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The character design and the plot are all great, but the fact that the heroine wins repeatedly is really embarrassing. They say that one general can achieve great success. After fighting so many battles, none of the key figures on the heroine's side died, and the victorious general Bai Qi is not that good. I just feel that the author has such a good writing style, and it feels like a pity that the writing is similar to that brainless cool article. Appropriate sacrifices can sublimate the whole article. The ending of the happy ending is not suitable for military literature. Both sides of many wars in history have paid huge sacrifices. I also don't understand the heroine's feelings about war. War is a very cruel thing at any time. Rivers of blood flow and wives and children are separated. The heroine should have a lot of feelings for the heroine. Every battle should be touched by the heroine. Paying attention to people's livelihood is very important, but the impact of war is no less than that of people's livelihood. I look forward to another ancient military novel with ups and downs from the author!

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Oops, Duan Shumei, don't be fooled. Don't let anything happen to your eldest son's family. You must defend Xiangyang.

I haven't read at Qidian for a long time, so I don't have a monthly pass. I finally got one today, so congratulations on the completion. Sprinkle flowers~

The Xiaoxiang comment section was deserted. I read it over there and came here to comment. Is there anyone like me? 😂😂😂

Seeing that a young lady is so playful, although it also refers to a young girl, most of it refers to concubines and prostitutes. A drama, a drama, hahaha. Add one more child. The little lady sounds better.

It's my favorite article, but it's a bit less updated. 😂😂

The introduction is very exciting~ I would like to make a suggestion, can the male protagonist be called Cui Wan?🤭 If you agree, please give me a like😁 So thin🥵

I hate Cui Zigeng so much. I'm so annoyed that there's a male comparison in the story about a strong woman and a strong woman is stronger than a strong man. I can see him in every chapter and it's even more annoying.

It's over. It's obviously very well written, and the heroine is getting stronger and growing, but I can't help but compare it to another similar novel about a heroine. I expected the heroine to use trickery and force to gather civil and military ministers, and slowly grow bigger. However, in the end, she was always tied to the male protagonist, and the feeling was still the same. Because they work together, the male protagonist can become a fierce and famous general by virtue of his gender, while the female protagonist will always be looked down upon by others because of her gender. As expected, it is better to wait until the other one is finished before reading it, otherwise you will always feel that emmm love interests affect the heroine's success🫠🫠

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Every book written by Tao Zi🍑 has been read more than three times. It is so exciting. Every word is filled with smiles and half-stepped-up jujube nails 😁

All the characters in this book are more vivid and three-dimensional, and each person's character growth path creates different choices for each person. The heroine's grandfather, mother, father, grandfather, eldest sister, second sister, eldest brother, etc. Have a series of character and life choices. No one will assimilate with others, and no one will agree with others. All living beings are really different.

Great, Tao Zi has published a new book. I'm really looking forward to it. I'm really looking forward to it. From the Empress, to Huaixiu, from the poisonous Granny, to the face-paralleled Chi, I read every book and loved it, especially "Wu Zuo". After I ordered it all, I kept it at the top of my list, but I couldn't bear to finish it. I finally waited until Tao Zi opened a new book. In this way, I can finally finish the last book in a down-to-earth manner, and I am not afraid of reading Tao Zi's book. Taozi has actually been able to become a god a long time ago. The books she writes are all wonderful and the characters she creates are interesting. They are better than those written by many so-called great gods and Platinum. Especially in "Wu Zuo", not only are the characters vivid and the dialogues lively, but there are deep and complex human nature behind each case, and there are repeated tortures of the soul. It is worth pondering. It is really the best among the best. Looking forward to what kind of excitement Duan Yi will bring us next👍👍👍

Afraid of being poisonous, I bought the final chapter first and read it. At the end, there are two heroes, the male and female protagonists. I don't quite understand this ending, because it is actually impossible for the two countries to merge peacefully. Let's not talk about whether the male and female rulers have the same philosophy of governing the country. The merger of the two countries not only means having a common emperor (the child of the male and female protagonists), but also the merger of two political organizations. Even if the male and female protagonists can rule the country together, what about the people under their command? Working hard to conquer the world, who would want to be inferior to others? I was originally the chief officer, why should I become a deputy just because the two countries merged (the male and female master and their child became the throne)? Why doesn't the author write about running the country after the merger of the two countries? Because this will inevitably lead to fierce conflict until one side wins and the other side is destroyed.

I like Taozi's books because they are really connotative and have three correct views. For example, Taozi's previous book "The Affair of a Famous Family" basically mirrors historical facts to a certain extent, except that Fang Gong is a member of the Wei royal family in history; and the author's three views expressed through the use of characters are also very broad. The connotation of Taozi's book is that she inadvertently integrates the knowledge she knows into the text (of course, the book is fictional, and there will be less historical facts). Unlike the authors mentioned by some readers below, who admit that they have to go online and use keywords to find poems in order to write poems... And Taozi does not just give gold medals to characters casually. It refers to something similar to "After drinking, you become so awesome that you kill others and kill Buddhas. In the end, if you encounter any difficulties, just drink some wine..." This kind of golden finger is very refreshing but has no connotation. It feels fresh after reading it once or twice. If it appears repeatedly in the text, it will inevitably give readers a sense of tastelessness. It is precisely because Taozi did not choose the above-mentioned "golden finger", but made the protagonist gradually become stronger, so some people can't help but feel that the writing is a bit slow... Readers who cannot tolerate this, my evaluation is that you can read the real cool novels... Don't go to the book circle, otherwise, as a famous quote from the protagonist of a classic online article - "In the eyes of Tang San, you already have a way to die." After all, if people are unhappy, they will go on a killing spree, which is also an unavoidable point of happiness in the happy articles advocated by some people downstairs.

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The top work on the ranking list, this one really has no water at all, there is no voting rebate activity, all the friends who voted are doing it for love, 👏🏻

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Taozi's writing is really adorable. The heroine is wise and powerful, and she is very capable of attacking people. She dreams of becoming the heroine in Taozi's writings 😁😁😁😁

So pretty! The parallels are so intense! Looking forward to this book! Tao Zi Da will update during the Spring Festival! I finished reading these three chapters of yours in ten minutes! By the way, I cast three recommendation votes

It's ugly, and the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist. The male protagonist gets all the benefits, but the Qianzhou Army is directly given to the male protagonist. The male protagonist is a weirdo. His face is thicker than the city wall

If you want to start an industry, you have no foundation. You can't get rubber, you can't make air tightness well, you can't make earth-made steel, and it's hard to even get your own piece of land. The economic foundation in ancient times is labor, and labor is destined to be a male society. Men are the pillars, and men's scholars are the main ones. Body, it is too difficult for a woman to promote industry. We have to change the social structure, have enough productivity, and ensure that policies are implemented all the time. People cannot destroy the government. The product that is produced is food, and it can only be done through continuous breeding. There are no chemical fertilizers, no pesticides, no For genetic modification, it still depends on whether someone will seize the fruits. It is destined to have an army. There must be enough off-duty warriors. Social atmosphere must also be considered, and geography must be ensured. In a place of great shape, not in a place of four battles, you must have enough prestige to command the army. You cannot be too far away from the army. , Otherwise nothing can be guaranteed. If you don't live with the big-headed soldiers, your prestige is destined to be that of a general. However, if the general's prestige is too high, you must prevent rebellion. Without prestige, the efficiency of policy implementation varies greatly. Anyway, it feels very difficult. I hope the author can write well and give some suggestions.

I stayed up late to read it! Some people were very moved. When I saw that in the middle and later stages, I had been fantasizing about the wedding scene of the male and female protagonists, and the aftermath of jointly governing the country, but the ending actually happened on the wedding day. I was a little bit unsatisfied. When I saw the title "Complete", I was stunned for a long time. I think the biggest advantage of this article for me is that the opening chapter is particularly eye-catching, and then there are a lot of funny things, and I was rolling around on the bed laughing while reading it. The group portraits are also very exciting. I really like watching them fight back and forth. The people who follow the heroine are all vivid and have their own characteristics. There are also two clues about King Zheng's remaining forces, the Golden Ripple Organization and the Mountain and River Seal, which are well buried. It was really shocking when it was revealed that the murderer in the beginning was the heroine's father. What I personally feel is lacking is that the golden corrugated tissue in the beginning is particularly powerful, but later on it feels so easy to kill. It feels like the heroine can kill whatever she can, and she can also kill the group fights that cannot be killed. The Tian Qi (original lord of Xiangyang City), the heroine's father, and the villain Shen Qing'an all died very easily, especially Shen Qing'an's death which was caught off guard. The regent who was later attacked by foreign enemies felt that he was not as powerful as the previous three. Also, there are really too few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. This may be because the whole article involves a lot of content and is not very long. I feel that if I write it in more detail, this article could be much longer. I am quite interested in the female protagonist who is engaged in infrastructure construction and governing the country, but it is a pity that I did not write it in detail. I felt the moments when the male protagonist liked the female protagonist. I can't remember the moments or scenes when the female protagonist liked the male protagonist. It seemed that it was because the male protagonist was strong, beautiful and suitable? Wouldn't it be better to add some shared experiences, such as heroes saving beauties, blocking knives in battles, or pulling the heroine out when she is in danger? And as Master Qi said, the time the hero and heroine meet is really short, which makes people feel that the relationship is not very deep. I personally like the "respect each other as guests" love model, and it turns out that the hero and heroine are more "straight" than I thought. It seems that the heroine's biggest reaction to the hero is blushing, and neither of them hold hands. Let's just say! Hey, the old mother looked really helpless. After watching the movie, sometimes I felt that the two of them should pursue their careers separately. It seemed that the marriage would be okay without getting married, and the male protagonist was too lazy to run around. Those pigeons lining up had a profound impact. Haha, it suddenly occurred to me that the male protagonist should be quite powerful, but there was no chance to see him perform, so he started chasing his wife. And it seems that only the male protagonist and the female protagonist are the best match. I don't see any other boys of the same age who are particularly powerful or outstanding. I originally thought that Prince Su was very cute, but it turned out that the female protagonist was careless. It's a pity. It's a pity. If he puts some thought and is more prudent, he won't have no chance. I feel so emotional, I felt a bit unsatisfied after reading it.

How to write an outline? Should the male protagonist become emperor or the female protagonist? Can I buy different sizes?