Harry Potter and Ollivander

Wow! When I was looking through the comments, I saw a book friend saying that you recommended my book, so I hurried to study it and found that many of them agreed with me! The results are better than mine, and the recommendation votes are over 2,000 (ಥ_ಥ). Come on!

Overall it's pretty good, except for one thing: the protagonist seems to have no other highlights besides being able to make wands. . Although the grades are all O, I feel a bit like an enhanced version of Hermione. She has rich theoretical knowledge but no practical experience. It is a bit of a problem for the protagonist to have such a weak memory with past life memories. The author himself also said that the protagonist's good grades are attributed to the Ollivander family's photographic memory and soul strength. . . The protagonists of other books will have at least one or more highlights, such as runes and magic texts, such as alchemy, such as the detailed application of magic spells, or the application of potions. . The protagonist's soul is powerful but he cannot cast spells silently. Even the HP protagonist's compulsory Occlumency cannot be practiced. . . Finally, there was some hope in potions, but they did not develop it. Snape even said that the complete intelligence-enhancing potion was different from the simplified one. After hearing this, the protagonist left in despair. . . Please, can't you borrow Harry's invisibility cloak? Can't I read the potion books in the ** section? Anyway, there is one thing. The protagonist is always afraid that his butterfly wings will disrupt the plot of the original work. He is timid and always tries to show his presence in front of Voldemort. What is the purpose? He still participates in the activities of the Iron Triangle without life-saving skills. The first time he encounters danger, he relies on the centaurs to rescue him, the second time he encounters danger, he relies on the wand to protect him, and the third time he encounters danger, he relies on Hagrid to save him. Doesn't the protagonist have any sense of danger? To be fair, the protagonists of the Qidian Orphanage in the past two years are eager to leave the Novice Village at full level. There are few means of saving their lives and they will never take risks. However, the protagonist does not have any of them. . . If you want to participate in the plot, you must at least have some relatively strong means. What are the benefits of participating rashly? Is Dumbledore's chess game so easy to enter? I talked a lot of nonsense. The main reason is that I felt a little frustrated while reading the article. The protagonist encountered several dangers and did not remember them for long. As a time traveler, he exposed himself to danger time and time again when he knew the plot but did not work hard to develop his own strength. The magic stone was memorized twice by Voldemort in the first grade. There was a huge basilisk in the second grade. How could he survive without improving his strength? Do you want to pin your hope on Voldemort not killing pure bloods but killing Muggles? Hurry up and cheat the protagonist to improve his strength. Whether it is the system or something else, if you want to participate in the plot, you must have the strength to save your life. This is normal at least. The protagonist who has lived in two lives must go to the Qidian Orphanage for further training, otherwise the protagonist will not survive ten chapters in other books. . . I have said a lot and mainly complained about it. I am not criticizing the author. I hope the author will not be too angry. . . . . .

It's okay to have Qiu as the heroine, but to be honest, there's something wrong with this kind of banana heroine. Especially to Chinese readers, this kind of banana man looks very strange.

Perhaps the reason for the poor performance of this book is largely because the beginning is too bland. I hope friends who have just read this book will not rush to close it and read a few more chapters. After the plot unfolds, it will be good. Personally, I think it's at least as good as the one next door named Porter. It can be seen that the author is actually working very hard. Not everyone would dare to achieve more than 200,000 yuan naked. There are many people who rely on feelings and enthusiasm to hold on, but most of them are eunuchs... Don't be discouraged. It is said that Wangyu, a mortal who cultivated immortality, paid 400,000 yuan before signing. You are half as good as him! The night is long, but the sky will always light up. I hope you can do what you said and keep writing as long as someone reads it. To give you a small encouragement, sign up and reward the leader, and automatically subscribe when it is listed. Come on! Keep writing! Don't let down the readers who wait for your updates every day!

The author writes really well, by the way, I would like to mention some of my suggestions: 1. HP is a normal wizarding world after all. Generally speaking, a single female protagonist Qiu is fine, but dual female protagonists Qiu and Hermione are not impossible, but it is best not to exceed two. I still support single, but I am not opposed to two; 2. Don't pair Hermione with that red-haired Weasley! I really can't accept that Hermione would like a jealous, bad-mouthed, childish person. If the author can write to the end, Haha, Cy (Cedric) Haha is actually pretty good. After all, if you steal Cedric's love, you have to compensate Cedric, and you have to make up for it. Hermione is not bad at showing either, and is worthy of Ced (Hach actually personally thinks he is the best, the relationship between the two is definitely not such a simple friendship, only Hermione can persuade Harry when he is furious); 3. Can Cedric not die during the Goblet of Fire? . . Although Harry began to mature because of Cedric's death, it was such a pity that he died. . . ;4. Has the author thought about the future direction of the Order of the Phoenix if he does not participate in the plot of the protagonist? (I doubt that the author has ever thought this far). Ollivander is the protagonist's grandfather. According to the development of the plot, he will definitely conflict with the Death Eaters and lead to the Elder Wand and Grindelwald. The protagonist cannot watch his grandfather being captured, so he must side with the Order of the Phoenix (I don't think the protagonist will become a Death Eater). Where will Heqiu go after the war begins? 5. I hope the author can control the growth rate of the protagonist, because I am personally very optimistic about this novel and do not want it to be ruined because of the opinions of some book friends. There is no need for the protagonist to cheat and become a Dumbledore-type person, and there is no need to introduce any weird evil gods or vampires. HP is a low-demon world. There is no need for the protagonist to be so powerful. What Harry Potter preaches is love, not strength that can cover the sky with one hand. In the later stage, just be stronger than the average Auror. Just leave the AOE to Harry (just kidding, those with strength up to 3, Most of the books that were called Dumbledore II in the 4th grade were mindless and cool, or they were silent, or they introduced a new power system such as a secret treasure); 6. I hope the author will not give up his own opinions because of the threats of some unreasonable book friends, those who disagree with each other. There is no need to delete those who abandon the book and say goodbye. Of course, if the author relies on the book to make a living, forget it, but I still hope that he can not forget his original intention and stick to his main line (the author of the Bloodline Wizard was so miserable in the third time turner); 7. The ball of the Goblet of Fire must be written well. . . . After passing this village, there is no such shop. This is the turning point of the entire HP series. The later depressive writing style needs to be supported by love to be written; 8. The fifth part is an important plot point. Although I don't like the depression of that part, it cannot be denied that it enlarges the world from Hogwarts to the whole of Britain. It is also a good way for the protagonist to face the world. Opportunity; 9. Regarding Dumbledore, I personally feel that he is a very complicated person, not a good person but not a bad person. It is best not to criticize him too much (but he has a strong desire to control, so stay away from him as much as possible); 10. It would be great if the author could finish the book. If it is really going to end, I hope he can finish it after the Goblet of Fire. It can be regarded as the last tenderness before the Wizarding War. Finally, cheers to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง!

I am reading books. As a reader who started reading very early, I really like Ollivander's setting. This setting is completely based on my cuteness. Because I haven't read the following chapters yet, I'm not sure where I'm going now, but I always feel that the Ollivander family is something that can be explored deeply. Since it is an ancient family, it must have something to offer, and it must be more than just being rich and powerful. After seeing some discussions about the plot direction and character settings in the comment area, I personally feel that although they are all reasonable, I hope the author will not be too disturbed by these. Of course, the same is true for what I said above. After all, it is you who writes the book in the end. Everything you write should follow your own ideas. After all, this is what you love. Although I personally like to be spoiled, I don't really like to be spoiled by the author himself, not to mention that the spoilers are all dog food... ORZ😟 I am so incoherent, I really like this book... I have never sent such a long message to other books... Finally, the author, please come on, I have given it to you for the first time in so many years of reading at Qidian. You have to be responsible!

For people of our age, the Wizarding World of Harry Potter is a dream that has been buried deep in our hearts since childhood. Even though we know that it is just a fictional literary work, we have always secretly hoped that when we were 11 years old, a fat Scottish chicken with a round face would flap its wings and land on the mailbox in front of our house, bringing a thick parchment letter... The outline of this book has been stored in the computer for nearly three years, and for various reasons I have never been able to write it. After hesitating for a long time, I finally decided to start writing seriously. The original intention was actually not to make money or become famous, but simply to share my inner thoughts with more people and get a small amount of recognition. Or maybe, it was to fulfill my childhood dream. I have plenty of time recently, so I can guarantee the update efficiency for the time being. However, after all, I am not a full-time author, and there may be interruptions in updates in the future. I hope all viewers will bear with you. But I can guarantee one thing, no matter whether this book is signed or not published, it will be written carefully. Thanks

I almost thought it was Harry and Ollie.

The beginning is well written! Hope it doesn't collapse! Come on! !

Dear author, why haven't you signed a contract with 1,000 collections and 3,000 recommendation votes? Mengxin said it was too scary.

Love it, love it! Come on, writer, I will continue to pursue it

Come on! I like it

It's great ヾ(*´▽'*)ﾉ

The author's writing is really good! !

The author is very promising~~~

Harry Potter and Ollie Hagang. (Manual funny dog ​​head saves life)

If it's more than seven days, can I order a complete qwq, so that I can get a little money at the end?

I didn't click in but saw "Harry Potter and Ultraman...". Our first reaction was Harry Potter and Ultraman, and then we clicked in instantly (face covering)

After reading so many Harry Potter fanfics, the heroine has never had her turn with Cho Chang, and even if there is a description, it has been brushed aside. I have to say that this is a pity for the gentle Qiu Zhang, so when I saw the author's self-recommendation in the post forum, I came 😌😌. Write well! ! !

Posting more memes or provocative topics may make it easier to sign a contract

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

After signing the contract, do you have to pay to watch it?

Can you please stop trying to steal Harry's halo as the protagonist?

Just restore the third update and it will be fine,

When will the new book be available😭😭

I hope it can add a little more drama on the Chinese side

Come on, I believe you will sign the contract