Pirate Jojo

I suddenly found a problem. I like the Uchiha who writes Naruto very much. People in the clan look down on the protagonist. And several enemies, including those in the navy of One Piece. Many people choose Akainu as the enemy of the protagonist. Is this the internal fighting spirit of our countrymen? Why must we kill each other? Lieutenant-General Teafish is actually quite good. I can't understand why he is needed. As an enemy, you can even make him a subordinate. I haven't discovered the protagonist's charisma and personal charisma until now. If you just rely on being a substitute, you will never betray. In this case, being a leader will be a failure. Can't it be like Aizen Kuzuo's type in Bleach? The kind that is full of character charm, leadership ability is also amazing, and personal belief is very strong.

Ah, this is on the shelves without a testimonial? Not prepared at all

Alas, author, have you ever read K? There are seven swords in K. They can give superpowers to others. Each of the seven swords has powerful abilities and can give unlimited superpowers to others. Isn't this great?

The blade is here. Come on↖(^ω^)↗

Rarely seen JoJo theme, submit and recommend it first

The results are not good and the plot is too empty. In fact, it does not describe the thoughts of other people after gaining the ability to stand in. It just relies on the protagonist blindly. It feels that all the characters have the same personality as the protagonist once they obtain the ability to stand in. In this case, instead of writing about the protagonist relying on the ability to stand in, it is better to turn the protagonist into a mastermind with six arrows. Then he has an invincible stand that can talk nonsense at will, and then assigns other stand-ins to the characters in the anime. This may look better and can also derive a lot of Jojo memes.

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is terrible. There are so many substitutes that he can't handle it. There is no main plot at all.

Although there are loopholes, it is inevitable that some places have been rounded 👍

There should be many locations on Sky Island, not just the one in Golden Country. Nami once learned meteorological knowledge on Kongdao. The Grand Line in the Golden Land also exists in the New World. In the original text, Kaido jumped from the sky island and hit a group of supernovas in the New World.

Author, you didn't change the timeline a little bit. At least the three nature-type generals are not from the same class. Secondly, even Kuzan has fought with the Roger Pirates more than once. What's more, Akainu and Kizaru, who graduated earlier than him, how could they not have graduated before Roger became the Pirate King? , And Drex Mogvergo is from the same class, several years behind the three generals. Cha Dolphin Peach Rabbit is in the middle period between the two. Although you said that the timeline has been changed, this affects the whole body. If so many changes were made at the beginning, wouldn't there be more changes later...