Days to Build Friendship at Hogwarts

When will the main character Glenn's system appear? When will the heroine come out?

It is absolutely possible to customize gold fingers: Physical strengthening: strength, burst, durability, self-healing... Perceptual strengthening: spider sense, intuition, inner eye... Mental strengthening: anti-fatigue, anti-charm, anti-illusion... Magic strengthening: total amount, output, battery life, recovery... If you have money, power and connections, you can definitely do it: Alchemy: Magic technology tree... Potions: strengthening, healing... Wand making: various non-standard wands... The protagonist can build connections even if he is not the White Devil. He does everything himself, which is a huge loss...

From the moment the heroine appeared, she ran away without giving money to buy a wand. This setting was quite a failure. Although it was intended to create a dispute between the male and female protagonists, it was too blunt and abrupt. If she didn't give money to buy things, then she, with such qualities, would no longer be qualified to enter the school.

The protagonist is the grandson of Ollivander, who grew up with his grandfather and entered Ravenclaw Academy, one grade higher than the school age of the Harry trio The heroine is temporarily trading in stocks and is divided into Morgana and Qiu Zhang. The former is Gryffindor and the latter is Ravenclaw, both of whom are in the same grade as the protagonist Goldfinger is a system that requires brushing up on favorability. It is very interesting. The points for brushing up on important figures, passerby characters, and supporting characters are different. The protagonist's IQ is online, and he doesn't use any poisonous operations. Not only do you know how to protect yourself wisely, you also know when to change your choices based on your improvement in strength. The important thing is that this book is a true textual research. After reading Chapter 41, I didn't see any settings that violated the original work (there are private settings, but they do not violate the official settings) The protagonist's strength has improved very quickly, but it is by no means a first-grade one. The kind that refines the water of life and death and learns the iron armor spell. It seems that the author has a detailed plan for the protagonist's strength. From some private settings, it can also be seen that he is trying to maintain the balance of the protagonist's abilities so as not to overwhelm the story At the moment, at least the food and grass are expected to be immortal grass! ps: People who are familiar with me should know how much I know about official/secondary institutions 😁😁😁

The autumn vertical painting is out! Isn't this more fragrant than Liang Pei's poetry? Is this the gentle, elegant, beautiful and kind-hearted Qiu Zhang in your minds?

From the current point of view, this book is good, the plot is not censorious, it does not force pretentiousness, and it does not force intrigue. The male protagonist also has a very good personality. The golden finger is very strong, but not exaggerated. The male protagonist himself is also low-key and stable and developing. In the current plot, I had my first confrontation (crossed out) with Lao Deng and had a friendly exchange. It is not unreasonable to pretend to be a prophet. After all, the prophet in Harry Potter is originally a confused existence. It is not unreasonable to say that the male protagonist has talents in his dreams. Look forward to the next article. If the author continues to develop steadily, this book still has great potential. You can vote! I am a little confused now whether the character Morgana is a real green tea (derogatory) or just a pure and unscrupulous person, although I was a Qiu party member from the beginning 🤓 Qiu is definitely one of the top beauties in the original work!

Heir to the three largest arms dealers in Europe

To be honest, I prefer Morgana as the heroine. The movie version of Zhang Qiu has already formed a fixed impression in my mind. When I mention Zhang Qiu, this is the picture in my mind. I feel that the original heroine is better.

If it is important to learn the magic bloodline, the protagonist's high bloodline qualifications feel so weak. The proficiency of magic increases a little bit over and over again. Like Harry Potter, who is good at flying, he is so good at flying for the first time. The proficiency at the beginning is definitely not the apprentice level of 0 points. The protagonist feels that he is not good at anything, and it all depends on adding points and practice. This B-level bloodline makes people feel very strange. The system opens the upper limit of the protagonist and locks the qualifications at the same time. The writing is good, but the reading is weird and tasteless.

Stomach ache, really, stomach ache. Just, Mo Jiana, if you don't have the life of a literary youth, don't write the plot of this youth disease. What's the point of writing this character? He's a pure tool? To introduce Arthur plot? But after you introduce Arthur's plot, you can directly become friends, right? Don't make a three-year agreement. That's fine and normal. You write a three-year agreement and everyone will look forward to it in three years. It doesn't matter whether it's Shura Field or it doesn't matter if it's a scumbag. You wrote a reasonable ending. It is really reasonable, but it is also really stomach-ache and disgusting. It's like it's been mentioned over and over in more than 300 chapters, and then all of a sudden, you know what I mean. Then let's talk about the plot related to Arthur, Merlin, but Merlin is just making soy sauce now, it's just a decoration. The plot of Morgana's remnant soul in the Middle Ages, which has been laid out for a long time, has no follow-up. Of course, I know it will unfold later, but now it seems that this remnant soul really has no meaning. You have left her idle for too long, and many of the plot arrangements in the middle give people the impression that they are just a hammer and a stick, whatever comes to mind. I always feel like you are getting confused as you write.

The stock trading article has been withdrawn. There is no need to write a protagonist who is an emotional idiot.

I suddenly remembered that I have a pretty good autumn photo

Is there a possibility? I think Morgana's writing is good and quite likable. Qiu is just a tool person, which is not good.

Qiu's emotional experience can be said to be a process of continuous degradation: I once deeply loved a hero who was known as the perfect hero in the world, and he also loved me deeply, but he was separated from me by yin and yang; I thought that the savior star could lead me out of the haze, but he was burdened with heavy responsibilities and had no extra affection for me. He could save the world, but he could not save me; I thought that the star of salvation could lead me out of the haze. We can go hand in hand with good people, but in the end things don't work out... Then let's say goodbye to it all. There will never be anyone in Hogwarts, the wizarding world, or this world who can understand me, love me, love me, and be with me for the rest of my life like Cedric. Choose an ordinary person from another world who is far away from all my memories and end this life.

There is no need for the golden finger of the protagonist to pretend to be mediocre. It is easier for good students to gain friendship and good grades than ordinary students. It is not like in fantasy novels where other people will sigh "This kid is as scary as expected". There is no need to pretend to have no talent. Isn't it good to use golden fingers to develop quickly? In the next few years, each one will be more dangerous than the last.

First of all, it is a bit poisonous to create a Morgana that is difficult for the system to recognize.

Wherever the poison hurts, it will kill directly 💀 It's free and I can hardly watch it 1. Limited magic power is a normal phenomenon, so you have to add a bracket to say "I am here to suppress the protagonist's strength" 2. Create people The heroine can only raise the corners of her mouth, raising them at every turn, and raising them crazily 3. It's so magical, I even took a breath, it's global warming 4. The operation is like kunai stabbing Susan, and the flames help the sun block the magma. Facing the picture of a chocolate frog and the monster with raised mouth corners next to it, the road-crazy pig-head sits as steady as an old dog, as quiet as a blind monk, only knows how to mess with a broken system, and turns a blind eye to everything around him 5. The song of the founder of the branch is simply like a literary star coming to earth, the reincarnation of a great writer, with such literary talent, it can only be found in the sky but not on the earth Such a masterpiece, neither salty nor bland, tastes great, look! Show me them all! I can't be the only one seeing this! A must-read for every Harry Potter fan! 😆

Glenn's vertical painting is here! The little mixed-race wizard, I love it! !

To be honest, I just like to read Hermione novels. There are so many fanfics. If I count them all, there really aren't that many Hermione novels. Not at all! I don't know where the excuse for the heroine Hermione who is talked about every day comes from. It's just a stereotype that was formed long ago when the Hermione novel appeared🤨, and... Without Hermione, it wouldn't be Harry Potter.

After reading a few chapters, well, it would be better if the author could describe women more normally. A child, Luo Shen Ci and various exquisite descriptions. An adult can be fascinated by a child. I think the author's thoughts are very dangerous.

That Arthur is really annoying. He didn't pay at the beginning and then acted like a green tea. This woman is so annoying.

Does the author like thieves or robbers? There is no need to arrange this kind of role as a heroine

I've only read a few chapters, but I don't want to read anymore. I don't understand the point of pretending to be mediocre. If you are exposed, you can get redemption points faster and have more opportunities. Skills and redemption points are what you want, people want to be ruined😅😅 The heroine is not likeable as soon as she appears.

La la la, the supporting building is here, welcome all friends to come here and chat. Supporter: name College: such as one of the four colleges of Hogwarts, other magic schools Appearance characteristics: can be described in detail Relationship with the Harry trio: friendly, hostile The author will read it every day, and the personality and specialties will be adjusted according to the needs of the plot.

I knew that Morgana as soon as she appeared, so I didn't need to read it.

After reading a few chapters, I just want to know if the author wants to make the protagonist a psychopath? The front foot also said that if you want to be a good person, the back foot will explore other people's secrets, and I can't give you any favorability points.

I'm here to post a small suggestion, just take a look at it 1. A single female protagonist Qiu or two female protagonists plus Fleur or Morgana will be fine, I have no objection 2. Glenn's first school year can be spent peacefully, and if nothing happens, just brush up Lao Deng's favorability, and start troubles from Harry Potter It's good to start special enrollment 3. If Glenn will participate in the Triwizard Tournament, don't add Cedric. If you take away the autumn that was originally his, don't let him come to Avada to eat the big melon. Although Harry has become mature since Cedric's fourth year, he will find a better way, right? 4. There must be a dance in the Triwizard Tournament. Don't miss the rare sugar-sprinkling session. Don't compete with the protagonist for Cedric. Cedric's prototype is gentle and gentle, unlike the novel where Cedric became a Death Eater in order to compete for Cho Chang. This is too fake 5. Can Sirius not die? I have always liked the author's understanding of Sirius in the last book. Besides, Harry can pass the Triwizard Tournament and learn Occlumency with the help of Sirius and become mature. Sirius' death is a huge blow to Harry 6. How does the author plan to make Harry Potter meet Glenn and become good friends? 7. In addition, during the Battle of Hogwarts, the protagonist has graduated according to his age. How should he participate in the battle? Or stay in school as a professor or teaching assistant? 8. When Voldemort came to power for the second time, Glenn's grandfather Garrick Ollivander was killed. The protagonist would definitely not do this, so how to avoid it? Hey, I have made so many suggestions. Do you want to add more suggestions?

Let me give you a small suggestion. There is one point that makes me uncomfortable to watch. That is when the protagonist mentions to Dumbledore that he has the ability to predict. It is disgusting to pretend to be a prophet by knowing the plot. The prophecies in the Harry Potter world are very abstract and vague. Whether it is the centaurs' stargazing, they are as confusing as the hexagrams, or the divination, which only knows the results but not the process, is as vague. This leads to the fact that the world of Harry Potter will not change in any way even if it knows the prophecy, and it will even become a part of the prophecy because of the prophecy. (For example, Voldemort might have died in a different way if it hadn't been for the prophecy) And in order to increase credibility, the protagonist said that he had seen it in a dream and could see part of the future. This was too strong. Being strong is not a problem, the problem is that such a strong ability is a prophecy! If your ability to predict is so strong, can you still predict in the future? After all, it's fake, I just know the plot. Being able to predict means that the plot is unchanged and boring. The problem is big if you can't predict it. Should you predict it but not say it? Adding to Dumbledore's suspicion. It still cannot be predicted that the previous prediction was just a deception, which only increased Dumbledore's suspicion. A dispensable ability is added to a completely unnecessary plot and suddenly becomes a bug! The irrationality of the plot came out, it was very sad! So I thought of two solutions myself. First, Dumbledore is a fool. Readers can just tolerate it and forget about the prophecy in the future. Second, let's customize a prophecy ability for the protagonist. Just think that the protagonist wants the ability to turn disaster into good luck! It doesn't need to be too strong, just predict certain parts of your life and battles. It can not only add some interest, but also increase Dumbledore's favorability by prophesying, making it more reasonable to participate in certain plots. Don't predict other people. Firstly, I'm afraid the author won't be able to control the plot. Secondly, for those who have villains and conspirators, even if they don't play Werewolf, they know to kill the prophet first, right? (Unless their villain has been reduced to intelligence) Of course this is just a personal suggestion. It depends on the author's choice!

Are there any novels where the heroine is Luna (◕ᴗ◕✿)

This is not poisonous at all. I really can't stand it anymore. I keep eating books. The front part is a lot different from the back part. Can you write a big idea, bro?