No Mercy

Author: Biluo Qinghua Category: Martial Arts/Guoshi Wushuang Status: Contracted/On the shelves Number of words read: 240,000 words Preliminary score: 89 Story plot (review): In this part of the plot, the author has good ideas and good writing. Through the first three chapters, I saw the author's best interpretation of this story. You know what you want to write, and I understand what you want to say after reading it. In the story of this article, you are going to write about a Jianghu. The Jianghu in your heart, I thought it was just a simple Jianghu like the previous book. But what I didn't expect was that from Chapter 13 to Chapter 20, you told two different stories, or you wrote two interpretations of the Jianghu. After Chapter 20, the couple stabbing each other with swords made the whole story not only cause the turning point in the first paragraph, but also sublimate the overall story. What you wrote at the beginning is that you want to tell a different world from here on, and it will be considered a life (crosstalk lingo). This story begins to become no longer just a story, but more like a textbook, and everyone who reads it can learn something. In the following story, whether I laughed or cried, I saw the world of justice and humanity. I saw the world of the world that I had wanted to write about for so many years but could never write about. There is no so-called savior hero with the aura of the protagonist, and there is no so-called pure villain. Some are just unspeakable stories of the past, some are just the various aspects of life under the sophistication of the world, and some are just stories about this black and white chaos. I once joked that book reviewers should be absolutely pertinent and not mix personal emotions. From the first word of the book review in Guan Shu Ma, it is always a spectator of someone else's matter. We must write this story very pertinently, so that readers can try to understand a story they want to know. But now, I just want to say, I'm sorry, that's because you haven't met your single cycle. When you meet it, I think the so-called pertinence is to praise it. Writing (Comment): In terms of writing, well, if the story successfully moved me, the character creation is much better than the previous book. In terms of writing and storyline, I will definitely give you ninety points, or even higher. But, author, the reason why I didn't give you ninety points is not because your writing is not good. On the contrary, your progress is visible to the naked eye, but all the obvious errors in your book make me have to go and even predict that I will give you a high score of ninety points. So far, although the story of the whole book is very good, the character creation is quite successful. But when I step into the role, I can only say that if you, the author, still write the tone of children's speech into an adult tone, then I still beg you not to write about children in the future. It is too embarrassing and more likely to cause drama. Speaking of characters, I have to mention another problem that appeared in your last book. Character names are often wrong (although it is much better than in the previous book). My suggestion is that I hope you can set up the main character's name. As for the supporting characters, try to keep their names fixed, otherwise it will be easy to get confused and it will affect the perception and immersion of the story. Now that we have mentioned the names, let's talk about the character dialogue and word usage first. The character dialogue is sometimes too white and modern. Although it can help readers understand what you are talking about, I always feel like I am watching a lunatic talking to himself (actually, you can look more for the feeling of the conversation when the old man takes the little prince for a walk, because I think this paragraph has that kind of martial arts style, although it is straightforward but it feels to the point). Now let me talk about the plot. The story is indeed good, but as you said, you wanted to write 108 heroes, the heroes in your heart. You succeeded in this, but you were too selfless. , May I ask about your Jianghu? Comprehensive evaluation: In general, this book, as I mentioned above, although the characters are vividly created, the overall reading is still a bit scattered. Of course, I know you wanted to write about 108 heroes in your heart, and you did it, but author, what you wrote is not a memoir of a martial artist, but a novel that tells a story. Therefore, the necessary coherence and the world set out by each character still need to be vividly drawn one after another to let readers remember that you have written a good novel. Actually, to be honest, compared to the previous book, after I read this book in two days, this book of yours, the author, really made me leave for three days. From the slow introduction of the first three chapters, to the gradual sublimation of the next fifteen to twenty chapters, and the precise positioning of the story before it was put on the shelves, you have taken every step hazily but carefully, which is worthy of recognition. But I hope you can't ignore the problem with this book, because if you don't overcome it, it will really become a stumbling block in your future. Okay, this is the end of this article. I hope that the author's book will be selected into the boutique channel when it is completed. I also hope that the author can show visible improvements in the next book. I wish the author a bright future, come on! I am Tong Yan, an ordinary user of Qidian. Goodbye. Note: Reprinted from Passerby Book Review Stall Circle

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Hahaha why did you end up in the Chinese martial arts category! This is very unpopular🐵In fact, your idea can be placed in the traditional martial arts category, but... Emmm traditional martial arts is indeed very cold, face covering

Let me count the masters on the Emperor's Favor List! ! !

The writing style is super stable and has the style of Liang Yusheng and Jin Yong. The narrative is solid, the foreshadowing is profound, and the foreshadowing is full of foreshadowing. I wish I could become a god soon, revive martial arts, and let martial arts occupy a place in today's online literary world!

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I got it from piracy, I hope it won't end badly, keep writing it well, looking forward to the follow-up of the story

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I announce that the author is my boyfriend!

Come on! ! Although this book has a martial arts shell, the core is something new! ! It feels like there's a lot of foreshadowing! ! Please keep updating! !

The book is a good book, but it looks very tiring. Maybe my brain is broken after reading too much. This book looks like snow, so I can only read it slowly. I will get a headache after reading too much.

Add a bookshelf and try again when you have time. Come on, author.

Come on, the writing is beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

😂😂😂 You are so stuck on word count...

There is no system for making wool. Is there anyone who still watches traditional martial arts?

After reading the speech, I have gained a lot of insights, please keep going. In this world, most people are changing careers. I hope your dreams come true!

The novel is written in an ancient style, with good writing style and correct views. It has the character of traditional Chinese martial arts. The details of the pits are more ingenious. What impressed me was that half of the storyteller was missing, and there was still a bun shop selling buns. I think some messy backgrounds can be removed, or placed in the context of the work. Whether others like it or not. Start telling the story directly. If at the beginning the speaker gets to the exciting point, he suddenly stops, and then with a bang, a person throws a jar of wine and drinks with him. Then the blind man stumbled and fell on the table. Then I wrote that everyone dispersed in a hurry, except for two people, one big and one small, who still had unfinished thoughts and made some guesses. This makes it much more compact and attractive. Personal suggestion. For reference only. Wishing you a great fire!

Ask if the protagonist is a strong man

It's 800,000 words, and I'm so afraid of you, eunuch! ! !

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Congratulations to the book friend who was brave enough to be promoted to the head of "No Mercy" at two o'clock in the morning.

I don't know what the ending will be like. Will Li Zhizhi really die?

Come on~~ Looking forward to the ending. After the decisive battle, will there still be a world?

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