The First Year of Decay

There are too many words in each paragraph. I feel tired from looking at it🌚🌚In addition, after reading the first five chapters, I have no sense of immersion 🤔

The bookmarks are so messy, they are all organized and there is no cheat code.

,, Mainly because the selection of supporting characters in the early stage is not very good. The author should choose a young girl who can go on forever, or choose an animal that can only go to the end of the book together. This way can attract readers and have a sustenance to attract readers to continue reading. It is a cliché to attract attention and sell characters. The main reason is that the plot is well written and the writing is up to par. It can still be popular, but there is no desire to read the first three golden chapters and the wine is afraid of the deep alley!

I think it would be better for the author to replace the cigarette in the introduction with a bag of instant noodles or a piece of ham.

After reading the first chapter, I thought it was good. The killer setting is not too weak, and I hope that the character and personality created will be satisfying. I will continue reading, so keep up the good work! ! 😁😁😁

Haven't read it yet, the introduction is attractive, bookmark it first

No other elements are added, and there is no attractive plot. There will be ghosts only if you don't starve to death...😅

Damn, I read a few chapters, and I strongly want to improve the IQ of the supporting characters, but I can't do it alone.