Konoha Tenten's Black Ninja Technique

From the reader's point of view, the author is too self-indulgent and has too many private goods; from the author's own point of view, he is too neurotic, cynical and resentful, and looks like a rebellious brat. If he is not a brat, then go see a psychiatrist as soon as possible. Sincerely, it will be very helpful!

Burn incense, burn incense, let's burn incense together to bless you. People who understand will understand.

By the way, Tiantian still has space talent, but he is not a direct descendant of Hokage.

There are too many private goods, and it affects the viewing experience, which is unbearable. The content itself is actually quite good, but it's a pity. I hope the author can get rid of this problem in the future. Private goods refer to various things that are not necessary to promote the plot and affect the viewing experience. There is no need to criticize me. The author of this novel writes however he likes and it has nothing to do with me. I am nothing. I have no investment, no reward, and no subscription, right? PS: What is this work related to? Why do so many novels insist on writing the setting at the beginning of the article? It is not troublesome enough to have to manually skip it every time. You don't have the ability to dilute the setting into the plot without affecting my viewing experience, so just follow the example of others and put it at the beginning of the article. If you can't listen to the good words, you have to speak openly.

All birds can fly onto a branch and become a phoenix, except pigeons😡

How long can you live if you transform into a human being? I won't watch it, but come on. To be honest, the transformation tattoo invented by zz is disgusting? There are very few Diablo-themed novels. Isn't the male protagonist cool?

Author, what do you want to express? Is it a shortcoming of the ninja system, an insinuation, or simply wanting to describe a girl who rebels because of war and strength?

The main character always makes a lot of analysis, and I can't stand it anymore.

I think this book is well written, at least for my taste. I don't really care about some people saying that Tenten is too invincible or too weak. What I want to see is how Tenten treats the entire world, how he treats ordinary people, how he treats his past partners, how he treats himself, and even how he treats the entire era of ninjas and the future in the Naruto world after he has the power. When Tiantian analyzed Hashirama's chapter, I thought it was very reasonable and well-written. I really wanted to see ordinary people in the world of Naruto be able to shine as brightly as Naruto, the protagonist of the era. After all, the world still has ordinary people in the majority, right? A world where heroes decide the fate of the era is always sad, isn't it? It's better for the majority of people to decide the fate of the world, right? Moreover, Naruto himself does not have the talents of a national leader, and it is impossible to know how to do what is truly good for ordinary people and the country. Some people say that the author of this book is too self-indulgent. What I want to say is which fan fiction writer is not self-excited. It is impossible for the protagonist of the novel to be tortured from beginning to end. Then will anyone read it? I don't like to watch torture of the main character. What's the point of this? Compared with those novels where the harem flow is invincible and the flow is infinite, the world is the map and ordinary people are the background. This book can be said to be quite realistic, and those are the real pleasures. I would like to make a suggestion, for example, write more about how the lives of ordinary people have changed, and refer to the influence of the extraordinary on ordinary people in Lord of Mysteries.

When I read more than 30 chapters, a large amount of literary youth content suddenly appeared in succession, which greatly affected the reading experience. As a result, I couldn't bring myself to continue reading for two days in a row (I guess it was too boring today). My opinion is: moderate literary youth is okay, but excessive literary youth is sick. This is an online article after all, not a chicken soup article. Author, I can accept even if you spread encyclopedia knowledge in a large volume, but I can't stand too much literary youth.

Reminds me of a book called Unscientific Tiantian Chuan

After reading the first ten chapters, I kept explaining and explaining. An anime fanfiction that is as popular as science is too discouraging. There is no plot at all, and the records are like a bad ledger. I can't stand it.

As a result, five months have passed. . Time goes so fast

Hmm... Settings with thousands of words suddenly appear in the name, which is uncomfortable. There are also hundreds or even thousands of words of comments about Naruto suddenly appearing, which makes it even more uncomfortable. It's not like I can't understand Naruto.

Chapter 4 What is this? It made my head hurt a little. Are you a young artist?

Incense

Author, your book contains too much discussion. This is a novel, not an academic journal. Does your crazy interpretation of the original make sense? The most important thing about a novel is the plot. I read the first four chapters and I think your book could be renamed "On the No Political Form of Social Structure in [Naruto]"

I just want to ask if the protagonist has a record. Nowadays, many Naruto thieves dare not touch the original characters. The protagonist only looks at a group of powerful people, but the result is that one person cannot be killed by the record. I have to force those guys to live. I feel deeply disgusted and please tell me.