Many people in the martial arts school said that Brother Gu was cooking shit and eating shit. Mad felt that the author was feeding shit to the readers. It was really disgusting. Goodbye! Never see you again! ! !

This month's tickets are all yours, let's see if you can be the top vote-getter

Very well written, keep it up! ! !

Starting from the title, no matter what the content is, this idea is indeed better than most writers.

Take a look at the last book and ask, have you written the last one?

When can I vote for the monthly vote, Lao Wang?

After reading Chapter 31, the overall image is poor. The plot is forced to be reasonable in order to promote the plot. The routine is old. People who have not read many novels can still read it.

Advantages: The creativity is interesting, the writing is up to standard, the updates are stable, there are many interesting jokes and highlights, the protagonist's IQ is online, the author is getting better and better, and the more he goes on, the more comfortable he becomes. The shortcomings are, first of all, the problem of setting up the settings while writing the first few dozen chapters. Not explaining all the system settings at the beginning can be understood that the author wants to explore the functions of the system step by step from the perspective of the protagonist. This is reasonable, but it is obvious that this part is not handled well. Furthermore, some of the plots are a bit abrupt and unreasonable for the purpose of being funny. Of course, it cannot be ruled out that the author intended to go in a light-hearted and cheerful style, with slapstick and slapstick all the way. I'll keep following it for the time being, I feel like I can look forward to it.

Can the author write the introduction to skill attributes once so that the word count is too low every time?

After watching it, it's a new movie to watch. The characters are a little distorted, so I can't say it's good, but in comparison, I can't say it's bad. It's an upgrade.

Judging from the typos, the author must have saved the manuscript!

Can you please stop whetting your appetite and update twice a day, bro?

Halfway through the movie, I really wanted to vomit. The protagonist is a hypocrite. He talks about killing people everywhere in order to survive. Being blamed by others, what he wanted was not to explain, but to kill people. The bandits invaded, and the protagonist went up to massacre the village. I endured it, and then recruited a younger brother in the village. As a result, people came to the door and wanted revenge. In order to eradicate the roots, they killed a whole family. Then why didn't you call your younger brother to eradicate the roots? You just slaughtered them at every turn. Are you, an ordinary person, a murderer, or can the world of martial arts transform people?

We are all successors of socialism, hahaha

After reading the introduction, I think I can make up the content on my own. 😏😏

Thanks to Qidian for recommending the 18th eunuch novel.

This book has changed since I went to Beijing to meet the saints. I looked at the update time of the catalog and found that the author wrote the plot before and after the update. It was completely separated. I doubt it was written by the same person.

This chapter says it's not restricted by me, it's official, and I don't know how to do it 😭

I don't know what to say... ←_← A wealthy family risked annihilation to hunt the protagonist because of the intelligence of a young gangster...→_→ Is this young gangster too good of a character and worthy of others' trust? Or do you mean that the lives of family members are worthless? A family that doesn't check the authenticity of information before taking action? The protagonist used poison to make such a big fuss. No matter how much a family declines, you can always find out some information, right? Just because the protagonist bought poison, got addicted to drugs, where the protagonist was born, and there is evidence from a gangster, do you think there is something wrong with the protagonist? Just risk annihilation and go hunting? Where is the brain? I am really speechless... It seems that in the real world, some "reliable" information from online keyboard warriors has triggered a world war... Martial arts? No... This is magic...

I just read the first few chapters and it was fine. I hope there won't be any poisonous points like the village being massacred and the protagonist having red eyes and yelling for revenge Don't worry about it and make it a burden.

This is the best online novel I have ever read. The author's shaping of the plot and characters, as well as the coordination of the system and data, show the author's good intentions. In the first five chapters, the data and settings are colorful, and a hundred flowers are blooming. Within ten chapters, the protagonist's emotions are wild and unconstrained. The old hunter's emotions are delicate, like a hidden figure. After that, the wolf king has the style of an ancient general. He fights in front of the battle to show his ability. , There is Xiaoliuzi again in the village. He is shocked all the way, beating gongs and drums, working conscientiously to promote the plot. When he sees the protagonist emerge from the novice village, a fan-shaped diagram appears in Xiaoliuzi's eyes. Twelve kinds of emotions are presented in sequence. The delicate characterization and sincere emotions are rare in the industry, so he should be praised! In the future, the plot will be full of deep valleys and flying rocks, but you can still see the depth. I recommend all my martial arts colleagues to take a look, it will be a worthwhile trip!

After reading Chapter 286, I really couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. After entering the palace, he really became Gong Douwen. After the protagonist obtained the heaven-level skills, he never practiced again. Day by day, write about traveling in the world, walking in the world of your uncle. As the protagonist, you will encounter monsters of the heavenly level at the beginning of the journey. If you go out, you might as well stop traveling in the world and just farm. Could it be that the protagonist's system cannot be upgraded unless he uses the martial arts world? Your upgrade will be slower now that you are away from Jianghu. You might as well go back to the countryside to kill chickens, which might help you upgrade faster. Do you have to wait until the player level exceeds that of the protagonist before starting to practice? The experience you need to upgrade can be obtained from the players! There are many rules. Moreover, they can also be resurrected, making them a perfect candidate for raising pigs! You have such a system, you can't even level up as a player, so why are you playing like a chicken? Do you really think that the world will stop time and wait for you to finish talking nonsense and do a bunch of inexplicable things before starting to move again? What you write is a martial arts system article! It's not a love-hate story! Farewell, what a pity, why didn't Qidian block the option of book title and author?

I'll tell you my opinion after reading a little bit, I don't mean it to be bad It was okay at first, but then it started to get a little bit toxic! First, not upgrading the level is a waste of attributes. Although it is added later and cannot be upgraded unless it reaches a certain level, it can still make up for the attributes lost in the early stage! (I beg you to read the book review) Second, forcefully subdue the supporting characters. A small family who wants to protect themselves kills the drug seller in order to hide their secrets. It's OK! I had to force myself to get into trouble with the government, but I'm sorry that I couldn't get the supporting role! Third, even if there is no reward for reporting major events to local government, it will actually affect the year-end evaluation! In this way, if the local government refuses to report a major incident, then the superiors have to find out on their own? If there is any major time-sensitive incident, the day lily will be cold by the time the superiors find out! In addition, the protagonist is quite decisive in killing and has thought about eradicating the roots beforehand! You can still read it if you don't focus on the above points! I'm more particular, so I'll show you respect by sneaking in first! Yo-yo…

I read it in one go. It's enough food for old bookworms. I'll give it a try when it comes to updates. I'll talk about the rest when they're released.

The second part is a mess and I can't stand it at all. The first part is really good.

I won't be anonymous. Let me tell you my feelings about reading this book. I am in the middle of it (I went to play the game in the middle). According to the writing style of Shuangwen, the author has no problems with the plot and the upgrading and development of the protagonist. It can be said that there are all the exciting points that should be included in the plot. In terms of romance, I feel it would be better if the author could refine and retake the story later on. There are no big poisonous points, and it is generally acceptable. As for shortcomings, the promotion of passion makes the protagonist a bit passive. I prefer the protagonist to prepare for a rainy day, rather than letting the enemy push him away. In addition, I saw a comment in a previous post saying that the protagonist (the one who achieves great things) should be ruthless and treat everyone as ants. As for me, I will give you an example: "Suppose one day you join a company and this company requires you to take 3000 yuan a day to do 9000 yuan of work, and your boss (strong man) will often tell you to do more for The company should think about it and be more considerate of him (otherwise, why would he live in a villa and drive a sports car), and you (the ant) accepted it happily. Some students saw this and wanted to ask what do you want to express? I just want to tell that buddy that you are not a strong person, and don't think so much about the strong person from such a high position, because most people are being ripped off. "Why don't you do your best well?" Your experience and vision determines your perspective on things. At least there are not so many ruthless people I know who do business. They are all doing it for profit, so why bother to make everything worse? That's all. I'm a little off topic. I just want to complain. I feel like it's a waste of time to answer that guy. After all, I'm not a strong person 😠

I can't tell the difference between occupation and race, but I still write novels. It's too poisonous. Farmers actually call them races. It's ridiculous. The compositions written by elementary school students are not as good as

I don't know what makes me insist on watching Chapter 367. In the early stage, I was crazy about killing monsters and upgrading, but after entering Beijing, I was completely defeated. Players upgrade faster than pig's feet? Before entering Beijing, he was a fairy, but after entering Beijing, he became a martial arts? I have no idea what the story is about, and there is a huge gap between the writing styles before and after. Has anyone changed?