From Jinyiwei to Wulin Supreme

It is passionate enough and depicts a rich second-generation person who traveled through time and saw the dark side. The character and IQ are very well described. The appearance of Yi Ya proves that it is not completely dark. The author still gave the protagonist a little kindness. If the little maid Yi Ya is missing, it will be different. It became a completely dark flow. At the same time, I feel that the author's plot advances very quickly. This is an advantage and a disadvantage. The advantage is that the figures are not clear. The disadvantage is that the plot progress is a bit impatient, which leads to the lack of brilliant description of the supporting characters, and it is difficult to write branch plots in the mid-term! The author's writing style is quite ordinary, and he is not afraid of offending people. However, it is possible that the author has chosen teenagers as his audience. All in all, this book can be read, but don't expect it to have any connotations. Finally, I would like to suggest, can you provide some familiarity with martial arts and the like? I feel like I have never heard of it except Dragon Elephant. Can the author draw the martial arts every time and indicate the source! Also, treat me to milk tea, writing a book review takes a lot of brainpower

Well written, please update soon.

I finished reading it in one sitting. It's a good book, enjoyable and comfortable. I look forward to your book becoming a god.

It's rare to see good novels, so write some! Out of 10 points, then give the author 7 points! Let's talk about the advantages first First, the author's writing style is quite skillful. Most of the characters can be vividly described in just a few sentences. The background of the characters is also concise and comprehensive. To sum up, it is not watery. Second, the plot is compact, the plot is tense, and the description of the fighting scenes is relatively good. It feels a bit hearty, and to sum it up, it's great. Let's talk about the shortcomings First, if the martial arts system is set up in such detail, then please make it more differentiated, and don't let a single person's leapfrog crushing become the fuse for the collapse of the system. Second, the narrative progress bar is too fast, which can easily make people feel short. Readers are more looking forward to having fun for a while, rather than having fun once and then be done with it. Then every time I feel refreshed, I feel tired, and then I feel less comfortable! Third, it is a common problem with most online articles, the title of the novel. It's such a spoiler, basically everyone can guess the ending! It's a bit inappropriate. If it could be named "Jinyiwei", wouldn't it be better than this name? The above is for the author's reference only. I would like to send this message to all authors: keep your thoughts in mind and remain determined.

It's good, but updates are a bit slow.

This book is a purely enjoyable article. Is it possible to find rigor, common sense, and rationality in a purely enjoyable article? This book has ten lines at a glance, and it is very enjoyable to read. To kill Shangguan, in the plot, there will be a battle of wits, finding flaws, frame-up and other strategies to kill Shangguan (more than ten chapters). This book will be hacked to death directly when you go up to it. I can only say that it is very exciting!

Damn it, what you call Shennong is all fake! The main plot of the protagonist is clear. He relies on his own strength + calculation to take power. It is concise and clear. I personally wrote it very well. And some people think the villain is seriously mentally ill? Is the protagonist promoted too quickly? In my personal opinion, the form of expression in novels is inherently limited. If you describe the villain in too much space, it will only cause reading fatigue for readers. After all, the upper limit of power in this world has not yet been revealed. Spending a lot of time writing about a small villain is simply asking for death.

Every time I keep it for a few days, I finish reading it in the blink of an eye. I am annoyed. Can the author Jiang burst into tears?

Although the writing style is young and tender, it is rare to see such refreshing and decisive writing, so additional investment has been made.

It must be a big fire🪖🪖🪖

Fan Jing: Who do you think you are? Gu Fengqing: What do you think I am? Let me tell you now, we, Jinyi Guards, will take care of the things you dare not take care of. Those you dare not kill, we, the Jinyi Guards, will kill. In a word, we will take care of what you can take care of, and we will take care of what you can't take care of even more. Jinyiwei - the emperor's personal army, kill first and then report, authorized by the imperial power! Is it clear enough? 😎

The writing style is excellent, the plot is sophisticated, and each chapter is developed around the protagonist. It is the writing method of an excellent novel, just like a person who loves painting slowly unfolds a huge landscape painting by a famous artist. But it should be noted that due to the limitations of the world, it is inevitable to reach the top. At that time, it will break the void and go to other worlds, or this world will be more mysterious. No matter which one, I hope the author will continue to maintain the current quality. Maybe I'm too talkative, but I can't help but say a few words when I see an excellent book. Don't be surprised.

After reading more than twenty chapters, my first impression is that the book is good. Let me talk about my feelings. After reading this book, I feel that except for the first few chapters, this book is all about uplifting people. Until now, I can talk about killing people, exterminating families, and exterminating gangs, one step at a time. Next, let's see what happens after the destruction. Now the curve of this book is rising in a straight line. If it continues to rise, it will be weak to write. Only ups and downs are good books. How to control the current ups and downs, I feel that practicing martial arts is a good line. After all, pig's feet now only have knife skills, and everything else is garbage.

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When I opened it today, I vomited a mouthful of blood in Chapter 5. Chapter 3 just finished saying that the protagonist is tall, and Chapter 5 mentioned that the protagonist is small? ? ? A few chapters later, the first mission was introduced by the Xuesha Sect. In Yingtian Mansion, a sect whose leader was a second-rate master went into the city to rob ordinary people and ate flesh and blood to practice. The county magistrate was killed by the Xuesha Sect just as the government was about to encircle and suppress it? ? ? Damn, is this Yingtian Mansion? ? ? The Great Xia Dynasty, which has been grand for hundreds of years, has Dongchang, Xichang, Jinyiwei, and many masters, but it is actually helpless to be helped by a second-rate master who is even a second-rate master who brings trouble to Tianfu? ? ? What did you write? ? ? I can't stand it any longer, and if I keep reading it, Shen Nong himself won't be able to save me. If you think what I said is wrong, you can accept refutation.

After reading this book, I felt that there is someone who will succeed Gu Long Jin Yong. It is no exaggeration to say that this book is expected to become a martial arts classic, and it is not impossible to even surpass Gu Long Jin Yong. Martial arts is about having fun. If you glare at me, I will kill your whole family. The king's style is born with him, and all the heroes from all directions will surrender when they meet him. This book is indeed the starting point for martial arts!

Really. This book is really well written. I look forward to the follow-up development.

A little advice for the author of this new book! I haven't seen the book you updated here, not even the hundredth chapter. I'm sorry for shamelessly giving you advice here, but the starting point of this book is good, and the plot development is pretty fast as far as I can read, without any delay! As for the bad points, based on my own reading experience, they are as follows! First, the protagonist's planning and other things are still too different. Everything feels like the protagonist thinks this way, and things must develop like this. I keep making up my mind! Just like the Blood Demon Sect at the beginning, there is no basis. The protagonist directly reasons in his mind and then writes it like this, and it happens like this! Second, the protagonist changes so quickly that it makes people's scalp numb! To change from one person to another, one has to "die" once! The "death" mentioned here is to cast one's heart! Third, other people's descriptions were too light, which gave me the impression that this person was not simple, and then they kept emphasizing that he was not simple! Everything is revealed to be interesting, interesting, and conspiratorial, and then you look at it with a confused face. It feels like a middle-aged boy's non-stop fantasy! Fourthly, the plot of the story is too abrupt and unacceptable. There is no reason! The above points are the conclusions drawn from reading the book so far. Let's start from the beginning. The protagonist's transformation is so fast that people think how he experienced the inhumane darkness and transformed into a decisive and murderous person. However, it is not written in the article. Just because I read more about the miserable situation of today's society, was someone deceived about the recipe for liquor? From the moment he joined the Jinyiwei, the little tricks and conspiracies surrounding the protagonist were all based on the protagonist's unilateral speculation without any basis, but it happened just like this. From the time when Jinyiwei Xiaoqi seized power to the Xueshamen took the blame, the protagonist thought about it all the way, and everything happened naturally. To be honest, I felt really embarrassed! The descriptions of other supporting characters are too light, such as Lin Ying's description, Hu Heng's description, Guo Yuanxin's description, etc. In particular, Lin Ying and Hu Heng just write a few big characters on their faces to tell others that I am very powerful. The plot direction is abrupt. In fact, the reason why the plot direction feels so abrupt is entirely because the author, in order to take care of the protagonist, has clever calculations and turns your hands to make clouds and rain, forcing the plot to follow the protagonist's ideas. Therefore, many book friends feel that the main reason why the supporting character's IQ is insufficient! Finally, let's talk about the plot of the top 100 households at the beginning! Lin Ying's small-flag dual struggle designed to suppress Guo Yuanxin is really boring, especially when the Bloody Sect incident broke out later, and he arranged for the protagonist to deal with the Bloody Sect. Let's not talk about God's perspective here, let's talk about the current known situation. For Lin Ying, when I know that the boss has arranged a difficult task for me, and I want to find someone to blame, then Guo Yuanxin is the most suitable person. I can use this to tell him, "If you want to be in the position, you can do this task"! After the protagonist comes to the hereditary flag position, you can also arrange this task for him to experience! But the premise is that they cannot go alone, and they have to send someone to follow to ensure that the plan is in accordance with their own layout, but Lin Ying here is simply clueless! You're just fucking yourself to death! Then the amazing thing is that after the protagonist takes over the position of Xiaoqi, his speculation about the relationship between Lin Ying and Guo Yuanxin is exactly what he thinks about the plot, without any basis or proof! After the key point, he made Guo Yuanxin give in with a few words. He thought it was okay to put himself in someone else's shoes, but the readers would be very surprised. But it's hard to describe what's strange. In fact, this is what I just said. In order to highlight the protagonist's mastery of brain circuits, the author forced the plot to follow what he thought, so you will find it strange, especially when he quarreled with Guo Yuanxin and walked back, still counting 123 silently! After knowing the conspiracy of the Blood Demon Sect, you went directly to kill your boss. I admit that you were decisive but had no plan at all. Why did you do it? Why don't you become popular? With just two words from you, you can guarantee that Guo Yuanxin will definitely come out to block the knife for you? Two general banners and one hundred households! If one-third of the forces are not there, what can you do to resist? Can a layout that does not exclude any retreat be considered a strategy? Then I went to the Qianhu Office to be appointed, and the same thing happened here. I once again put myself in my shoes and thought about it. If I were Qianhu, I would not use someone like the protagonist. First of all, I would think of him as a Xiaoqi who dared to kill Baihu. So if he was in Baihu, would he dare to kill me, Qianhu? Second, it is undesirable for you to plot against me, a thousand households. A superior hates having his subordinates tell him what to do. Even if you know what I think, you have to pretend to be stupid. You can see Cao Cao and Yang Xiu for details! You can make plans, but you are seeking death by arranging troops! Especially since you still have that look on my face. I don't know if anyone else is like this, but I am the kind of person who would rather let the world down than let the world down. What I give you is yours. If I don't give it to you, you'd better not move! Then the protagonist's brain circuit started to work again, and the plot followed the protagonist's ideas. Therefore, when it was written that Hu Heng appointed the protagonist as a hundred households, many book friends complained. This is because the plot is abrupt and feels very unclear. Therefore, it feels like everyone is being outwitted! However, what's amazing is that the protagonist didn't have any escape arrangements, so he just took Lin Ying's head as a matter of course! Again, a plan without a way out is not a strategy! Have you ever thought about how much more Lin Ying can manage when he becomes a hundred households? Do you think it's enough to just give some benefits to thousands of households? What about the other hundred households? Let's not talk about ancient times, let's take reality as an example. It is indispensable to manage various leaders in order to get promoted! If you kill Lin Ying, will the other hundred households spare you? Unfortunately, the plot was not written, so it just came full circle! If I were Qianhu Hu Heng, I would not agree to your request, but you must bring your management! Whether you can take up the position of Baihu depends on whether you handle the matter of the Blood Demon Sect properly, so as to suppress the protagonist's spirit! Also, the book friend said that Qianhu feels that the current protagonist is too weak, so what if he is given Baihu? No matter how ambitious he is, he has to keep it! Yes, this sentence is correct, but when you say this sentence, you are already giving wisdom to our Lord Qianhu! Would a person who could get into this position have no brains? As a small flag, the protagonist killed hundreds of households, with two general flags in between, and it was not the general flag who came back to life! ! ! What would you think if it were you? Secondly, taking the boss's head to claim credit highlights two points: decisive killing and arrogant self-confidence. Speaking of the above points, I will kill the protagonist no matter how well he handles the mission of the Blood Demon Sect after it is over! The longer this kind of person uses it, the more dangerous it becomes. The best way is to use it once! The above plots are all about empathy and not viewing from God's perspective. If I were to view it from God's perspective, I feel that I could use the protagonist a few more times! That's a lot to say. Although I always say that this is not good or bad, I actually like the beginning of this book very much! I also hope that the author can avoid the problems I mentioned above! I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better and better!

It's too vicious. If you want to kill your boss, you might as well find some evidence to drive him out. But if you want to kill your boss in the workplace, who would dare to use such a person? Don't be afraid of being killed when the time comes. And set an example for his subordinates, as long as he can kill his boss, he can rise to the top? Don't say that force is supreme, it's untenable

I only have three recommendation votes every day, and I will give them to you starting from today, just because it suits my appetite, come on, author bacteria 😁

How can you enjoy grudges in officialdom? Let's take the simplest example of the death of the eunuch Wei Zhongxian. The whole world knows that he is a bad person and a corrupt official, so what can he do? He is the spokesperson of the emperor. He is very good at doing things. Everything the emperor wants to do is done properly. His backer is the emperor. The emperor believes that if the emperor does not want to kill him, no one can kill him? As the protagonist is a royal guard, can you kill him? If you kill him, the emperor will kill you. If you resist, you are rebelling. Then you should be a p-dressed guard! When I saw the title of this book, I knew the general situation. To survive in the officialdom, you rely on your brains, not your fists. Even if the protagonist avoids officialdom and only hangs out in the world, as long as you are famous and have the title of Jinyiwei, the officials will naturally find you. People can't help themselves in the arena, and people can't help themselves even more in officialdom. The name Jin Yiwei ties up the protagonist's hands and feet, so it's meaningless.

The logic doesn't make sense. For example, the first cheat was discovered by Yi Yi, but no one discovered it when he fought with the Blood Demon Gate to break through later? What is the energy of breakthrough, what is the basis for breakthrough, why can a person who is not a first-rate person kill a second-rate person? Is it possible that no one except the protagonist exercises his body? If he can kill a second-rate person, why do others congratulate him for just becoming a first-rate person? Is the rating only based on internal strength? Why can Bai Xiaosheng know what the protagonist has done and that there is a Bai Xiaosheng spy in Jinyiwei? Bai Xiaosheng has a mirror that can know the world's affairs? Why does nothing happen to the protagonist when he goes up to his superiors like this? Aren't the superiors always doing things to their subordinates? Why is the protagonist sure that the emperor will know about this? Why does he think that the emperor is unwilling and will help the protagonist. Why is the protagonist so cruel and so cruel that he doesn't react at all when seeing blood for the first time? So where did the golden finger come from, and what does it do? I can't figure it out, so I say goodbye.

No matter what you do, you have to work overtime when you come to my electronics factory from the east factory to the west factory.

Martial arts are weak. Jin Gu sighed. It's really hard to read a good martial arts book. Fortunately, he found this book. Although he is still immature, he finally bravely raised the banner of martial arts. It is hope and the dawn of martial arts. Please write carefully. Please read it patiently.

From the beginning, I felt that the protagonist was out of his mind. In a troubled era where force is paramount, an official could become an ordinary person and become an ordinary person. How could he become a wise man? Giving away poison points at the start?

He died of poison in the first chapter. . .

I gave up after watching Hundred Households Killed. It was so rubbish. The subordinates killed the superiors, and there was no evidence. Just because you are strong, what happened to people cheating on you? If you have the guts, you can switch over. Do you think everyone will treat you as a pawn? This knife is too sharp and cannot be controlled. There is only one ending, the rabbit dies and the dog dies.

I am a person who has read novels for more than ten years. I have read various books and know all kinds of routines. Many of them are boring to read. After reading one chapter, I can at least guess the content of the next twenty chapters. From my point of view, this book is well written and makes me want to read it. This book should not have this score.

I didn't recognize him as a Jinyiwei at all. I feel that this system is worse than a Jianghu gang, and is similar to a Shantou Shanzhai. He kills whenever his boss says. He has no background, no strength, and is completely reckless.

The advancement of strength is so slow, so there are so many of them, the lower ones are better than the upper ones. If you read the book of Invincible style, then you have to be invincible. You tell me that you can kill an innate person with a sword in half a step. Are you kidding me? Are you fantasizing about cultivating immortals? Junk book