Big Demon in the Cloud

Another book has been lost. 😰😰😰

This book is really good. I just read the first dozen or so chapters and it seems to be a good sign. I hope the author can write well and be less aggressive and sign a good contract and then it will be stable. To be honest, the quality of the books about demon cultivators is really poor. Most of them are demons in the front and no different from human beings in the back. It's really not good to read. Now that I see that this book has just been published, I am really afraid that a good book will die prematurely, so I have a few suggestions for the author: 1. Several brothers have already said that it is right not to avoid transvestites, because many people who read demon cultivators want to see the cultivation of immortals from a different perspective, so they do not want transvestites. However, I think it is not a stick to kill the human form. It should be that the human form in the early stage is for the purpose of being in the human world. As a tool for world action, it is almost a trend to change into a human form when you are powerful, but the key point is to have the characteristics of a demon. Can you, a demon, behave like a human all day long? 2. The three views are mainly determined by the author himself. I can only say that the Holy Mother, dark anti-humanity, etc. Are not the way to go (unless you want to take the niche route). Now the novel has three major plot points that persuade people to give up. , Settings, and three views are really worthy of the author's careful consideration. 3 The author is now in the beginning period. I really hope that the author can grasp the golden stage at the beginning so that the subsequent writing will be much easier. At least he will not go into the palace (no offense, this book is a good seedling). The plot at the beginning does not need to be too hasty and unfolds at once. Settings can be taken slowly and thrown away. Settings are not very good. There are many now. People don't want to be "open" because of this. In short, the strength should not be lower than the average level. It is still okay to have a 50-50 openness. Things like golden fingers... Whether it is necessary or not depends on the type of writing the author wants to write. The setting should be the best and reasonable. In short, don't be wrong, and there is always a textual researcher to set the pace. This should be paid attention to. 4 Finally, I hope that the author can write the book according to his own wishes. The book friends provide suggestions in the hope that the work will be improved and the flaws will be corrected, rather than forcing the author to write a book that they are satisfied with. I hope the author can write this book well. To be honest, I haven't written so many comments for a long time... Mainly because this book made me feel a little bit like I used to read about demon cultivators. I still remember that I read a book about demon cultivators 10 years ago, which really broke my three views on cultivating novels at that time. I was really shocked and really enjoyed reading it, but now I think In fact, the writing seems to be average, but at that time it was really good. A book about a yokai protagonist can never get tired of reading. It is very interesting. I have read several good yokai-style novels intermittently. I won't go into details now. I hope the author can create bigger surprises. Come on!

From Chasing the Demon Emperor to the Great Demon in the Clouds, I really like the books written by Death Dragon (old birds fly first). His books are different from other authors. Other authors are either invincible or drunk, but the book "The Great Demon in the Clouds" is a refreshing stream of fairy tales. Come on Ollie. Brothers vote together🤭🤭🤭

Brother, it's rare for me to find a good book. Can you stop being a eunuch?

Today, I will kill this dead dragon. Let's have some fun together. Kill this dead dragon.

Everyone, the dead dragon (the old bird flies first) can get a little tired. Everyone, please understand Death Dragon. Death Dragon codes very late every day. It has been updated three times in the past few days. I'm a little tired of updating the dead dragon. I hope you can understand. Thank you (*°∀°). (Dead dragon, don't delete it, be careful I'll kill you) 😆😆😆

I love the beauty and thin makeup the most. There are waves wherever the love river runs out. The clouds, grass and trees shine together, The mid-night clouds are the companion of the autumn clouds. Nobita's authentic work rests on the dangerous mountain, The demon Hu is about to arrive at the Palace of Eternal Life. Understand that earthly things are irrelevant,

As a qualified book club, how can we not have idiom solitaire? Do whatever you want

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The author is trying to wipe out the last bit of popularity. I have seen updates every three days, weekly updates, monthly updates and even quarterly updates. Your update once every six months is too much.

It's been 18 days. According to the rules of going to the hospital for examination three days after catching a cold and then being quarantined for 14 days, it seems that the author did not hide away. Silence 🕯️🕯️🕯️

Nowadays, apart from Lan Ke Qi Yuan, this is the only novel about immortality. Although it is a little small, it attracts me as much as it did in the early days of Lan Ke. I hope the author can continue writing, and I will do my little bit to invest first.

Emm suddenly thought that Yun Zhongjun is in his 40s and Yao is 1 or 2 years old, so does this count as an eagle eating a young deer?

It is a rare novel about demon cultivators, especially in this book shortage period, but there is one thing that I hope the author will pay more attention to. The protagonist has been an eagle for 40 years🦅 and has also lived an eagle life for 40 years. 40 Years feels a bit too long. It is enough to "assimilate" a normal person's thinking into an animal's thinking. Even if it cannot be completely "assimilated", the protagonist's character and spirit will definitely be affected to some extent. You know, a person who is alone in the mountains and forests for 10 years (note that I am talking about a person without any modern appliances and living like a savage for 10 years) can become a formal human being, but his behavioral habits are different from normal people. Not to mention it has been a long 40 years, and he has completely transformed into a bird. After all, the protagonist was just an ordinary young man (around 20 years old) in his previous life, with no spiritual training. In his second life, he became a newborn eagle. In order to survive, he must definitely learn the eagle's hunting, flying and other behavioral habits. The second one is that I hope the author can create a real demon protagonist for us. Don't be like some other novels where you learn the human system of cultivating immortals for the sake of cultivation, and go around licking the powerful human beings. In the end, you become neither a human nor a monster, neither a god nor a monster. It sounds nice to be a monster, but in fact, neither gods nor monsters agree. Okay, that's all for now. I hope the author's book will be a big hit. Come on😊

Let's set up the role of Yao

An eagle practices tiger-grinding boxing, or a bear practices boxing?

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Yunzhongjun is one of several gods second only to the supreme god Taiyi in the Jiuge mythology system. He is the Lord of Yunmengze and the ruthless immortal.

Dead dragon, I am infected with the cold, so it is inconvenient to update recently. Please forgive me.

Predict the overall score. Now I have achieved more than 100,000 words. It is just a strong recommendation of new books, plus category recommendations and Sanjiang, various scattered recommendations on the homepage, and then look at the recommendation votes. I've already done some watery stuff. According to my many years of experience, the score of this book is tentatively estimated at 80,000 yuan, and within 150,000 yuan. If the average price is above 3,000, it should be a high-quality product, but the subscription ratio may not be high. The premise is (fast update, good quality, no intelligence halo. )

I'm wondering what to call the baby of a deer and an eagle

I'm here, come on, dead dragon (given by Ollie)

I spent so much time writing comments to encourage you before, but it turned out to be a eunuch. Are you really not going to write anymore?

I took it out and took a look at it again. What a pity. I really liked this novel.

Why haven't we written such a good book?

It's very beautiful. Come on brother.

I really like it, but the number of words is too short, please try your best

The background of the story of this book is that the protagonist transforms into an eagle after traveling through time. Because his life expectancy is approaching, he has no choice but to take risks and try the so-called "eagle's rebirth" in his previous life. After experiencing all kinds of torture, when he was about to die, he transformed into a monster in the spring thunder of Jingzhe, calling himself Yunzhongjun. Then he met a big monster in the form of a monster in the mountains, so he took the opportunity to join the other party's cave and began to practice formally. This book is a rare and flavorful fairy novel. The rhythm and style are similar to "The Deer Monster Chases the Deer". However, the protagonist of this book has a tough character, a firm will, a steady and mature character, and is decisive. Therefore, it is more focused on the traditional classical fairy tale. ----Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Book Desolation" Shu Huang comes to us!!!

Following the trend of the novel, the deer demon chasing the deer has not been updated, this book has no direction of plagiarism.

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