Douluo Dalu: The Sharingan from the Start

Did you design the talents of the supporting characters too well? The protagonist Tang San in the original book was only level 29 at the age of 12, but here a supporting character is level 29 at the age of seven or eight 🙂

The protagonist's IQ is not online! Bibi Dong is a very arrogant person who wants to accept you as his apprentice as soon as he meets you. He also takes in your son. You are so awesome.

It feels a bit childish. But the foreshadowing is okay. Hope it can be pulled back later. The female characters are too silly and sweet. The male characters are also a bit silly. Everything else is fine

The poison is introduced at the beginning, they are all awakened martial arts at the age of six, and the supporting characters are murderous to strangle the cradle, are you kidding me? Adults think this way, but a six-year-old child knows nothing but is jealous and murderous.

The introduction is too short. Why is Douluo Continent called Douluo Continent? Then I also asked why the earth is called earth.

I really can't accept the character of the protagonist. I feel like I just like each other. The protagonist has no emotional foreshadowing for Ning Rongrong and has an inexplicable feeling. Besides, the protagonist is from Wuhun Palace, how can he get together with the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect? It's funny. I'm afraid the author doesn't know how to play politics. I can guarantee you that Ning Fengzhi is definitely not a good guy. Also, the protagonist's attitude towards Qian Renxue is hot and cold, which is funny. Hu Liena has no role at all. In the later stage, what does Hu Liena, the heroine, do? The image was painted so deeply in the first place, so what was going on? It feels worse than Zhu Zhuqingzhong, and the protagonist's attitude towards Qian Renxue is really unacceptable. It feels like he is forced to like her, which makes people feel a very far-fetched feeling. It feels that Qian Renxue is dispensable. The protagonist gives me the feeling of Qian Renxue. Ren Xue is dead, and he won't even take a look at it. If the author doesn't like this character, he can write less of his role. Don't write about this disgusting feeling. Once you write it, you have to be responsible for your work. If you like it, like it, like it! Why do you say you won't marry if you don't want to marry? You have to be responsible for what you say. Isn't the protagonist's mentality so disgusting? The author wants to change it, as well as the protagonist's attitude towards Wuhun Palace. Isn't it too strange? It feels like Wuhundian owes him money, as well as the construction of the character Qian Daoliu. Although there are relatively few images of Sendaoliu in the original work, it gives the impression that he has dedicated everything to the angel clan. Has the character setting of Sendaoliu been changed too much in this book? Not to mention other things, I don't know what other people are like, but my purpose in reading novels is to bring myself into the protagonist's character, to feel the protagonist's emotions, and to bring myself into the situation to feel the real passionate feeling. The purpose of reading fan fiction is to see that the tragedy in the original work will no longer happen, and to see the protagonist's hopeless look. However, this book gave me the feeling that it is a harem novel, followed by a passionate novel, and then a villain novel, and it is also a very nonsense harem. This feeling makes me very strange and uncomfortable. There are hundreds of them. It is not easy for the author to change it. The author should think about it later! When writing a book, refer to it. The author writes a novel, or it can be said that it is not a novel. Many people don't want to use the first person because it is not easy to substitute. The author writes a real thing, which makes people's brains feel it is real and makes people feel passionate. If the author understands it, he will understand it, and if he does not understand it, he will not understand it.

In the first chapter, I couldn't resist. . . . I feel inexplicably embarrassed and ashamed when I look at it

I've risen to nearly ten levels in a few months with just one supporting character. Why don't you go to heaven?

It's too naive. In the early stage, Chen Hao estimated that 90% of the people were dismissed 😥

When it comes to Douluo, you still use Chakra. Are you sure there is Chakra in "Douluo Continent"? Chakra, an energy that consumes the human body's potential, becomes stronger and dies faster. We've already reached "Douluo Dalu", and sand sculptures still use chakra? My brain is flooded.