Harry Died as Soon as He Came Up

#Harry Died as soon as he came up# This super-good fanfic has progressed to the school part, and it feels more interesting. I really like this kind of mixture of the original work that is plausible and not. The author's thinking has always been very clear, and he has not fallen into daily life. He always shows the darkness behind the seemingly easy daily life. By the way, after knowing the spoilers, Voldemort finally looked like a real devil, instead of the mindless madness before. There are not many detailed characters in the school, but the characters are captured very accurately, and the things they do are exactly what I imagined they would do. The protagonist didn't catch Hermione in a relationship, but felt that a little brat couldn't interest her, which was really annoying! He has an adult mentality, and he is crazy about liking children. Draco is really full of Dihua attributes, but he is just a middle-aged brat. But I don't particularly like Reed's analysis of the composition of magic. It always feels like a complex system of cultivating immortals, and I have a suspicion that the skills will be slower in the future. Looking forward to the exciting development in the future! How can it not be popular if it looks so good!

#HarryDieD as soon as I come up# I discovered a very nice fan work, and I feel it can be ranked second on the list of my favorite Harry Potter fans (the first is Harry Potter and the Way of Reason) 1. First of all, I feel that the author's entry point is great. The protagonist accidentally tricked Harry and was forced to pretend to be Voldemort's son. He also spoiled the original novel for Voldemort and had to carry the banner of salvation within the enemy, still in hard mode. And because Voldemort has won, the personnel arrangements of both the Ministry of Magic and Hogwarts are very different, which immediately gives people a refreshing feeling. Without the development of the original work to refer to, I feel that the story structure is a test of the author's skills. 2. I have read many fan stories, most of which time travel into original characters to meet Harry and his friends to explore the magical world or fall in love. They are very dependent on the original works. But this book has a sense of re-deconstruction. The protagonist (Reed) appears as a character who can start an adventure on his own. His actions are no longer forcibly bound to the plot of Harry Potter. Instead, he takes on the role of "savior" and defeats the villains in his own way, unlike other fans who try to steal Harry's opportunities. 3. The characteristics of the protagonist are very endearing to me. I feel like I just like witty and kind-hearted protagonists like Xiao Ke. The protagonist here is very good, very thoughtful and kind-hearted without being a virgin. 4. And because of rationality, I really like thinking about Muggle technology as a wizard. Because I feel that the living standards of the wizards in the original work are really not high, and they are a bit stuck in their own ways, so I don't want fans to limit themselves to a small circle. The plot of this book has a world perspective. Considering that Voldemort has to face the pressure of public opinion from foreign countries when he governs the country, I like it very much. At the beginning, when Barty Jr.'S conspiracy was to bring nuclear peace to the world, I felt that this fanfic was good. The protagonist pulling out a gun on the train is awesome👍 4. The supporting characters all follow the original characters, and they are not OOC. In the context of Voldemort's victory, the choices of the supporting characters are very consistent with their characters. And what I like very much is that there are no additional characters inexplicably, especially the addition of a honey girl, the protagonist can create a variable! I was reading a fanfic before and a beautiful and mysterious girl with a mouth suddenly appeared out of nowhere. I felt uncomfortable all over. This type of original girl is what I hate the most. 5. The author's language is plain, and the plot sections are clearly divided. The protagonist always has a goal, and the whole novel has a clear context. I feel that the last 50 chapters have improved compared to the previous ones. It's really amazing! Oh, it's good, but it's too short. I hope the author can keep writing! Don't be fooled! There are really not many fans that I like! I'm really looking forward to the future development! ! !

This is the first time I've seen HP start like this... It's quite interesting, don't be a eunuch.

Come on, author, update soon. Once you sign the contract, the monthly ticket for next month will be left to you.

Reed traveled to the world of Harry Potter, and in order to survive, he disguised himself as Voldemort's "son" from the future, letting Voldemort know that he was destined to be killed, so Harry was killed before he could grow up. In a future without Harry, what will be the development of the wizarding world under Voldemort's rule? On the other hand, the rapid development of technology in the Muggle world has gradually threatened the existence of the wizarding world. Pure blood and mixed blood, Muggles and wizards, what will be the future direction of the world, and what choice should Li De make?

After reading seven chapters, I really can't stand it. As a person on Voldemort's side, the protagonist doesn't want to help Voldemort, but wants him to die? What kind of cerebral palsy logic is this? What will happen to you if Voldemort falls? In the end, Snape, the second-in-command, was caught. Instead of helping him be executed, you instead dragged him away. Are you an idiot who is asking for his own death? You must know that Snape has the deepest hatred for the protagonist and Voldemort in the world. I can't read this book without thinking. I'm convinced.

The author asks, would you consider a female protagonist? Can my classmates grow up a little bit? It doesn't matter if you have the Dark Flow, you can portray the magic of love like a new Slytherin student!

How can I get fan points if it is not on the shelves? As a reader, I still strongly support the protection of the rights of the author group. I wish you good luck in safeguarding your rights. Value

I hope the author changes the age so that you can steal things and monitor things at the age of 2. You are a precious agent. This is really too poisonous.

Let me bubble up to prove my existence, and then dive in. I hope the author will be more diligent in updating.

Strong, one word to sum it up. The story is handled very well. Nothing feels unnatural, at least that's what I think. Well worth a look. This month's investment is gone, and I will definitely make up for it next month. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I've been watching it, and I have nothing to say, it's just good!

As the story develops, the plot unfolds bit by bit, and the previous foreshadowing gradually emerges. The novel is very interesting and is expected to be a masterpiece.

I like this book very much. It changed the pattern of the magical world from the beginning. The original plot is also very smooth and some of the characters are well created. The plot in the prison camp gave me the feeling of watching Schindler's List . Currently there is no problem of combat power expansion, and the combination of magic and technology is quite reasonable. If you don't follow the routine, it's a pretty good fanfic.

One of the most amazing openings in Harry Potter fan fiction. After the spell system is released, the battles will feel more exciting than the original ones.

Both the writing and the plot are okay, a Harry Potter fanfic with a slightly faster pace.

I suggest the author py it or urge the editor to make a recommendation. This quality is sure to be a hit

It's different from the direction I want. I would rather work with the dark forces, helping "Dad" with things while gradually gathering small groups, and finally rebel and rise to power. Now it's more like being in darkness and looking towards the light, which doesn't feel very good...

She sent me a small recommendation, and she forced me to invest. I came in and took a look with the attitude of not perfunctory her, and invested willingly hahahaha.