Eldest Sister Traveled Through Time

It's true. I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. Does the author have any brains? The mountains are full of peeled bark, and they are already eating mud. How many months can a family eat river mussels? OK, it doesn't matter. There was nothing in the mountains. As soon as the heroine went there, she found nothing to eat. The key was to catch a chicken that laid eggs? I can still catch pheasants that lay eggs when no one has eaten, me? ? It's OK that pheasants can eat bugs. Maybe this pheasant is better at finding food, so after catching the pheasant and not eating it, it actually has to be raised and fed to the pheasant! This is my bottom line! ! When the whole family is cooking a sweet potato, they have to share the food with the pheasants! What a naughty operation! What's logic! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? 🙏

Very poisonous so please be careful. The heroine's three views are basically Long Aotian. She was able to steal things from other people's fields and was found out by the landlord, but she was still confident. She didn't have enough money to buy medicine and the clerk wouldn't let her go back to get it. She was supposed to, but she acted like someone else was humiliating her (the pharmacy clerk didn't say anything at all). She was absolutely sick.

Can't the heroine call herself "I"? "Big Sister" is too awkward to pronounce

The eldest sister who has traveled through time, you are a burning legend in my heart, I will support you in building your building! ✊✊

The writing style of this article is still good and the word count is good. However, the author lacks common sense in life, and some parts of his writing are illogical. There are a lot of problems with not enough space to consider.

I laughed when I saw Chapter 9. River mussels are stewed with smilax, and the heroine's family is dehydrated due to diarrhea, and the whole play ends.

Logic issues still need work! For example, that river mussel, not only whether it can be eaten for so long, but whether it can be raised for so long is another question. And if there is a severe drought, why is there well water? If there was water, others would have planted it long ago. During severe droughts, the most scarce thing is water. Also, I feel that there are too few descriptions of the family members. Sometimes people feel like they are just tool people, and the characters are not flesh and blood enough.

Come on 🤭🤭🤭

I like this kind of article without fighting over the best. It's good for my family.

I want to be an operations officer for DaDa, please improve me!

This is not a good start when escaping from the wilderness. Wherever the people in the wilderness pass, not a blade of grass grows. The hungry red-eyed mice, the grass, and the bark of the trees have all been eaten, and there is no way there is any left, and even people cannibalize people. The most important thing is that wherever the deserters pass, there are many bandits. It is very dangerous to be alone outside at this time. You must form a group with your fellow villagers. Otherwise, if you are alone outside, people around you will see you as weak and will be knocked unconscious and eaten.

I have read Chapter 170 of this article. The main reasons why I persisted for so long are: first, this article insists on farming and doing business, and does not write romantic dramas under the guise of farming; second, it insists on the heroine working hard to find a way to make a fortune on her own, without opening the story, she saves a prince and general in distress and then reaches the peak of life with the help of the hero. I just want to see how the heroine survived and prospered on her own in ancient times. Although there are a lot of flaws and unreasonable places, but since the heroine can only open up the situation on her own, everyone should just turn a blind eye. It's almost halfway through the article if I don't read any further, but the author's narrative style and expression have not improved. So~~, goodbye

The titles are messy, and the character introductions are also messy. . .

I really can't stand it. What the hell? Is the author over 5 years old?

This self-proclaimed statement is so annoying. The author lacks common sense in life and takes many things for granted.

I can't stand it after reading a few chapters. The sentences don't make sense and the details don't stand up to scrutiny. I've wasted all my ideas.

Three golden chapters. The author didn't even think carefully about the first chapter before publishing it, leaving him speechless. The original version of Manchuan didn't even change the wrong sentences. If it weren't for the novel theme of escaping from famine, this chapter would really be a persuasion.

A good plot was ruined by the author's primary schoolboy narration. I suggest the author turn on the audio and listen to it to see if he can remove unnecessary auxiliary words in the text, which will greatly affect the smooth reading. As for the logic that defies heaven, I can tolerate it here.

Why are there so many people complaining about it and so many people reading it and why is it so popular? I took a look and found that most of them are old bookworms and say that the author is not rigorous enough and many details are not well written. As an old bookworm, I would like to express my humble opinion. I feel that the logic and details are still lacking. I personally prefer the exile novel, but I can't stand it. However, I came across this book several times for no reason, so I read it carefully for a while, but I feel that the author has room for improvement. At least I didn't see any typos or anything like that. Anyway, keep up the good work.

This is the first time I listened to Geng Tian Wen. I listened to more than 20 episodes elsewhere and there were no updates. So I searched here and downloaded it from Ai Pu. I couldn't put it down after listening to it.

I wanted to read a real story about ancient farming, and I thought the subject matter was good. However, as I looked at it, I realized that the heroine has a bit of a golden finger. Not only does she have modern knowledge and experience, but she can also have dreams that predict the future! Moreover, the screenwriter's idea is too beautiful and too easy. It simply cannot match the background setting of "Escape". It seems unrealistic or cannot withstand scrutiny, and even lacks common sense! Take greenhouse cultivation as an example. What conditions are needed to grow vegetables? Soil (fertility), water, temperature, and sunlight are basic elements, and none of them can be missing! If you want to bear fruit, you have to consider the issue of pollination! In ancient times, when people were fleeing from drought, even if all the above conditions could be met, they would still be greatly compromised compared to modern times, so the results should be discounted accordingly! You can't get the same gains as in modern times under conditions where everything is lacking and everything is imperfect! Of course, there is another situation where nature is not enough and the day after tomorrow makes up for it! The conditions in ancient times were poor, but there was no automation at all, so manual efforts were needed to make up for it! The control of indoor temperature and humidity is something that an inexperienced person can just come over and add a few pieces of firewood and sprinkle some water! You should put more thought into it, at least let readers see your efforts, so that you can deserve the rewards you deserve, right? So, it is obviously a down-to-earth farming article, but it is written in an unrealistic way. In addition, the bigger the gold finger is, the easier it is to get it. It is like blowing water. There is nothing to look forward to.

I wanted to read book reviews before I went in to read them But what are the book reviews about? ? ? ? A bunch of people posted a bunch of messy pictures, how about commenting here? I'm afraid it's also rubbish