Experience Starts from Tianlong

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First, divide the paragraphs into sections. Try to keep the sections within 4 lines, preferably 2 or 3 lines. The look and feel of the work is very important! This means that the reader feels uncomfortable. The mobile APP has the best look and feel. Second, there is the issue of person. At the beginning, I saw the third person, and then suddenly it changed to the first person, and then it changed to the third person. ? ? ? Although the first person may be the inner description of the protagonist, but in my opinion, it doesn't look like it, it is the first person. Please choose a person to write, either a first-person novel or a third-person novel. Repeatedly switching persons will cause readers to pause while reading, and then you will lose readers. Third, the author's will, remove your author's will, do not appear in the novel, and write in a normal way that allows readers to integrate into the world. When reality collides with the world in the story, your sudden appearance will shatter the world. Fourth, for character setting, please refine the character information into concise text to inform readers. Some unnecessary information only needs to be mentioned in one stroke. Too much detail is just a waste of pen and ink, disturbs the quiet world, and has the opposite effect. Carefully put the text where it is needed, which is the development of the current story line. Overall review, the writing is excellent and the story is smooth. Suggestions: Pay attention to paragraph issues, change the person's person in the character, and eliminate the influence of sitting will on the story. If you want to say something to the reader, you can go to the book circle or the writer's forum to say it. Don't include text, that's not good. _(:з∠)_Come on!

I'm still updating this late, come on ＾0＾~ I'll give you one vote

The writing is indeed as delicate as a female video, which is very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

The plot is good. The heroine may be more popular with girls. It's not easy to create. Keep up the good work.

Received, haha, I also wanted to write about Tianlong before, but unfortunately later I became a eunuch

I don't feel like it's like a fairy tale

I'm asking for advice. I heard that Jin Yong's fans don't sign contracts. How did you sign this book?