Xunjin Town

. . . Don't make it a long paragraph, bro. . . Even if it's an interruption. . . At any rate, don't leave it as a comma except for the period at the end.

1. Everyone has martial arts feelings in their heart, but where is the author's great feeling? 2. Where is the center of martial arts? It should be mentioned in terms of chivalry and righteousness, and what our author wrote in big words, the whole story is about robbery, and then the man in black appears to rescue him, and then he starts to talk about the king's law. Author, what do you want to express? 3. After three chapters, the characters appeared, and I couldn't figure out who the protagonist was, or has the protagonist not appeared? 4. The segmentation problem is huge, it looks very difficult, and there are too many dialogues, which affects the sense of substitution!

The writing of this novel is not bad, but there is no main line. The protagonist has no idea what he is doing... Read roughly one chapter and then read it